I'm so sorry to hear that, my friend. Unfortunately, it's been my biggest worry since writing my first western... how many readers would be turned off by the 'western speak'. I still don't know if some readers are passing by this story and other of my westerns because of it, but what can I do? I strive to tell an authentic tale, one that feels and sounds right to me. I made a choice and I have to live with it. I hope you stick with it, but I do understand if you don't.
Albert is cruel, and we get to learn more about him as the story progresses. Rob does his best to please his father, and part of that is being a brute.
Clearly, he is following August to please his father... and I think August has had enough.
Thanks for letting me know how you feel, buddy. I appreciate it and your support. Cheers! Gary