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    Happy Birthday! Hope you had a wonderful day..
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    I missed this birthday thread Adi... Hope your birthday was well celebrated.. Keep fighting and get better soon!!
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    November

    Defiance19 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in November

    The first weekend in November was our group’s last fall hike.. Your poem captures all that I love about being in the woods this time of year. Excellent Parker!
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    Perigee

    Defiance19 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Perigee

    I read this a couple times and it is a beautiful poem. Opposite but complimentary forces. The whole truth of it is in the last line. You’re going to think I’m nuttier than I am, but read out loud, I could see it being interpreted in dance. (I’ve probably been to one too many of these performances, but yeah..) well done tim..
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    This is the second piece I’ve read tonight which held a significant meaning for me. Live an authentic, full life.. To thine own self be true. There is peace in that, I think, at the end of it all. A wonderful story tim..
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    Poor Twyla. She has to be strong for her family and grieve for her brother, all at the same time. I like the mystery but have no ideas nor suspects. I can see I will be reading the previous chapters when the new ones come out, just to try to gather clues.. Great chapter..
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    This... I’m glad I read this, if only for the whisper of hope it promises.
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    I thought this chapter struck a perfect balance between CJ’s obligations and his regular life. Not that there’s anything regular about CJ’s life.. I mean, Cher! lol. Too bad we didn’t get to visit with Harley.. Yes please on the modeling gig.. It was only a little awks with the possible condo purchase and Owen. This has to be difficult for him. He could probably afford to do that later but CJ just put that out there now. Good thing is it’s done in a way Owen is included in the decision making.. still a little uncomfortable, but we know what the dads said already. South Beach confessions: First place I got really, really, tipsy(yes tipsy) was at Mango’s..I always go to Joes Stone Crab.
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    I like Owen’s support of CJ. it does make me wonder though how it will test their relationship going forward. The campaign won’t last forever, but CJ is destined for the spotlight it seems. Owen’s achievements are no less stellar, but he is much quieter about it. I’ll be watching those two. I did not for one second doubt CJ, when it came to Matt.🤞 Nice chapter Carlos..
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    Fall Sightings

    Defiance19 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Fall Sightings

    These are amazing Parker. I agree with Dugh on feeling transported..
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    4-10 - Unity

    Defiance19 commented on Cynus's story chapter in 4-10 - Unity

    Loved the ending.. I read your comment above, so I won’t question Liz and Jake. You told this love story in a brilliant, exciting and interesting way. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done, Cynus...
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    Nicely done, A..
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    Maple Drive

    Defiance19 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Maple Drive

    Great prompt, a little sad but very well done, tim
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    Goodbye Daddy

    Defiance19 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Goodbye Daddy

    It’s been said. You did what you needed to do for you. And how empowering to take that step.. He’s still accountable, but all that rests with him. I hope it’s freeing for you.. *hugs*
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    I read this and cringed a little.. not a bad thing, just....memories. Omg. Poor Becker trying to hold it together. How long before he and O’Malley are found out or out themes. I’m not even sure I want to bear witness to that now. Their freak out might be epic. Great chapter..
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    A moving, and earnest tribute to the fallen. We should never forget their sacrifice.
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    Well, this is intriguing and curious. I’m family with all three stories, so I can’t wait to see how the mystery unfolds and connects the characters. What you’re doing is great, Cole.. I’m excited.
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    That was such a nice talk the brothers had.. CJ probably doesn’t even realize he’s becoming his dads. Hehe... I'm in the middle of dealing with end of life directives. That’s never an easy thing no mattter how old or prepared you think you are. The boys have each other, and they did good. I like how Owen graciously accepts CJ’s right to own and carry a firearm, even as he holds strong to his beliefs. The two aren’t mutually exclusive. I can only hope they continue to be this agreeable with the other stuff you know is waiting to confront them. DC during cherry blossom season is a beautiful thing.
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    Roar • Part I

    Defiance19 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Roar • Part I

    A great first chapter Carlos.. I think you handled the political parts and the Pulse tragedy admirably. It is always interesting to read CJ’s reaction and POV, and to see his response to the things that affect him. I am looking forward to all The shenanigans and developments.. Also, yuge side eye: Fran Poulter? Well done, C...
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    Oh hi, Chet and Arron! I loved this chapter Gary. I think I might have been just as excited about the house! That’s saying a lot, cause moving is a b... It was fun too, starting with M & K’s teasing. Then Mrs B put Mr B in the cookie jar.. oh my! Lol. She is a great addition to the Cott cast. Don’t mind waiting for the next.. Its all coming together.. they’re growing a home.
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    Tear Tracks

    Defiance19 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Tear Tracks

    Tears and rage are surely not enough. Maybe not even love. Some of us are moved to action and do all we can, and it still feels like we’ve done nothing at all. I feel you Parker.. I agree with Val.. sorry these had to be penned.
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    Loved both of these, Parker. The second, especially, resonates. Very well done.
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    Evocative, tim.. the imagery brings these to life. I really enjoyed them both. Well done, as always...
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    Dedication

    Defiance19 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Dedication

    Beautiful dedication, Carlos.
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    Lesson #3

    Defiance19 commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Lesson #3

    I love the voice you use.. A wonderful lesson, Mac..
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