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  1. Aaron Alan Addams
    Another great chapter. I enjoyed the "Love on the Rocks" references. I've missed Mike, Tyson, George and family since "Five years on" ended. Your characters, in these very entertaining stories about CJ and extended family, have genuinely warmed my heart. Thank you for sharing your time, talent and efforts.
  2. Aaron Alan Addams
    The "Like Police" say I have reached the maximum of positive comments for the day. So... I just wanted to let you know I like this chapter.
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    Epilogue

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Epilogue

    I know you posted this story over a year ago and I did read iit at that time. Unfortunately, I was dealing with, or more accurately, not dealing with an intense personal issue and could only remember that I thought it was a good story. Just wanted to say. Loved it!!!
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    Like :-)
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    Like .-)
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    Like :-)
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    Like :-)
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    Like :-)
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    Like :-) Quota still maxed out.
  10. Aaron Alan Addams
    I like your story. Unfortunately, when I tried to hit the like button, I got a message that I've reached my quota for the day. Keep up the great work.
  11. Aaron Alan Addams
    Well deserved. I love your work.
  12. Aaron Alan Addams
    Ran out of space? Well, I ran out of likes. Just kidding. You got my like. Although, one sad, rainy day, I read and liked so many stories, I did run out of likes. As for Doc and Chip, I hope there is some other explanation but at the same time, I'm glad the negative drama has shifted its focus away from CJ. Fighting at a biker rally, may to some, seem like negative drama but I believe it will be a transitional moment for him. CJ is affectionately considered as the vulnerable son of a friend who must be watched over and protected. Standing up to this bully will prove to the group that he is now a man, an equal with the friends his father has chosen as family. Thank you for sharing your time and talents. AAA
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    I enjoyed book one. So, looking forward to book two. Your new character, Qaim, promises to lighten the mood to what has up to now been, a darker story. Qaim's innocence and wonder should brighten the spirits of this wandering band of warriors as they travel closer to a battle that even they seem have doubts of winning. I imagine, to everyone's surprise, the innocent, harmless appearing, Qaim will somehow play a pivotal roll in the upcoming battle. Love your work by the way. Thank you for sharing your time, effort and talents.
  14. Aaron Alan Addams
    Who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
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    Chapter 1

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on Russ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Welcome to GA, I've read your stories on several other sites and enjoyed them very much. Are you planning to start this story from the beginning or continue on using this chapter as a starting point?
  16. Aaron Alan Addams
    Glad you managed to get chapter two posted. As for a review, I'm hooked. Your character warms my heart to a point where I want to protect him. The storyline / plot hints you have given so far are all interesting and force my imagination to create possible scenarios. Please tell me you have completed writing this story and will post regularly.
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    Mika

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on AriieObsession's story chapter in Mika

    Great start. I can't wait for more information about the character, The Master.
  18. Aaron Alan Addams

    Starting Over

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on DynoReads's story chapter in Starting Over

    Well written! Wonderful characters. Touching storyline. Great job all around. Thank you for the story.
  19. Aaron Alan Addams
    Another wonderful story! I read the entire thing in the last twenty four hours. Your talent of writing characters that make the reader, care for... No more than that. Fall in love with them is remarkable. Your storyline is believable, well thought out and funny. (I have my phone read stories to me when I'm busy doing things. I listen with earbuds. My coworkers think I'm listening to music. I do get looks when I burst out with a laugh every now and then.) As I read the epilogue, I felt sad. It felt as if dear friends were moving away and I was never going see them again. Congratulations on a job well done. I only have one suggestion. Sequel?
  20. Aaron Alan Addams
    I'm working on my first serious story. I write a chapter on my iPad. Siri does his best to edit as I go along. Sometimes we argue about a word or phrase but I usually win. I then have Siri read the chapter aloud one paragraph at a time in his sexy British accent. I follow along making corrections. My brain corrects errors when I read so I miss them. When it's read back to me, I can hear the errors very clearly. Not sure what to do when I finish the story but... I've got six or seven chapters to write before I need to figure it out. I like the idea of beta readers but I think I will wait until my story is more complete.
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    Chapter 23

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Loved your story. I'm amazed at how quickly I fell in love with the characters I know the story is a couple years old yet it is new to me. Thank you for lending your time and creativity so other may enjoy. Your efforts are most appreciated.
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    Hello Renee. As you can see, I'm still mining completed stories out of the past. I love your work. Your characters I always find to be very charming. Your story tittle suggests at least one more book? Thanks for sharing your imagination and time for our enjoyment.
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    Chapter 1

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on JimCarter's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hey Jim. I know your story is a few years old but I'm new to the site and I prefer to read stories marked complete. I dislike waiting for new chapters to post. Now on to the review. Your story was endearing. The characters are wonderful. With the addition of an antagonist or two, the story could easily go on for multiple chapters. Thank you for giving the world this story.
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    Chapter 15

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on Mikeymike88's story chapter in Chapter 15

    I very much enjoy your story. I usually wait for a story to be marked completed before I read it. Waiting for a new chapter to post is very frustrating for me. Your characters are captivating. I'm enjoying the direction your storyline is taking. For some reason, I can't help but feel there is something heartbreaking looming on the horizon. Nice reference to "Moving On / Moving Forward" in that earlier chapter. I wish you great success.
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    Chapter 10

    Aaron Alan Addams commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Loved the story. I usually wait for a story to be complete. Who likes to be left hanging? Your characters are endearing. The storyline intriguing. I can't wait to read the next few posted chapters. Bravo on a story well done.
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