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Outstanding story for the Holiday Season! Tommy’s parents had been teaching him to be more concerned about others than himself with minimal success. When he meets Jason in the mall, everything that he’d been taught made sense and he started making decisions about helping someone other than himself. This is a very powerful story that is appropriate for the time of year. Thanks Bill for an amazing story! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Jihan knows that he’s fallen for Kastan, he also knows that Kastan has fallen for him. Jihan ran away to protect the family and friends who allow him to be very successful without any serious scrutiny by the ruling class. Jihan wants to remain mostly anonymous in his business dealings to prevent scandal and investigations. Kamran is angry that he left without a word. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Yo, Ho, Ho and a Bottle of Rum
flesco commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Yo, Ho, Ho and a Bottle of Rum
Excellent chapter! Yuri is horrified by the camaraderie between Eric, Peter and their security team. Yuri has lost team members that he was close to before and shields his emotions by maintaining a professional relationship and aloofness. The possibility of a tracking device having been attached to the Duchesses hull is a real concern for the security personnel. The inspection of the hull is necessary to discover if they are being tracked. Eric and Peter aren’t able to understand the pain and suffering that the loss of a close friend on the security team creates. Welcome back aboard Yuri and Boris! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! A hasty departure from Malta after a group of pirates (?) show up claiming to need assistance, but had a submerged secondary group moving toward taking the Duchess. Eric is suspicious that this could be more than piracy. The special dinner that Henri made for the guys was amazing. Poor Peter is having trouble with American slang, which can be difficult to explain. Eric has an incredible amount of knowledge on many topics that he’s not afraid to share. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Success! The closeness and banter proves what Eric has been saying since the start of the voyage. Protocols and traditions are important, however treating them each as friends and colleagues gives them all the chance to be treated as family. Wayne being responsible for the website was a surprise, but once the Prince’s read what the reasoning behind it was, they were all for it. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Matty’s Big Week/Nate’s Tough Week
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Matty’s Big Week/Nate’s Tough Week
Excellent chapter! Poor Nate, Simon dumps him for their best friend who’s a girl, and couldn’t get it up without pretending it’s Nate. Eww! Simon is a piece of work. He expected Nate to take him back like nothing happened. How clueless is that boy? Your notice is disconcerting, I love all of these characters you’ve created. Don’t let anything bad happen to Nate, he’s such a special kid. I don’t think I could take it if you selected him for whatever life changing event you’ve chosen. I’m definitely not looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! The new website is a little bit surprising since the King, Queen and press secretary never mentioned it. A website was inevitable due to the overwhelming press and public interest. The bonds developed during the honeymoon have brought them all closer and a feeling of family is growing stronger everyday. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Artie finally got to see Ezra’s true intentions. After the team lost their final game Ezra just couldn’t prevent his true self from appearing at their lunch after the game. His overwhelming belief in his superiority as well as his condescending attitude about Artie’s lack of a strong father figure being necessary for success in life gave Artie a very powerful look into the nature of their relationship. Good riddance to bad garbage. Adam, Mason and Dizzy remained supportive and caring during the very trying weekend. Lots of hurt feelings, however they came through as the family they knew they were. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The adventure of their honeymoon is soon coming to an end. Yuri and Boris will be joining them again for the trip back to Italy. It’s going to be very emotional for everyone as the honeymoon comes to it’s conclusion. I will be very sad to see this story come to an end. I do realize that you’re planning to continue the story, however each ending is sad while we wait for the next story to begin. I have loved each and every story you’ve written. I love how your characters all value relationships over “hooking up.” My husband and I are celebrating 30 years together this November. Sharing your life with someone who cares for you is priceless. Thank you for all of your wonderful work! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The tours through Malta are giving the security team the opportunity to be friendlier with the Prince’s than would normally be tolerated. Yuri may be a bit annoyed that Eric and Peter aren’t following the strict protocols. I’m glad that Eric was able to speak with the archeology student while touring the ancient site. Peter was a bit impatient with how long the discussion lasted bu tolerated pretty well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Jihan was instrumental in preventing the massacre of Kastan’s armies, as well as uncovering who is behind the treasonous members of the Royal court. The explanation behind the magical connection between the ruling family was fascinating. Kiyan is aware that his wife is behind the attack on Kastan and his armies. Kastan is starting to reveal how much he cares for Jihan. Jihan is aware that he’s under the protective care of Kastan, but won’t admit his feelings. The treachery in the court is the main reason that Jihan didn’t want to be the supplier to the armies during war time. I really hope that these two very powerful people will realize their feelings and enjoy the experiences. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Donald Harper Transformed
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Donald Harper Transformed
Outstanding chapter! Donald and Connor spent the weekend becoming more comfortable with one another. I’m very happy for them both and hope that they will live happily ever after! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Excellent chapter! Donald has taken the first step toward finally admitting that his over the top hatred of gays was his own fears of discovery and the hatred his father showed constantly. The most vehement homophobes are generally closeted gays unable or unwilling to admit to themselves who they are. Hopefully this relationship with Connor will help him to accept who he is and allow him to be truly happy for the first time in his life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! I totally love Nate, he’s become such an amazing person and he is always correct when he’s giving Eddie or Matty his view on how they can solve whatever problems they are facing at that moment. I’d like to see more about Nate and Simon. Connor seems to be a good candidate for Eddie to have a great new friend. Who knew that Donald knew ASL. There’s an attraction between Donald and Connor. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Eric has befriended the Captain now, he’s from Malta and became the tour guide. He showed them his family’s home and took them to an ancient church from before christianity. They’re enjoying the tour so far. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Eric continues to doubt his worth to the Royal Family and the decisions that he’s been making. Peter sets him straight about his worth and value to all of Makarovia. Henri was impressed with how much in love the guys are. They’ve arrived in Malta and they are going to visit the archeological sites in disguise. What could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! I’m really enjoying the rapport between Eric, Peter and all of the people on board the Duchess. They’ve added more pieces to their own family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! I really hate people who abuse children. I hope that they are roasting in hell! Alec was victimized, overcame the trauma and shame associated, and became a successful guard in Makarovia. Now he and the Prince’s have become friends and I believe that his life will take a turn for the better. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The crew and security personnel are cooperating with Eric’s request for having a deck party and cookout. Alec is being stubborn, but Eric will get him to relax sooner rather than later. He won’t push for every detail. Abuse can take many forms. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Eric, Peter, Pano, Barry and Edger became very close friends over their stay in Athens. Now they’ve sailed away on board the Duchess heading to Antikythera. These last two chapters have been very entertaining and fun. I know that you are telling these stories for your own sanity’s sake, but we all enjoy sharing the wonderful imagination you bring to these stories and characters. Thank you for all of the hard work that you put into each chapter. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Eric and Peter spending time with the security team in a less formal setting has lead to the security personnel getting to leave the yacht and spend time sightseeing and shopping for their families and friends. The prince’s are still planning to return to Big, which turns out to be a private club, they’ve passed the ouzo test and are now members themselves. I think that when the honeymoon finally concludes, the staff on the yacht will miss them since they treat them all as friends rather than as servants. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Big was such a treat for the guys and their security team. The owners and regular patrons were very kind and treated them both like regular guys. The bar posted very large patrons to prevent paparazzi outside. The police prevented them from following by requiring documents that they’re required to carry. I’d like to visit such an amazing place, unfortunately I am very short, so would stand out like a beacon. I’m very sorry to hear about the sweet tea disaster with your Mac. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Very different days for the guys. Jealousy isn’t the best emotion for Eddie to be experiencing this early into their separation. Matty’s bewildered by this reaction. I’m concerned that Eddie’s jealousy may cause unfortunate problems later. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😃❤️ I would absolutely love another Barnstable novel. I miss those amazing characters!
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Excellent chapter! The overheard arguments from the soldiers is very concerning. Jake and Alex start to sneak away when Preston asks where their going and if he can come with them. They’re enjoying their first sexual experiences when their rudely interrupted by Preston. They are all screaming at the shock, hopefully the soldiers won’t overhear and come rushing in. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Jihan’s faith in Firuz and Lord Silver rescuing him from the trap he willingly walked into worked out, barely. Duke Silver’s comment about Firuz turning Jihan over his knee, is fitting and hinted at his genuine concern for him. The eagle that landed on Jihan’s arm must have a very interesting story that I hope you will share in future chapters. Andiya has departed from the Kamran estate. The ghost warriors at the inn has a tale all it’s own. I’m trying not to figure out how we get to the Duke’s army’s holding Jihan for execution. I am aware that you’re enjoying having everyone guessing, and that you started this story in this way to throw us off balance. You’ve succeeded. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
