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Excellent chapter! Eric wants to create a local news, information and entertainment broadcast for local stories and events. Since news and information are from foreign sources like nearly everything else in Makarovia, I can see the need for local news, weather and entertainment. I’m not certain he’s got any idea of how complicated it is to create a broadcast platform either over the airwaves or via the internet. I see the need, I hope that he can get it started. His contacts at international broadcast networks could be very helpful in getting the startup going. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The new relationships are developing nicely, the team’s about to go into the field to recover a Dr. who’s possibly discovered the cure for cancer in the city of San Francisco which was cut off from the rest of the world and abandoned. What could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The date went well and the attraction between Elliott and Ryan is growing in intensity, while they each try to figure out if the other is really interested or just wants a hookup. The pace of development on each major character is perfect. I would still like a bit more depth into how the situation developed and what caused the situation they’re in. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The story is developing slowly and you are adding additional depth to each of your characters also slowly. There are details and story lines needing to be filled in as the chapters develop. A great premise and excellent writing! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent story! You’ve got an interesting storyline and believable characters with emotional depth and lots of backstories to develop. You’ll probably need to give a bit more background on Ragers. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️

Excellent chapter! Welcome back! We’ve missed you and the amazing characters you’ve created. I’m sorry that there’s been an accident. I’ve a feeling that Cole and Mason have lost their parents and Jesse and Dylan are going to be raising them. By the way, I hate cliffhangers! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤭❤️

Excellent chapter! The command team greeted Alex when he returned from his mission and they insisted that he no longer leave the base on missions for his personal safety’ as well as the running of his base. He’s needed for coordinations with the other resistance bases as well as their scientific research personnel. The plans that his techies have discovered are horrific and surprised that obnoxiously condescending general with the speed and abilities of these “children” leaving him looking like the fool that he is. Team bravo being held hostage as well as their secondary base being threatened with destruction, has left Alex with few options. The war has just begun and the aliens are in for quite a surprise. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The newlyweds survived the imperial inquisition and are now on their way to the silver shore valley and the new lives they will spend together. The introduction of Jihan as Kastan’s husband and stepfather to Rashan should be easy since Jihan saved him in the capital from a robbery. Rashan kept telling his father that he wanted to see his rescuer again. Now he will get to see him all the time. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Fun times for the Ivanov family, drinks, dancing and conversation. They are getting better acquainted and learning more about each other. It’s really amazing that the Royals can mix with the citizenry so easily and with only minimal security. There’s apparently no paparazzi either. It’s really sad that such a caring and welcoming place doesn’t exist except inside your imagination. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The extended Royal Family stepped into the Grotto for a night of dancing and happiness following the Legal wedding and reception dinner. Peter and Eric danced their special dance and got the attention of everyone in the club. Olek is enjoying himself and Eric and Peter want to make it a monthly tradition. Yuri seems pretty relaxed, Boris enjoyed preparing the reception dinner and the security team are enjoying themselves. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ I hope you can get some rest. This whole being a prisoner of the virus at home is becoming harder to deal with. I’m having trouble keeping track of what day it is. Take Care of Yourself and Stay Safe and Healthy! That goes for all of the rest of my fellow prisoners as well! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m glad that Eddie and Matty spent some time with Nate and G, the conversation between the four of them was embarrassing and amusing for each of them. Their offer of advice was very sweet. The honesty and compassion between the members of this unique family is astounding. Even when presented with questions about their experiences with Kai were answered frankly and truthfully. The newest couple in the family has amazing role models to help them with their questions and problems. The pukka shell choker’s were truly a very thoughtful gift from Kai. I’m sorry to hear that there are only two chapters left in this book. I’m truly going to miss this amazing story and your truly inspirational characters. I will say that I am looking forward to the Noah Danner story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m glad that Eddie and Matty spent some time with Nate and G, the conversation between the four of them was embarrassing and amusing for each of them. Their offer of advice was very sweet. The honesty and compassion between the members of this unique family is astounding. Even when presented with questions about their experiences with Kai were answered frankly and truthfully. The newest couple in the family has amazing role models to help them with their questions and problems. The pukka shell choker’s were truly a very thoughtful gift from Kai. I’m sorry to hear that there are only two chapters left in this book. I’m truly going to miss this amazing story and your truly inspirational characters. I will say that I am looking forward to the Noah Danner story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Olek and Helga are married! Yippee! The legal wedding performed by a member of the judicial panel, who also performed Peter and Eric’s wedding. The story that the judge told of how he met his husband while studying abroad, ensuring their return to Makarovia where they could legally marry. His feelings about the King and how hard he’s worked for all of the citizens was truly touching. His respect for the relationship between Olek and Helga and the pregnancy is what makes Makarovia such an inspirational place. Prior to the ceremony he spoke of the couple as King Olek and Lady Helga. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent story! This was an amazingly unique concept with unique characters that have depth and emotional believability. I strongly recommend this story and hope that the author will consider a sequel! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Royalty visiting making a return visit to the Grotto, Eric and Peter, first time visit for the King and future Queen sounds like fun to me! The stories that Eric tells can be very humorous, while being educational. He obviously reads a lot! He’s a walking encyclopedia, dictionary and internet search engine all rolled into one. Readers learn from anything and everything they read. I’m looking forward to the Wedding! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Eric and Peter are making plans to care for Cosmo during his recovery and rehabilitation after the stabbing. Eric clearly has plans in mind to upgrade the health care system in Makarovia. With the plutonium mines upgrading healthcare, treatments and facilities should only be a matter of time. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Family dinner time is pretty much the same everywhere. The honesty that the Royal Family holds themselves to is very rare in this age. The discussion about the World Wide Web and the naïveté of Makarovian society being dangerous because of the shear volume of scammers, fringe groups and criminals waiting to pounce. Eric’s plan to educate the people about the dangers is a very good idea. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Larry killed his brothers killer making him guilty of justifiable homicide. He’s definitely grown out of the bullying stage and is becoming the leader that he needs to be. Alex is justified in not punishing Larry as he needs his expertise. The raid on the school and the execution of the alien commander is a first step forward toward ridding the world of the aliens. The local Political collaborator who was killed in the crossfire was poetic justice. Collaboration should be punishable by death. Alex’s plan to take an alien ship but not take it back to their base is a good one. The seventy kid’s that were rescued as a part of the raid being housed at Larry’s farmhouse is also a good plan to get to know them and determine whether to bring them into their base. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Everyone is back in the Palace and we got an in-depth view of Mario’s all boys military boarding and Maria’s Catholic all girls boarding schools. Once Mario was finished explaining their childhoods, Peter and Eric, Olek and Helga put Queen Alla on the spot regarding marriage plans. Mario announced that a proposal was made and accepted. Queen Alla advised that a fall wedding in Boston would be ideal. I’m ecstatic for them both and I believe that Makarovian citizens will be very happy for them also. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The wedding ceremonies have concluded, Jihan and Kastan are now married. The emperor and Kyra are very happy for their brother. The empress however is not pleased. What treachery is she now plotting? I’m hoping that the newlyweds will be happy and at peace for a while. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The fortunate escape by alpha team was most likely that the aliens didn’t consider a small group of children as a threat warranting pursuit. I’m glad that Noah survived being “shot” during their incursion. The bravo team leader went off book and against orders to prevent the rape and physical abuse of children. Alex ultimately went forward with the rescue. Having the spy murdered in his cell, the lack of investigation of the murder and discovering that Status reports are being sent to Kelvedon Hatch have left Alex with several problems with running the base. He needs to take an overview position and not be away from the base going forward. He also needs to find out who else is working with the aliens and the mad general. His command is becoming more complicated. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😡❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m happy that everyone got back home safely and at the outpouring of love from the King, Queen, future Queen and heir to the throne, Mario, future Prince and Grandma. Peter played with Olek by not commenting about the new Royal jet. Olek revealed that the legal wedding would be held the next day wondering if Peter and Eric would be available to attend. They both replied that they wouldn’t miss it for any reason. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The overall mood amongst the crew, security personnel and the Prince’s is becoming sadder the closer to the end of the cruise they get. The truest test of friendship is communicating with each other. The stop to get Peter and Eric off the Duchess early is a great idea. The pirates will be disappointed by discovering that their not aboard ship. Meanwhile the Royal jet will pickup Peter and Eric and the security personnel and fly them safely back to Makarovia. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I suspect that the pirates will strike again, despite the Duchess remaining within visual distance of the coast. There’s a huge pay day for them if they’re successful in capturing the Prince’s. The closeness of everyone on board is a testament to the character and compassion shown by all. This cruise has been made with an extended family. The love and caring amongst them is inspiring. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! I just overlook any typos and other minor issues because I know that you’re still using a computer that you aren’t fully comfortable with. Give our terrific writer a break, if you just have to point out errors do it in a less public way. 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The age difference between Mercea and Mikell should not be an issue, they are both adults and free to choose whom ever they wish. The societal “norms” are imposed by hypocritical clergy persons, psychologically damaged social workers, doctors and psychologists who spout the same nonsense that’s always been spouted. Don’t pay any attention to the hateful, nothing would change their brainwashed thinking. I sincerely believe that these two are going to be very happy together and I hope that they get together soon. The world and it’s narrow minded views be damned! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️