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Another Jerk Plus Another Mistake Equals Pain
long1jo commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Jerk Plus Another Mistake Equals Pain
Love how Karl is always there to protect Carlo. Waiting for Carlo and Brand to get together- 10 comments
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Interesting hope the coming chapters are longer though
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Chapter 12: Ramon has his head twisted. Will he lose his game?
long1jo commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 12: Ramon has his head twisted. Will he lose his game?
Wow Good long chapter worth the wait I hope dont have to wait this long for the next chapter Marcos you really needed to get the head out of your ass but well you are going to regret your words please post the next chapter sooooooooooon -
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Wow what a turn of event, Maddox thinking that he had most open minded parents, hope his dad and siblings are with him Rusty I always had inclination that there was more to him then what it showed and I think he is secretly in love with Maddox Jonathan you have a wild ride coming be ready
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Wow why is everyone on Jay's back All he did was out of pure love for Loe and he always had a very loving family which made him complete and that's what he wants for Loe, Is that wrong? Isn't Loe still hurting from the shitty family he has. Loe get your head out of your a-- and try to see from Jays soul and all you will see is pure unadulterated love he has for you, he is not the one one with anger issue but is the calm one, It is damm impossible to find a guy like Jay with unconditional love, my heart bleeds for you Jay, I know you will go back to Loe and pacify him and admit that u were wrong but that's just because you are Jay epitome of love
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Yes Dex definitely needs to apologize once he finds out that Jonathan did not tell Maddox about the ass touching
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Interesting chapter Jonathan is completely right in being insecure about Maddox as he was burnt before and would not like that to happen again, toygh luck Jonathan you are falling for Maddox though Dex you have no right to chastise Jonathan, you know Maddox well as to how he drops all the girls when he gets all the bases and knowing his reputation why would Jonathan trust him, instead why not advise Maddox to reveal his feelings to Jonathan but he is not sure of it himself right? Rusty is really an ass for treating Jonathan like that knowing that Maddox is starting to have more connection with Jonathan then any other girls before. He deserved the punch badly
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Wow never could have imagined this but why just him when they were twins Well will have to wait till the mystery unfolds and what happened to Lars Jay you are absolutely a Saint, man how can anyone keep so cool is beyond me Hats off to you Loren is the most lucky guy Whats up with Seamus not liking Loren Too may questions need answer soon
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yes thats what is niiiice 🤤
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No! They got to be exclusive
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Why cant we have some hot dude instead hehe
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Hot hot hot Boy did Jonathan had the best time loosing his v card I know he will coax Maddox and get his v card soon as he did like the little finger teasing by Jonathan When it comes to Jonathan, Maddox is putty in his hands both of them just not aware of it right now Please dont wait too long for the next one, need to keep the fire burning lol
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Chapter 20: Frank's Discovery
long1jo commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 20: Frank's Discovery
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If you have friends like this why ask for enemies Gosh that lady has no heart Hope Elizabeth finds out sooner then later Surprised David did not mention this incidence to Elizabeth
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Chapter 12: A Father’s Love
long1jo commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 12: A Father’s Love
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Great chapter, did move fast but thats good looking forward to Kyles reaction and and of the trail period to see where this leads to
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Finn is so much taken by Alec, so nice of him to come over I know you are going to go away Alec but know what you are going to leave behind It's going to be an interesting journey Hope chapter are posted atleast twice a week pleeeease😉
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Jon you finally got out of torturing yourself Beautiful story and needless to say Oren saw the beauty from within
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Noooo I want a new story for Zane and Dan you cant cut it so short, will always wait for their story I have read this story atleast twice and loved it so much Always look forward to ur stories
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Lovely story Now poor Maddox will have to woo Jonathan again but surely after making him understand that this is serious and not just a fling or joke Cant wait for the next chapter
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Nothing really exciting in this chapter, but the bad will come soon enough.. well I was expecting something good to come up soon
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I think George is a good guy with just some problem with his mom not accepting something of him that is still amystery I am sure Karl and George will become good friends and more as time goes by George will help Karl navigate through tough times
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Such a wonderful character Beau is. we can see that Brad was missing true love in his life which made him the monster but we have Beau to tame the monster. Waiting for a**hole Gary's punishment hopefully soon
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What a relief to hear Ethen is alive but also sad that it comes after a year and now Cody’s dream are going to be shattered once more wish it was earlier before Jake n Cody got involved seriously for sake of poor Cody Anyway, great cliffhanger don’t make us wait too long James love you for bringing Ethen back
