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  1. flesco

    A Secret Admirer

    Excellent chapter! The coordinated gifts for Trey and Dion’s birthday was well received and the weekend alone was happily taken. The boys gift and agreed upon chores were also a nice touch. Tristan’s secret admirer at school has him wondering who it might be. Thank you for another amazing chapter in this inspirational story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Glimpses

    Outstanding chapter! The crises seem to have been solved, the guys are happy and in time getting married, the family is being reunited with their parents getting remarried. I’m extremely happy for theme, I really love a happy ending to these amazing stories. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    A New Page

    Great chapter! Alex and that damn gambling app is going to lead to just one sure fire can’t lose bet, which will end up disastrously. Brandon texting out of the blue and asking to meet as friends after having a makeover and a new less pompous attitude change. I foresee that Alex is headed for more trouble than he’s prepared for. He needs to spend more time with Jeremy for a reality heck. Why hasn’t he offered to help with the bakery? It would release Jeremy’s mother from having to stay on to help work. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  4. Amazing! The transformation has finally begun for them both, the first steps into a life of joy, happiness and love. Richard’s perfect controls and manipulation are about to fall by the wayside. This story is something that is very difficult to read, since it’s so dark and twisted. The support of the family and their overwhelming love for one another should hopefully bring about a future full of hope. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  5. Excellent chapter! The fiend got off easy. He should have had to endure the rape and brutality of prison life for the rest of his life. There’s a special place in Hell for people like him and I believe that he will suffer eternally. The guardianship granted to the Beaumont’s of Nate was the best outcome for them all. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 37

    Excellent chapter! The peace process with Lady Jane seems to be off to a positive start. The files and albums shows genuine concern for the twins by a grandmother with extraordinary resources. The file on Jay is concerning, even though we have no idea what was in it. I suspect that there’s abuse physical, emotional and sexual. I believe that some of Jays issues were the direct result of the abuses they suffered. I’m hoping that Lady Jane will offer comfort and support to a young person whose suffered greatly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  7. Amazing chapter! The dynamic between Greg and Nate seems to be moving forward toward a resolution, however, I’m certain that there’s still a few major bumps in the road coming up. I’m happy with the interaction between Kyle and Greg and the way that Kyle’s amazingly insightful mother got him to realize what he’d always known about Nate and Greg. There will be less suffering by Kyle now that he’s fully aware and supportive of the relationship between them. He’s an amazingly insightful young man who I wish that I could have met 40 years ago. He’s going to be very popular in Florida and will not lack for attention and popularity. He’s the real deal we all were looking for when we were teenagers. This story has a depth and complexity between the characters that is inspiring to the readers. Thank you so much for your story telling abilities! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 20

    Excellent chapter! The damn uncle rears his ugly head yet again, the new mage Kyle is apparently a pawn in yet another plan to use against Worthington. Hopefully Jaime and Worthington can find a way to stop their uncle in his tracks. The light’s price wasn’t anywhere near as onerous as it could have been. Worthington never wanted to marry and now he can’t. Randall will just have to work around that. It’s nice that Randall will be relocating to the Phoenix area to help support and guide Worthington going forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    All Clear

    Outstanding chapter! Hopefully these steps taken will end the haunting of their home by the two dead deluded bullies. It was definitely nice to see Sammy and Andrew join Graham for the trip to verify the medium’s work removing Hubbard and Abernathy. Tristan walking in on Joshie and Benny adds an expected wrinkle to the family’s dynamic. Tristan’s Dads will have to have a rather difficult conversation with their newest son. With Tristan’s mother keeping an eye on her son could add an interesting twist to the story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  10. Excellent chapter! Enrolling Tristan was painless and he seems to like his new teacher as well as making a couple of new friends. The large medium appears to have banished the bad spirits of Hubbard and Abernathy. Graham will be able to confirm that their gone when he arrives, and the extra stakes should help despite the obvious changes in the yard that the boys noticed. The adults all handled the situation with care and a little misdirection. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 36

    Outstanding chapter! Go Lady Jane Go! It’s very sad that she’s had to play the hardass in order to see her grandchildren. Both parents should be charged with child abuse, child endangerment, abandonment and any other crimes that could possibly be brought. Now that she and Drew have settled their differences, Drew now knows that the twins have the wrong opinion of their grandmother and he’s determined that they get the truth from her to start the healing process for all of them. I love how Lady Jane is an old world bluueblood who is more concerned about her grandchildren than herself or her station in life. The estate is just the place for all of them to recover,rest and recuperate with tested security and a distinct lack of the paparazzi. I am really impressed with Amara and Aria taking on their grandmother over Drew’s status. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  12. Excellent chapter! The facade of civilization is a very thin veil which keeps the masses at their jobs, schools and daily activities. Cain is not necessarily wrong with what he’s planning, however I can’t see Jake leaving behind Alex, Preston and the rest of his friends. There’s definitely safety in numbers and the fact that they’re all young would likely give them a fighting chance outside the wire. More bodies means more capacity to carry supplies, search for food and water and too help defend against attack. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 35

    Excellent chapter! I for one am truly impressed with the way that this new family has bonded and become comfortable with their roles. Cerrian and Jay have become very close, while Drew, Aria and Amara continue to define how their relationship will progress, each in their own way giving everything to the whole so that they will receive what they need with love, caring and support. The brief look at the twins paternal grandmother was less foreboding than they led everyone to believe. She appears to be very concerned about her grandchildren and their safety and security. Her being aware of the relationship between them not seeming to be a concern. The one on one meeting with Drew should be interesting. I really hope that she can be a positive and supportive person in the twins lives. They sorely need someone from their family who can be there for them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 33

    Simply Amazing! As usual Sui you’ve outdone yourself. This story had every emotion, every feeling and incredible story telling at its best! The storyline and characters were woven together in an amazingly complex yet inspiring way. My hat 🎩 is off to the artistic genius you are. I loved every word of this story and am hoping that there’ll be a second book. Thank you so much for these amazing stories and characters you’ve created. 😃❤️🎉👏🍾
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    A Currie Christmas

    Excellent chapter! The Curries are always so very busy during the holidays, their traditions and customs are very inclusive and inspiring. The fact that nearly all of the families and friends come for these holidays is a great blessing for them all. Very few families these days are so devoted to spending time with each other. The ongoing ghostly situation is coming to a conclusion soon hopefully. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  16. Excellent chapter! Richard is a very manipulative psychopath who is responsible for creating the emotional abuse which created the self imposed blind spot. There’s a special place in Hell reserved for people like this. The pieces of this very complex story are beginning to make more sense with each new chapter. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 32

    Outstanding chapter! The town meeting went smoother than you hinted at, I’m ecstatic that the town is moving forward again by welcoming their brethren from the swamp lands back into the pack fully. Milan’s new role in the pack was made clear by Sanctuary and the amazing amount of strength and compassion he wields. The discussion of what to do with Biosense took on an interesting turn when the Takeda family were chosen to lead the company going forward and Connor was going to call Ilaria to discuss the offer. I always hate to see these amazing stories and characters come to an end. You are quite amazing at luring us into your constantly changing stories. I will definitely miss these amazing characters you’ve created, and I hope that you will consider bringing them back someday soon. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 31

    Outstanding chapter! The love between Rory and Milan is deepening with each new day, this first date finally got Milan to fully engage with Rory, emotionally, physically and finally completing the connection through their bond. I’m happy that Ilaria and Milan had a talk and acknowledged that they were both wrong and still love each other unconditionally. Next up, the town meeting where anything can happen. I have faith that Rory and Milan will come through this with love for each other as well as the town and all of its residents and the swamp community will hopefully reintegrate into the overall Portento family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  19. Excellent chapter! Tristan is fitting in nicely with the family and seems to be suffering no ill effects from the untimely death of his family. The mishaps befalling various family members is creepy and now that Graham has arrived the mystery of these assaults is clearer. I’m happy that Brent and several other family members who’ve departed this life are now present and stopping the pair of evil thugs from moving forward with their attacks. Graham and the rest of the family will need to contact someone to drive the thugs away permanently. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ Thanks Bill, I’ve always enjoyed this series and all of your stories. 👏❤️
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    Chapter 32

    Excellent chapter! Go Mam! God bless Mrs. Pugh! She’s the perfect neighbor and friend to Mam, as well as a fierce protector of those she cares for. I love how these amazing women have taken all four under their wings. The caring, compassion and empathy that they have brought into the sad and drama filled lives of Aria, Amara and most especially Jay. All three young men are sorely in need of a loving family relationship and a mother who puts their needs first. The visit to the paternal grandmothers estate seems somewhat ominous, not to mention the trip to get there undiscovered. This road trip should prove interesting. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  21. Simply Amazing! You’ve told this extraordinarily emotional and traumatic chapter with compassion and candor. I’m certain that this was a difficult chapter for you to write, however, thank you for having the courage to tell it. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 30

    Awesome chapter! The inner workings of the pack are starting to be revealed to Milan, as well as, his role in the futures of the entire pack and community. The pettiness of some members is coming to the forefront. The newness of the relationship between Rory and Milan is inspiring along the lines of intensity and depth of their emotions and love. Milan’s telling Rory that he expects and wants a wedding is too cute! I’m really looking forward to the date next chapter. I’m guessing that these happy “fluff “ chapters will soon be coming to an end, since the town meeting, the swamp community, Rick’s fate, Cade Ogawa’s fate, Nissin’s condition and future, Milan’s being turned and mated to the Alpha, as well as theTakada families future. Rory has a full plate coming up and Milan’s going to be his support as well as a target. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 14

    Excellent chapter! The mundane government is proven to be incapable of negotiations between the Mage’s and Magical Races based on the mention of their treatment of the Native Americans and treaties. The Magical Races and Mage’s will need to be very careful in the negotiations and will need to make any treaties iron clad with no wiggle room for the government. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 13

    Excellent chapter! Worthington has to proceed cautiously, this agency has already started two wars with Mage’s and magical beings. Now they’ve opened the door by calling forth Demons. Jamie is the naive one and will be very determined to help fight the Demons. The problem is that the agency still wants to control Psionics. The agency will turn on their allies the moment they believe that the Demons have been defeated. They need to walk cautiously and be prepared to lay waste on the agency and it’s controllers. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 30

    Outstanding chapter! The family has become attached and accepting of Aria, Amara and Jay. They are all giving them all of the unconditional love and support that they’ve been missing for their entire lives. Mam is the central figure in the healings of not only the twins and Jay but also her own son Drew. She’s showering each and every one with exactly what they need. Cerrian and Jay going to the local pub should prove to be interesting. I’m so happy for all of them, they are finding out what family and love are all about under the ever watchful eyes of Mam. She’s aware of all of the impending drama to come and is setting the stage for a battle royale to protect her children and stop the abuse. I’m very glad that Drew ran home in this situation, Mam will provide all of the support he’ll need to end the suffering of the twins. I’m sure that the other shoe is about to drop, and god help anyone who wants to hurt Mam’s family. I’m glad that you gave us this happy chapter. Anyone who’s been reading your stories knows what you’ve got coming next. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ Thanks Sui! Happy Valentines Day! 💕
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