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Tragic ending but hopefully after their return o England things get better and Jake and Cody realize that the spark they had for each other has not died
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For The World is Cruel But You Have Touched My Soul
long1jo commented on James Matthews's story chapter in For The World is Cruel But You Have Touched My Soul
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Smooth sailing so far with addition of Jerry, love it
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Nice past and present, looks like Stewie is falling slowly but surely Cant wait to see him realizing it
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Wow that was a very hot session! Man 18 with raging hormones, its going to be a hot and steamy story
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Wow slow down, that is too much to digest 6 f****** years of torture. Surprised Kim and Nikki are still sane What happened to Dr. Marc, was he executed barbarically Please let Kyle remain sane
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Love how the plot is developing Just keep in mind, that whatever the reason was for not telling you, your parents still loved you and raised you as their own right? Jett I love you for being so understanding and making Kyle look differently at his parents and dissipating his anger Not telling them early enough is good because growing up you have all different stress in life why add a huge one Yes they did not tell but was there any benefit for them other then giving unconditional love to both the adapted kids Kyle you are a good person and don't let your relations with loving parents be strained, look at the love and life they have given you and be blessed
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Wonderful chapter but casually mentioning of Seamus taking Matt for the first time is a little heart breaking Anyway love Seamus and yes Matt is young and has been vunerable before so understand his cautious behavior but sure he can see in Seamus that their relationship is not only because of Aidan as he had already mentioned before that he fell for Matt the first time they crossed path. Matt hope your talk with Brad opens up ur heart and see the real love Seamus has for you and u realize that ur feelings for Seamus are just not because of him being nanny but go much deeper
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Loved the story though was wrapped up quickly, looking forward to another romantic story
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Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
long1jo commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
Thanks for posting and a long chapter really made it up for the long delay Recovering first, Seamus stood and held out his hand for Matt’s. “You’re not done yet.” I thought Matt was going to take it this time as he was already spend by Seamus's hot mouth haha- 41 comments
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Wow interesting how about just impregnating with Prince's semen without copulation, I am sure they were practicing that with bulls and cows in that period haha
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It's the end of the world as we know it...
long1jo commented on K.C.'s story chapter in It's the end of the world as we know it...
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Glad that Jonah finally had courage to complain about Dallas and was concerned about Matt Matt you should have complained to the teachers and let your mom know about the bullying Good the principal was kicked out though MAtt you are free but lot of kids might not be so everyone please look out for the abused and bully and nip it fight away
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Men. They are un-understandable
long1jo commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Matt think about Seamus and atleast talk it out before making plans, good that u r going to clarify any misunderstanding You both are too good to stay apart!- 37 comments
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Thanks for “Because…” he says, looking into my eyes. “I love you.” he says quietly. That leaves us with a good mood that Hunter is going to know that he is still loved Just needed to end with a chaste kiss from Dale to hunter lol
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Hi I think I have read this story somewhere before but it is always a peasure to read it over and over again I like the way the plot is developing and cant wait for whats coming next
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Awesome, no back fire from the family now lets wait and see how Ronnie and the rest of the team take it
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BONUS CHAPTER: Green Eyed Monster
long1jo commented on CassieQ's story chapter in BONUS CHAPTER: Green Eyed Monster
Hello CassieQ Loved this story and read it twice. Love the pure and selfless love that flowed between Mikael and Adam One thing that I would like to comment is that in may stories that I have read about the adopted kids I always see taht they get angry at their parents for not letting them know and give them a hard time. When they get jealous of their boyfriends and are scared to loose them why dont they see that those parents may also be scared to loose their child if he found his biological parents wanted him back and he would go away Beside what do the parents have to gain by hiding the fact the the child is adopted Biological parents gave up the kid for adoption because they could not raise the child for whatever reason so be grateful that you have such wonderful parents who brought you in their life poured out all their love Imagine if he would have been left in the street ang brought up in orphanage or been transferred from one foster home to another In Hindu mythology God Krishna was brought up by Yasoda and Nandbaba and till this day people always relay them as His parents and not Devaki and Vasudev who are his biological parents It is said that parents who raise you are more to be cherished and worshipped then the one that gave birth to you I am only posting this so that if any adopted person reads this hopefully he will be more grateful towards his adopted parents when he finds out about it then getting angry and being ungrateful Mikael you know your mom was always reserved and just not with you but with Lily and Hyacinth too Stand in her foot before going and judging her, and how could you leave your father who loved you unconditionally go through the pain of not knowing that you are safe Just hope all the adopted kids are grateful for their loving parents and give them the respect they deserve -
I hope Madox kills Mayson
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No please end this torture
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well take the video and that bastard to the cops for raping
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Love the start, have to read other chapters right away, wonder how I missed this one Hunter you are in BIG trouble!
