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    Late September

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late September

    Thanks for the comments, Tim! Yes, we wonder about Niles the investigator too! Toph DID surprise himself, didn't he? He appears to be moving into new territory at every turn. Maybe we'll (or he'll) discover hidden potential. But he IS keeping Gary at arms length
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    Late August

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late August

    Hey Jess! I'm happy you discovered Toph! It's a little different from Twoey and a hell of a lot shorter! whew! Toph has a world to discover, plus himself. I hope his journey is entertaining!
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    The End

    skinnydragon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The End

    This is a difficult review to write tim. There is little than one, least of all me, can say to alleviate your pain. As Gary mentioned, it is a victory of days. You know, as well as I, the answer must come from within, the most difficult source of all. What you wrote was clear, accurate and it hurt. It hurt to read as I'm certain it hurt to write. I know it doesn't help to say I'm in your corner, but I am. hugs
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    Gary. This morning, near the end of the month, Toph decided to look at the cute daytime boys who were entering the store as he was leaving. He was still invisible to them. When I arrived home (yes, I call it home now), Gary was preparing to leave for work. “That’s a pretty severe suit Gary. Not at all like the usual Armani you grace us with most mornings.” I could see his raised eyebrows. He was now evaluating my sartorial knowledge. “I need to have a disciplinary conference with an employee
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    Thanks jess and YAY you're all caught up! There's too many chapters in this little saga ...hehe! David seems to be moving forward, but you know how it is with him At least the Kathy phase is over. whew! It's good he's looking beyond himself for help too ...a sure sign of maturing. Ginny has a plan for the meeting Sunday, and on the surface it seems cruel. But you're correct in that she's competent (and sneaky). Thanks again for sticking with David & Twoey!
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    Oh Dodger! This is really getting sticky! At least Robbie has Nathan second guessing now. I wonder how future bus stop meetings will go? Part 2 is gonna be seriously interesting. I can't wait! Nicola will probably spill everything to Daniel, who'll expect a play by play. Maybe not. I still have a funny little feeling about Daniel. OK enough of that. Robbie doesn't need any more complications! Great Part 1, gearing up for Part 2!!
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    Entry 10

    skinnydragon commented on MrM's story chapter in Entry 10

    A good chapter MrM! Jamie's little sister, huh? That's an interesting thing. The entourage put Jamie in a slightly dimmer light from the way Billy's eyes always see him. That's good too. It's nice he had a sort of resolution re: Joe. It's also funny to see how Brandon and Billy perceive these first meetings. They're both attracted, but think the other guy isn't so much. That's cute. Looking forward to the next one!!
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    A revealing chapter Parker! Lots of information related to Andy and even some of the adults around him ...and how they interact with him. That he turned left was understandable. That he turned back was satisfying. As Angel mentioned in a previous review, I too had the feeling his friends were speaking about him and Zander. Well done friend!
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    Thanks for the great comments Def! David and his father. You're good! You see so well how the boy's mind works! Then Kathy. Yep. First he symbolically washed his hand(s) of her, then later, scrubbed her out of his life. Sunday's meeting is going to be significant, no mystery there. And ...Twoey can SPEAK!
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    Thanks for all the great comments, jess! I think Kathy had some kind other plan (maybe more intimate?) in mind for Sat., since David didn't know there were any plans at all. She got out-manipulated. You're correct, Matty was getting a little heated, especially when he saw the effect he was having on David. It's a good thing he didn't know it was the fantasy causing it ...that might have been the trigger making it MORE than a close call ...haha.
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    Hey CG, thanks for the review! Well I think the scene you alluded to was so gross it finally triggered what we all wanted. I'm glad you picked up on the shame Nels felt. It's pretty obvious now he knows he was WAY wrong. Don't give up on Gary. As you suspect, tomorrow's meeting and revelation is going to be significant for both boys. Will it be enough?
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    Thanks for the review Parker! Yes, sometimes David gets no breaks. He doesn't handle 'uncontrollable' situations well and it seems once he gets his head above water with a few of them, another one or ten push him under! Have a great trip!
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    Thanks for the review Angel! Maybe the grossness was what it took to put the final nail in the coffin. David can be obtuse sometimes Speaking of obtuse, the belief his father didn't love him makes you wonder how his mind is working. Sorry about your tears. The next chapter will certainly be significant, hopefully not too tears-producing. It's a hump Twoey must get over though. It will also resurface memories suppressed by David. Thanks again for the great review! I'm so glad you're enjoying "18 Weeks"
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    Enough of creepy, crawly skin for me! “ . . . all the perfumes of Arabia will not sweeten this little hand.” * * * Naturally, the JV got annihilated in the Glen, so I tried to cheer up Gary. “I knew how good the Glen was. We got demolished last week too. Next year we gotta do some running in the hills!” “I know, but we didn’t even put a guy in the first five. And that’s my job! I feel I’ve let the team down.” “You know that’s not true. Concentrate on your final race. Be positive. You’re go
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    Thanks for your comments jess! We'll figure out the annoying little kid pretty soon, don't worry. You're right! There is an eerie parallel between David's advice to Biggy and what Matty's doing ...hehe. I loved your comment about Matty's metabolism. You had an interesting thought about Dr. Keating. Do you think Ginny 'prepared' him a little?
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    Thanks for the review Lisa! David's sudden "better boyfriend" burst is confusing. jess's review suggested a possible motive. Whichever, it's destined to all come crashing down. David should call Grampa more often. He seems to know all about "that woman" ...hehe Sorry about making you hungry. It'll go on for a few more weeks, with pictures too! Sorry again, but dragons do all kinds of evil shit
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    Blessings Found

    skinnydragon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Blessings Found

    Merry Christmas tim! Thank you for the profound thoughts.
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    Hey jess, thanks for the great comments! Def mentioned his sudden urge to claim Kathy and now you picked up on his urge to squeeze into skinny clothes. With the shower scene and a few other things we've observed, the boy that's always trying to be in control seems to have someplace deep in his brain controlling everything. Anyway, it seems a lot of stuff is now converging on him.
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    Andy had a difficult vacation, but still his ingenuity (and now mechanical skills) showed through. If the kid ever gets a break, he'll land on his feet. The party surprised me. I can't see him there. I guess it shows how much of a magnet Zander is to him. Another eventful chapter Parker, and it seems the next several will be as much or more so! OK, hurry up Friday
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    Thanks AC for the wonderful review! I'm glad you snagged those little things I left lying around. Maybe he's more afraid of Gary, or what connecting with him might mean, than he's letting on. Gary seems persistent though Anyway, Toph has a lot of new people to meet and it's still difficult to break from the past, no matter how flippant he is.
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    Thanks for the comments Def! Yeah, Matty. Even if the unlikely were to occur, it would be hard to envision David so 'acrobatic' in his sex with Matty. I envision him as more of a slow, loving partner. If he ever gets past holding hands, that is. Hehe. Sunday's face to face, voice-to-voice sounds huge, doesn't it?
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    Thanks jess for the great review! Haha ...you picked up on Grampa's role pretty quickly. It finally dawns on David in ch 46. Oh no! Biggy's turning into too nice a guy to end up with the likes of Kathy. She'll probably find someone more her type
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    Winter to Spring either weeded or seeped to weeped
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    That was a thoughtful answer Nate made to Josh's email. It shows he's thinking clearly, even though he was sweating bullets. Speaking of sweating bullets, that was a very lovely finally-boyfriends scene Gary! What a birthday present. They're going to be good for each other. I'm sure there'll be a lot of swimming going on in that pool too, or something. Thanks for this great chapter!
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    Winter to Spring sander to sender
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