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Chapter 5- September Part 2
Puppilull commented on tarzanacide's story chapter in Chapter 5- September Part 2
In a weird way I think Navid losing control when they had sex was important for their relationship. It brought a sort of equilibrium to them, with both of them heavily invested. Still, the spy phone made my spine itch a bit. Sure it's nice to get a new phone, but to have a tracking thing on it? I predict it will cause problems further on. -
Oh no! Where did Viktor go now? To confront Vladi or Nobu? Or worse still Mr Morrisson! But he wouldn't be so rash. Even though he did learn quite a lot this afternoon, turning his world upside down. Really good chapter! I held my breath along with the guys when Morrisson came back in.
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So, Casey might finally act on his feelings towards Shade? Well, at least now he doesn't have to go in blind. Megan wouldn't set him up... And he got a few more clues on Curtis. Nice of him to defend his asshole stepbrother and I hope Curtis appreciates the gesture.
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I still can't decide if coach means well or is trying to cover for himself. I hope he's genuine, but as Tim said he's not doing his job which is to teach those kids. Maybe he needs to tone down the "Save the world" thing and get to work. His athletes might need that more. Good to see Rodney making an effort. If he could just have an open conversation with Curtis... But that could be a lot to ask right now.
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Happy birthday!
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The first 3 days - Friday to Sunday
Puppilull commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The first 3 days - Friday to Sunday
You are very gifted when it comes to getting to the heart of an emotion while keeping it seemingly simple and straightforward. Empty hit me like a punch to the gut. So strong. -
I think Noah is definitely on to something there at the end. Navid is strong but not always. Noah should relaise his own strength so he's able to give it to Navid. Matters of honour and shame are difficult for us living in another context to understand, but Navid is apparently tormented. Still, he shouldn't have to throw his game to make Navid feel good. That much should a 25-year old be able to take.
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Oh no! Just hope Peter and Logan can keep their cool and not play straight into Daken's hands. I really liked that t-shirt! And the art, but I already told you that.
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Poetry Prompt 18 – Rubaiyat - Two poems
Puppilull commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 18 – Rubaiyat - Two poems
I'm glad you broke the rules. Right now, black birds sing from every roof top here in Stockholm, serenading the dusk. And each other I suspect. Such a striking image for creativity. -
I really liked that Noah got to say his piece and Navid actually listened to him. They both need to compromise to make this happen. Perhaps Navid understood that his boy is in fact a man too and needs to have somewhat of a life of his own, even if he doesn't like it. Nice open minded dad, giving them condoms. Good planning. Not fun to deal with anything nasty and Navid isn't a virgin.
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All this isolation is making me uncomfortable. Noah should be able to be more than just Navid's "princess"(he seriously needs to stop that...). Possessive isn't nice. Noah has done nothing to make Navid think he can't trust him, so he shouldn't be denied friends and a life. Noah's dad is kind of strange being so firmly on Navid's side. Sure, it's sound advise to not discard someone over a possible misunderstanding, but Noah is 19 and they aren't exactly married. I hope Noah makes it clear for Navid he needs to back off and give him some space. He needs to stand up for himself.
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The line about Bobby standing naked before God stripped of everything is simply heartbreaking. It brought tears to my eyes to think of young people suffering through situations like this even today... Such ignorance! I hope Bobby gets a true friend in Colton. He sure could use one now.
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More poetry! I know I have a few outstanding ones, but a new prompt sounds great and since my current story is almost finished, that leaves room for more challenging tasks.
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I really enjoyed the slow erotic build up during their "Is he or isn't he" phase. i just hope Navid doesn't turn out to be a douche... Some of the things he says just sounds way too suave to be comfortable. And Noah eats it up like he's starving. Which I guess he is if we're speaking of affection.
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Good thing Jorrah is in custody and dying... I can't help wondering if his parting words aren't the prelude to a sequel...? LOL But maybe the epilogue will take care of the lose end that is Amelia. And perhaps give J and M a little extra special time together...? Great story! I hope inspiration strikes you again soon!
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Meeting your man and getting him - then it's happily ever after, right? For Joel and Lucas, life takes another turn. Where will that leave them?
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They Don’t Call it Fantasyland for Nothing
Puppilull commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in They Don’t Call it Fantasyland for Nothing
If you're going to try a 3-some, doing ít on vacation could be the way to go. You'll probably never meet the person again and if it's something you enjoy, you can look into a more permanent arrangement at home. Will he show up though? Then again, who could say no to the boys...? -
"Casey and Shade, sitting in a tree, K I S S I N G!" Just kidding, but I really liked how the guys got closer. I just hope Shade doesn't get intimidated by their difference in economic circumstances. I doubt Casey will give it much thought, but it could be difficult to be the one struggling.
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Our little group form even more bonds. Will they end up with a gang of their own? But what would Viktor say about that? Can he go from associating with criminals to actually be one? He's the odd man out and yet the glue for this gang in the making.
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Breaking News from TMZ Sports!
Puppilull commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in Breaking News from TMZ Sports!
A short teaser before the storm? I feel sorry for E and H having to go through that. When they should be focusing on the 'Jag älskar dig' issue... -
Gaycation: Lgbt Around The World
Puppilull commented on Drew Espinosa's blog entry in Drew's Slice of Pi
Hmm... Maybe I should check that out. For education of course! The Brazilian men have nothing to do with it. No sir. Not at all... -
Oh my... What will happen to the rest of their day? That press conference will be about something other than hockey... And I agree with Henrik. Kissing is a must in that particular kind of movie. I don't need Siri to understand what he said! LOL
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His father already threw him out of the house. What's next? Military school? Conversion? No doubt it'll be all Bobby's fault... He's at least cleared the air with Tiffany. Maybe they can be friends. I hope so.
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I finally had time to sit and read. So now they are all brothers? How will they navigate these treacherous waters and keep their friendship and love? I think it's time Dante and Nobu 'broke up'. Things are getting confusing for Viktor. If they clear that up, they can expose Daisuke and have the relative peace returned. Just uncertain how Viktor will handle his dad in all this?
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Now that was a story warning we've all been waiting for! LOL Your guys are more proper than mine Nice to see them get those few days alone without any other distractions than hot asses in tight pants... And they got the bad guy. Just need to get Jorrah and all will be set for a slightly calmer existence.
