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Great chapter! The relationship between Leon and Logan is starting to thaw after the deception that Leon perpetrated. We’re starting to get glimpses into the characters and how they interact. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! College grads out for a good time, what could possibly go wrong? The approved itinerary is out the window already, I sincerely hope that Logan is fully prepared for any and everything. Welcome back Sui! I’m definitely looking forward to getting to know these new characters and the story as you develop it. I’m also definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The missing guests, the magical components involved into the Disney movies and theme parks could lead some to believe that Walt was aware of or a practitioner of magic. The closeness between Kyle and Worthington is nice, but with Kyle’s religious indoctrination is a relationship possible without causing serious harm and damage to them both. Mark seems like a very nice person but could there be Demons working behind the scenes to grab mages from the park for some as yet unknown reason. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The letters back and forth is too amusing. After camp ends Jimbo’s parents will be very much aware of the relationship shortly after they arrive. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The plot thickens with Trish manipulating Lynnette into her plan to break up the boys using Jace’s mothers jealousy to wreak havoc on everyone. The glimpses into the beginning of Brody and Jace’s beginnings is so sweet. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Wyatt wanting a dog is interesting, I’ve always wondered why there’s never been any pets for all of the generations of Curries. Kids and pets typically go together like Oreo’s and milk. Revin’s mother Becky is really nice and is going to include Wyatt into future sleepovers. Two more for Easter dinner won’t be a problem for this family and I believe that they will enjoy themselves and become regulars going forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I like that you’re allowing both boys to give their version of the story, first Jimbo in Chapter one, now Mason in chapter two. Mason has undergone a major transformation from total nerd to a teenager who understands himself and how to arrange for the goal to be reached. He’s grown tremendously emotionally and physically, he’s incredibly smart, but was sorely lacking in confidence. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Helene is a jealous bitch. She’s unable to bond with her autistic twins like Brody can and she despises him for it. She’s losing Jace and Lara due to her treatment of their friend. Her husband was correct in telling her off, unfortunately it was in front of the other jealous bitch Trish. This look into the manner of Jace and Brody’s early courtship is wonderful to see, while troubling that to be different is such a risk for losses of family and friends. Even today it’s still a major risk to come out. The abject hatred and propensity towards violence in today’s society is still a profound problem. The changes towards tolerance and acceptance are still moving at a excruciatingly slow pace. As long as mainstream religions are allowed to spread hatred and intolerance from the pulpit no one is safe. I support freedom of religion however they shouldn’t be allowed to preach hatred anymore than someone can run into a theater and shout fire and be protected by the first amendment. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Worthington and Kyle seem to be getting along very well and there’s less animosity about same sex relationships. The surprise vacation location for Kyle is pretty nice of Worthington. The guide Mark who is a mage makes me think that there’s something going on that Worthington is completely clueless about, and means that the vacation is over before it started. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Revin and Tristan’s first stay over went well. Revin fit into the family dynamic in every way and he was unafraid to ask questions and to ask for the kiss goodnight that everyone was getting. He’s missing the closeness between him and his deceased father. Danny and Brandon were able to give him some of that male bonding between fathers and sons. I’m sorry for Wyatt feeling left out of the new relationship between Tristan and Revin. I’m certain that there will be a friendship for Wyatt soon enough. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Lady Jane vs Jay, the conservative matriarch is overreaching once again. In her zeal to protect the family she’s forgotten that Jay is an abused child who has done what was necessary to survive. She clearly needs to be more sympathetic and supportive of the twins family. Drew taking Jay to the bus was a great idea, since it’s familiar and neutral territory. It’s heartbreaking that society finds fault with the victims of human sexual trafficking. They’re taken at a young age and cruelly treated by their “owners”, whatever steps they took to gain their freedom should be supported not criminalized. The victims are desperate and have only known cruelty and torture. Hopefully Jay with Drew’s support will put this part of their past to rest and will then be welcome into the family that’s being developed before our eyes. The twins are much stronger than anyone gives them credit for. They will accept and support Jay even against their grandmother. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! The relationship between the boys is deepening and Trish being the self centered individual that she is will bring disaster down onto everyone in the squad. She’s trouble and will not stop until she gets what she wants or destroys the relationship between the boys out of spite. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The difficulties and awkwardness of the teen years is rearing it’s ugly head in this situation. Both guys are totally in love with the other and very afraid of losing their friendship if they should slip and reveal their true feelings. Trish is a terrible friend and a two faced sneaky person who only cares about what she wants. She doesn’t give a damn about how anyone else will react to her treacherous plans. I hope that she fails. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The first meeting between Brody and Jace is a profound and beautiful thing. The friendship between the two mothers is really nice as well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Brody’s early life was hell on earth. I really hope that his going to school will lighten the load they are all carrying. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Mr. Norman will be a tremendous pain in Worthington’s neck. The pompous fool has shown his hand, and Worthington will have to find a way to make sure that they live up to the contracts to the letter. The trip with Kyle should prove interesting. Lowenthal is definitely leaning toward Worthington and may prove to be a valuable asset in the government department. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The mystery of the secret admirer has been solved. Revin and his mother seem very nice. The upcoming sleepover should prove to be interesting, I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Spectacular chapter! You’ve brought this difficult and horrible story to all of us in a realistic and dynamic way. The depth of emotions, the complexities of all of these characters, the truly horrific tale of the assault and the enormously traumatic road to recovery for each and every one of them. This was a very difficult story to read, but was told in a empathetic and supportive way. I’m proud of the way you handled this situation. I’ve fallen in love with all of the characters and wish them well going forward. Thank you for having the courage to tell us this story. 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! The coordinated gifts for Trey and Dion’s birthday was well received and the weekend alone was happily taken. The boys gift and agreed upon chores were also a nice touch. Tristan’s secret admirer at school has him wondering who it might be. Thank you for another amazing chapter in this inspirational story. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The crises seem to have been solved, the guys are happy and in time getting married, the family is being reunited with their parents getting remarried. I’m extremely happy for theme, I really love a happy ending to these amazing stories. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter! Alex and that damn gambling app is going to lead to just one sure fire can’t lose bet, which will end up disastrously. Brandon texting out of the blue and asking to meet as friends after having a makeover and a new less pompous attitude change. I foresee that Alex is headed for more trouble than he’s prepared for. He needs to spend more time with Jeremy for a reality heck. Why hasn’t he offered to help with the bakery? It would release Jeremy’s mother from having to stay on to help work. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing! The transformation has finally begun for them both, the first steps into a life of joy, happiness and love. Richard’s perfect controls and manipulation are about to fall by the wayside. This story is something that is very difficult to read, since it’s so dark and twisted. The support of the family and their overwhelming love for one another should hopefully bring about a future full of hope. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The fiend got off easy. He should have had to endure the rape and brutality of prison life for the rest of his life. There’s a special place in Hell for people like him and I believe that he will suffer eternally. The guardianship granted to the Beaumont’s of Nate was the best outcome for them all. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The peace process with Lady Jane seems to be off to a positive start. The files and albums shows genuine concern for the twins by a grandmother with extraordinary resources. The file on Jay is concerning, even though we have no idea what was in it. I suspect that there’s abuse physical, emotional and sexual. I believe that some of Jays issues were the direct result of the abuses they suffered. I’m hoping that Lady Jane will offer comfort and support to a young person whose suffered greatly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The dynamic between Greg and Nate seems to be moving forward toward a resolution, however, I’m certain that there’s still a few major bumps in the road coming up. I’m happy with the interaction between Kyle and Greg and the way that Kyle’s amazingly insightful mother got him to realize what he’d always known about Nate and Greg. There will be less suffering by Kyle now that he’s fully aware and supportive of the relationship between them. He’s an amazingly insightful young man who I wish that I could have met 40 years ago. He’s going to be very popular in Florida and will not lack for attention and popularity. He’s the real deal we all were looking for when we were teenagers. This story has a depth and complexity between the characters that is inspiring to the readers. Thank you so much for your story telling abilities! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️