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  1. Hi Cassie! Just curious. How's the writing going for you?
  2. Hi Clo! Hope you had a fun weekend. I agree with you. Making bread takes a lot of patience, which I don't have. I love homemade bread, but usually fail when I try to make it.😪
  3. Hi Albert! That looks so delicious!
  4. Hi Page, Hope y'all had a great weekend.
  5. Hey Gary! Hope your weekend went well. Yep, We also had one of those. When I got old enough and tall enough, it became one of my chores to help mom do the laundry.
  6. Hi Man! Aod and I had a quiet weekend. I mostly read and he played games on his new PlayStation. It sounds like you had a productive weekend writing, baking and watching football. Hope the coming week goes well for you.
  7. Diaries are very intimate. This short story written as diary entries is a very intimate tale of college romance. Filled with love, humor, angst and tough times it is a great read. It is highly recommended.
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  8. Me too! How are you today Man?
  9. In that case, you and Steve stay safe!
  10. Hi Everyone!
  11. Hi Albert! Hope that hurricane headed your way doesn't make it.
  12. Good night Bucket! Sleep well.
  13. Hey Clo, It could be worse. My grandma used something like this to iron clothes.
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    Batch 50

    It was a fun chapter going from almost snow to poolside grills. The food made me hungry. The family get-together went well, so the boys don't have that to worry about as their relationship continues.
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    Chapter 1

    I like the start of the story as well as the characters introduced. I am envious of Scott's book collection. I assume the setting was picked to fit what will happen, so I expect a lot of harassment and anxiety in the future.
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    The Benefactors

    The history provided by the Atlas werebears was enlightening and interesting. Baal is the real danger now that Bernie is in Africa. I do hope that Odin will be able to help. I assume that Charlie will be able to get the message thru to Odin. I would assume that the council will not try to fly over the Sahara on their way back to pick up the rest of their group. The Benefactor's made a big mistake, but at least their goal is good. They seem to be a bit lazy or at least have clouded judgment to assume that Bennie is a danger to lycans rather than investigate directly. Excellent chapter @Grumpy Bear!
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    Chapter 206

    Armand's kids made sure he knew he was missed. Being upfront with the kids about going back to Paris is smart parenting. Charles is unsure of his status in the family, but hopefully an adoption will help him settle.
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    Chapter 205

    A very sweet chapter. It's good to see Armand and Carl back home. I'm sure that Charles will fit in quickly with the other kids.
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    The Sorest Spot

    John is just plain weird when it comes to Connor. I don't think Matty should waste time trying to help John balance his life better. He kind of reminds me of the description of Rusty's mother in this chapter. Connor's plan is doomed if it depends on making Rusty the campus clown if Connor unmasks Rybalt. Connor has heard Rybalt sing, so Connor must be tone deaf. The campus crowd is going to see the hypocrisy of Connor's attack on Rusty/Rybalt. I like August and feel in some ways that she is the needed female objective and impartial mentor he needs. It is obvious Rusty doesn't have that support from his mother. I do agree that Matty should go with Rusty to visit Mom, but at least Rusty should tell Matty that August will be with him when he sees Mom.
  20. I love the trailer you sent. Hopefully, the movie will make it to Thailand. Thanks Page!
  21. I still can't believe how quickly he wrote Bearpaw. I wonder what's up next for him. Are you working on a submission for the 2023 Anthology?
  22. I think it is Spike's form of flirting with you.
  23. Hi Page! How are you today?
  24. Hi Gary! Just woke up to a sunny day and checking in here. Hope everything is well for you and yours.
  25. Hi Cassie, Glad you are better. Hope you have all the energy and inspiration you need to write up a storm.
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