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    This is such a great idea! I know I usually always want more, but I can also see the appeal of only getting snippets, like this little glimpse of Clive and Erik. BTW, in one of those strange (or freaky) coincidences, I was trying to explain what a fire marshal is to my daughter today. Since we're Swedish, those words don't exactly come up in conversation on a regular basis. And then I read your story! Weird...
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    Chapter 5

    Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Oh, Vladi... That was not a good way to handle that particular conversation. I get they are both cagey about being honest, but it's so sad to see Viktor retreat so far behind his wall. How will he deal with all those feelings, his longing for Nobu? Very interesting to get to know more of Vladi though. Not the brute you might expect...
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    Chapter 19

    Puppilull commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Aaaah... So glad Peter could understand Wade's actions. He may not like it, but he seems to be able to live with it. More lovely fluff. I like the fluff! LOL
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    I've been thinking about the title question. My first thought was 'My brother's keeper' since it both signals the nature of the relationship between the brothers and also the group as a whole, looking after each other. It is however a bit on the serious side for a story that deals with big issues in a seemingly light way. I feel it lacks a bit of 'dude'-ness... My other idea was 'I got your back', if indeed kids say that these days... A bit more relaxed.
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    Oh, that woman is a piece of work! But I trust Garrett and that hot shot lawyer to clear things up. The judge too of course. Terrible to think things like this or varieties thereof actually happen...
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    I'm beginning to repeat myself, but here goes: Read it! Just read it!
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    Well, I've said before that I'm Isaac and this us one of the things we have in common. I'm not a fluffy feely kind of person and have no interest in hand holding. People know that and still I'm constantly approached by people needing advice and confide in me. They know I tell them the truth, I guess.
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    I know
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    If only one of his coworkers want to ride with him, I'd say that is a problem. If it's only due to his driving is hard to tell, but the doc wanted him to smoothen his edges. So he doesn't seem to be interacting with them at work in a good way. That voice was described in a way that I didn't feel it was one of the three amigos. Wouldn't someone who sees his friend be about to get killed be begging or desperate?
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    I was just so very glad Sam didn't actually kill Ned. That would have lead him further down that path. But who was it that spoke to him? An actual voice? Something in his head? Isaac is so withdrawn inside his head he can't see his true behavior. Not a team member at all. And I agree. How did Dr Gustavo know of Prime? Is he registered as next of kin?
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    I don't know if any more than three is any added value. But feel free to wow me! The more the merrier, as they say.
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    What? Actual ones? I like Camp. Or the chapter where Isaac joins the pack. Mmm... Otherwise, anything with Isaac. If any other wolf joins the fun, I'm even happier! Oh, seeing JAR's comment, I'll say Leo, Isaac and Colt. Or Brian in a dirty mood, Isaac and Colt. Sensing a theme here...?
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    I'm more on JAR's line of thought here. The pups are played with under controlled circumstances. Not a kinky party in Berlin.
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    They don't like puppies, because it means responsibilities? An enforcer's life is hard enough without having to to deal with puppies.
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    Nice try! I know you'll just make them a snuggly corner with blankets and treats.
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    *snicker, snicker* Yes!
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    So sue me!
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    I'm just surprised. Perhaps Internet access has been much, much better in Sweden for a long time. Or I have unusual Google habits... (or Alta vista as it was back then...) Live no - seen it yes.
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    Bring it on! You're talking to a pervy Swede. Not much phases us!
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    Well, I'm sticking to my Orfeus theory. Would make sense to have the smart Beta go to the underworld and bring Colt back. And I think the guys were very innocent. I'm a straight girl and even I'm not shocked by double wide elbow deep... So a few diapers and disposal guy outfits aren't exactly shocking.
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    My first reaction was he was from the FBI or something, since he seemed to be trying to get to know Nobu. Then when he let slip he was mafia too, that changed the playing field. It's turning into gangster high, with Viktor in the middle. Dante himself seems much more happy go lucky then Nobu, Viktor and Vladi, but that could be an act. Or perhaps his family isn't threatening to kill him on a daily basis. I'm guessing there's more to him than what we first see. Now he's trying to get Nobu to side with him. Being cautious is probably wise.
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    Such a nice chapter, showing just how far the boys have come when it comes to trust. Beautiful!
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    I'm not much a writer, but I read a lot and I like a good sex scene , so I thought I'd give you my opinion. For me, having characters use condoms and being safe isn't a turn off. I think it adds a feeling of reality, that these people exist and actually are getting busy for real. Done in a good way, it can heighten my experience. At the same time, barebacking isn't a big turn on for me, so I think I'd vote for writing reality. There's always an option to write the story in another era or go for fantasy.
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    Will I Know?

    Puppilull commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Will I Know?

    That's one of the big questions. Will I know? Do I want to know...? I can't decide what's better. And then the whole issue of being ready... Maybe someday.
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    Chapter 19 (5.1)

    Puppilull commented on JulieLHayes's story chapter in Chapter 19 (5.1)

    Oh, that cabin sounds very nice! Just hope they'll get to enjoy it thoroughly without too many interruptions from Dustin...
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