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  1. Defiance19

    Chapter 9: Shame

    I am sorry this happened to you, but I applaud your bravery in sharing it to further help you heal. Best Def.
  2. Defiance19

    1-7 - The Signs

    Like your other work, Cynus you paint such a vivid picture here. The curious part of me can't wait to see what Caleb's journey to find Ethan will be like. The cautious part of me is giving him such a lecture of all the pitfalls. The journal will not be an easy read, but Mrs Pallet says it might give Caleb and Liz answers. Or more questions.. great job..
  3. Defiance19

    Second Chance

    Second chances or different perspective, whatever it is, your happiness makes me happy and glad for you.. Lovely poem...
  4. She said it perfectly..👍
  5. Defiance19

    Chapter 8

    Yay! I guess Don needed to process things in his own time and in his own way. It's amazing the way the mind works as this was probably the biggest block preventing him from moving forward. Now if this keeps up, no doubt he'll be able to push through all the rest. He's talking about a future with kids! Rena- so sweet. Excellent tim.
  6. Defiance19

    Volition

    🙋Me! Take me too, I volunteer as prey or prey.... 🤗 This was scorching Parker.. You do spice so, so well..
  7. Defiance19

    The Ichor

    I'm looking forward to more of this. Great job..
  8. I get this pain too well. I have moments when I still go through it. I was happy to be in school just so I was doing something or else I might have still been in bed. You captured Caleb's pain.
  9. Defiance19

    1-4 - The Truth

    Gut punch.. Ethan really wanted it to be over. So messed up..
  10. Defiance19

    Party

    You did it Parker.. you weaved the lives of these YA together and made me love them even more especially knowing now, that their past won't wholly define them. As sad difficult as it must have been, you also managed to give us a little bit of SkinnyD.. It was beautiful. I can only imagine what the collaboration could have been, but I am grateful for this.. Well done, and thank you..
  11. I had malaria..lol. The pitfalls of WebMD self diagnosing.. Jake was starting to sound a little paranoid from his reasoning about his friends to what he was actually suffering from. I was relieved when he recognized the symptoms of alcohol withdrawal. Thing is, to know if he keeps going it could be worse. Knowing that is good, and while it's highly unlikely that he will not have another drink, I hope for his sake he can stay sober long enough to 'see' himself.. Great chapter, Cole.,
  12. CONGRATULATIONS PARKER!!
  13. Was kind of expecting it, still I wasn't prepared.. Now to see what happens
  14. Yaassss!!!! I love this. I feel like it my reward for being so behind!!!
  15. I think, everything that needed to be said and is felt, is in this piece.. You did a great job sean... stay true.
  16. Loved this story.. A fantastic choice for CSR!
  17. Defiance19

    Ebb and Flow

    I am so relieved Ben made the choice to stay. One, because Travis needs him to be there and be that guy and two, I'm still really worried about what he might say or be pushed into saying, on air about the rumours.. that's held off for now at least. Travis will probably be mad about the lawyer but really, he needs the help and this is Ben taking care of him the best way he can. I said it before, the two men have the makings of a great relationship. They seem to balance each other with knowing when to give and take, push and stand down. Sure, it's rough still, but if only everything else would fall away. Wishes... I wonder if Katykins now realises how big a role she's played in this mess. I will patiently wait for the next chapter..it's always worth it!
  18. Thank you much moggy.. maybe you could wrangle any one of the number of bodies that tumble into your view for that picnic..😉
  19. Oh my... that's going to take a heck of an explanation.. you made me feel Ethan's despair too..
  20. Super alliteration ☺️Thank you very much Mac.. I appreciate all the encouragement..
  21. Well hell, Gary...🤗 Thank you for supporting everything I do. I really do appreciate it..
  22. Thank you again Caz.. I can't wait for Mark's uh...reaction.. xoxo
  23. I blame the rain for the feels... 😊Thank you for reading this Lit..
  24. Defiance19

    Chapter 13

    I think that went better than well.. then the proposal...swoon!
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