Wow what a chapter I think you set the mood and the tone spot on. I almost felt I was there. Superb wonderful writing as we have come to know from you
Thank you.
I like the new version it's crisp clear and consise. Handy links to great stories you may have inadvertently missed this took a while to put together so hats off to you all.
I dont care about typos your human and they are forgivable i just love this story and its getting better and better with each chapter (a tale to get your teeth into (SORRY))great stuff!!!!
Great to see the family back for another great outing. Shame about Jeremy's parents but he will overcome this trauma with the help love and support of his family.