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Outstanding chapter! Touring Corfu, doing a little shopping and dining in a cafe the guys are definitely enjoying their honeymoon. There’s a little concern that they’re becoming a little bit lazy. It will be interesting to see how nightlife is different from their other visits. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Finishing High School is Mostly Woke
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Finishing High School is Mostly Woke
Excellent chapter! An outstanding ending to this amazing story. I really enjoyed the depth and emotions that your characters contained. I’m definitely looking forward to the next book in this series. Thank you for a truly excellent adventure, living the lives you’ve created. 👏😃❤️ -
Excellent chapter! The interaction between Henri and our honeymooning Prince’s is very amusing and torturous for those of us who are watching what we eat. I personally don’t care about fonts, spelling, formatting or internet browsers. What I do care about is the story, characters and the ability to create emotional reactions and depth. Please keep doing what you love to do and don’t worry about the criticism given in these forums. Most of us couldn’t create what you have. We are grateful for the opportunity to share the vision that you have with each and every word that you create. Thank you! 👏 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The visit to Montenegro was hostile from a mayor of Podorica who only quoted from the Bible, and a reporter whose questions were also based on the Bible. The mayor listened to the answers that the Prince’s gave in response. The people of Montenegro are split based on religious traditions and teachings, but may begin the slow process of realization that prejudice and intolerance are contrary to all religious traditions. Change is a tortuously slow process to start, but eventually takes tremendous leaps forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Alex being the commander of the Fort should not have waited for a month to search the rooms of the new arrivals. He’s given Bastion plenty of time to plan for when he was caught. In addition to being a murderer he’s a traitor to the entire human race. Kelly is also a part of the conspiracy and I wouldn’t be at all surprised that the general is also. Bastion and Kelly should be summarily executed for their heinous crimes. There’s simply not enough resources nor personnel to ensure that they both will remain secured. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️
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Excellent chapter! The cruise to Montenegro is going very well, the stop in Podgorica should prove interesting as the Prince’s shine a light on human rights and tolerance for the LGBTQ+ community. What could possibly go wrong? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! They toured parts of Venice, rode in a gondola and got to see the damage from the constant flooding. Such a beautiful and historic place that is virtually doomed due to its poor location and political inaction. The flooding grows worse each decade. The projects being constructed may be too little too late. Yuri and Boris will miss their charges. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The Grandduchessa yacht will be quite the experience for the newlyweds. Touring Venice and sailing to Greece will be heavenly for the guys, I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The wedding, coronation and reception are completed. Now the honeymoon begins for the newlyweds in Italy. Helga is suffering morning sickness and could be pregnant. Olek is really happy and Helga Is worried about being an unwed mother. I’m certain that the people of Makarovia will be so excited about the pregnancy and wedding that the order won’t be an issue. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! The reception is being enjoyed by everyone. Its very sad that the hardliner terrorist group launched a missle at Makarovia but missed hitting a town in Turkey. The honeymoon is being altered as a result of a leak. I’m very certain that wherever the newlyweds go for their honeymoon They will only have eyes for each other. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Hooray! They are finally married! Let the celebrations begin and let the people show how happy they are about this marriage and coronation. I’m certain that the traditions for the reception are not quite as formal as the wedding ceremonies. Thankfully the attack didn’t occur during the wedding and coronation ceremonies, hopefully they can get through the reception safely and without incidents. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Matty and Eddie’s discussion about Matty’s inheritance was remarkably mature and well thought out. Their meeting with Eddie’s dad was even more enlightened than he was expecting. The tour of the Appalachian State campus led Matty to file a letter of intent to attend the school. Eddie’s meeting with Dr. Hodges of the Sociology Department was the biggest surprise when he told him that he should attend seminary and wrote down several suggestions for him to check out. Eddie was definitely surprised by the pastor recommendation especially after Matty made It also. Eddie on his way back to meet Matty, thought about the recommendations and began to see that this was the correct path for him to follow. Most people get a degree in social sciences before transferring to a seminary. I think that they both could be happy together at this university. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Each new chapter is a small step closer to the ceremonies and celebrations. Eric, I’m sorry to read that you were injured. I sincerely hope that you are well on your way to a full recovery. Please take care of yourself. No one wants to see one of our favorite writers laid up and unable to write. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! After you’ve gotten yourself healthy. 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Tension rules the Price household. Artie knows that he’s hurting the very family that he’s always wanted. He’s arguing with Adam and Dizzy without clearly being aware of why this relationship with Ezra is so very important to him. He’s very aware that he’s causing them pain and stress. The baseball practice with Ezra was more boot camp than practice with more than a few comments about a lack of faith and morality in the Bay Area. He’s trying to get Artie to come back to Texas where Baseball is still practiced in the correct ways, so he’s offered to have Artie attend a baseball camp without speaking with Adam about this plan. Artie is slowly becoming aware of who and what Ezra is. Dizzy’s very frustrated with Artie’s inability to see the signs of evil in his father. The scale is starting to tip back toward Adam. I only hope that he realizes how much damage this relationship is causing everyone around him. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😡❤️
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Excellent chapter! The funeral, burial and reception went well for Matty being surrounded by the Hamilton family and friends who love and support him made the very difficult process more bearable. The closeness of Eddie’s love and compassion were the balm that he needed most. After the reading of the will Matty’s officially a member of the Hamilton family, plus his father left him a substantial financial portfolio. He shouldn’t have any concerns about financial issues. His father took the easiest path for him out of the overwhelming pain that he was suffering. This was certainly not the best decision he could have made with regard to his son’s emotional well-being, however, he wasn’t able to imagine a life without his wife. Suicide is a very short sighted decision. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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One More Night and Home Again
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in One More Night and Home Again
Outstanding chapter! The family trip to New York was hugely successful. The reunion between Matty and his father was a positive first step forward. Their first day back to school was mostly positive. The unexpected sudden death of Matty’s father has opened the door to Matty permanently staying with the Hamilton family where he will receive the emotional support and comfort that he’s going to need to get through this latest loss of his only remaining family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! Jake and Alex are finally getting to the point where they are comfortable enough with each other to go to the common showers in the school locker room and remove their clothing. Jake doesn’t want to leave the shelter without Alex and their other friends. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter. 😃❤️
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I unfortunately fell behind in this captvatig tale and am working on catching up!
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Excellent chapter! Ezra has begun his campaign, he is definitely working with the grandparents. He’s gathering information and once he has enough then They’ll sue for custody stating that Artie’s living in an unsuitable home with a guardian who is corrupting the morals of a naive child. Once they bring suit back in Texas and win then Artie will be placed in a conversion therapy program to cure the evil. Artie and Adam need to be very careful with Ezra. Dizzy and Mason may be the ones best suited to seeing the plot unfolding. Hopefully Sarah’s phone call will help Artie to see all of the signs warning him. Adam isn’t aware of their conversations. He’s really got to pay very close attention. The emotional depth and complexities of these characters has created a profound bond with your readers. Thank you Ace for an amazing story that I sincerely hope will go on for a very long time. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The emotional turmoil is having a profound affect on everyone, Artie’s torn between wanting to have a relationship with his biological father and causing Adam pain and anguish that he’s not enough; Dizzy’s afraid of how Ezra’s going to affect his relationship with Artie and he wants to protect him from rejection and pain; Mason’s concerned about the stress of the reappearance of Ezra and the relationship between Artie and Adam being damaging, he also is concerned about the potential problems for Artie if the father turns out to be on a mission to destroy Adam and Artie’s relationship to regain custody. Ezra’s turning up accidentally at the park on Artie’s way home screams STALKER! He’s clearly up to something. What that might be, I’m not sure. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Jeremy - The Truth Is Out Here, pt.2
flesco commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in Jeremy - The Truth Is Out Here, pt.2
Excellent chapter! Alex finally confessed to Jeremy. Jeremy’s mother has apologized and asked him to forgive her for her treatment of him after coming out. Jeremy forgave Alex with the request of seeking counseling for his addiction, and he thanked Zara for apologizing but asked for time to heal from the pain she inflicted with her reaction to his announcement. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Outstanding chapter! Brandon calling Jeremy to ask if he could help with the fire is suspicious based on the history. Zara showing up just as Alex had to leave for work is an unknown, and Liz saving Alex at the betting sports bar was well timed. She made it clear that he’s out of control and can’t win the money for Jeremy and the bakery by gambling. She also advised that he needs to tell Jeremy about his addiction and stop lying to him. Hopefully this will snap him back to reality. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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Excellent chapter! Poor Jeremy, he just can’t catch a break. Alex really needs to work on becoming more responsible and truthful. His gambling addiction is still hovering over him and he needs to let it go once and for all. The two of them need to work together to make their dreams come true. Alex should start working with Jeremy to help him with the bakery and their relationship. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The plot continues and the culprits are being questioned and identified by some of the best intelligence collectors on the planet. The next part of the conspiracy will take place quickly before those who have been captured are identified and the individuals, agencies or countries are exposed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤭❤️
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Excellent chapter! Four imposters dressed as U.S. Air Force personnel caught upstairs in Peter and Eric’s suite is frightening to imagine what they were doing and how many others were involved. Another step closer to the ceremonies. Security is clearly being tightened even more than it has been. I’m worried that there’s more going on than anyone is aware of yet. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤭❤️
