damack1957 commented on Mike Arram's story chapter in Chapter 8
I feel like I should have seen this coming. Learning about the sexual background of Anton and other previous remarks he has made shows his lack of proper judgement. I sure hope that Rup is up to par on his fencing.
I found that this story line was well within the synopsis. I fully enjoyed the story and development of the characters. I'm not sure but I think you have written more along this line. Yahoo to the author for such a wonderful idea.
Sincerely and Best wishes
damack1957 commented on BHopper2's story chapter in Coming Home
Having read this after reading Guardian Force, it is nice to see that Aeris is allowed a life and a fulfilling one at that. Nice touch to give us this view of a character who I want to follow closely. Great work BHopper2!!!