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Outstanding chapter! The upgrades to the community on Pitcairn Island are extensive and extremely complex. The planning for all of this was ongoing for an extremely long period of time. Trenton has undertaken a huge project which when completed will definitely enhance the local lives living on the island. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The new adventures of Trenton and the new Oceania looks to be getting off to a profound start. I really hope that Trenton finally finds a romantic relationship with someone who understands his life and can help fill the void that he’s been living with for an extended period. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

You’ve always exceeded my expectations Bill, that’s what keeps me reading everything you have ever written! Thank you!

Amazing chapter! The emotional roller coaster is running at full speed with huge ups and terrifying drops and lots of twists and turns and loops. Adam is fearful that he’ll lose Artie as well as afraid to commit to Mason who is completely in love with him. Dizzy’s upset because he’s afraid of losing Artie and Adam both due to Ezra. Artie is concerned about Ezra’s motives and not being taken in by his overwhelming desire for a real relationship with his father. When Adam agreed to the weekend meeting, he specifically put Artie in charge, Dizzy’s overreaction to the evening meeting caused a major disagreement between them because Dizzy was unwilling to support the meeting and was hostile and downright rude to Ezra. Ezra’s never going to win any parenting awards, but Adam and Dizzy should be supportive of Artie’s wishes until a reason to disrupt the meeting is seen. Their fears of losing Artie should not stop them from being supportive. I love Colleen’s advice and I certainly wish Adam could tell Mason how he feels. He could end up losing a terrific guy if he can’t commit. The rest of the impending weekend and meeting are sure to be filled with more emotions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Elliot has now graduated from Yale University, boy do I feel older now. I clearly remember when he first came into the family. The family is ever changing and continuously growing and you never run out of new things happening with and to them to keep us entertained and living vicariously through them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m very disappointed with Masons parents and their uncaring attitude towards their only son’s suffering abuse at school. Dumping the decision on Jimbo’s shoulders is unfair and cruel. Jimbo’s conversation and orders to accomplish the educational tasks by Sunday was perfect. Masons behaviors regarding his school suffering being directed at Jimbo and telling him he hated him was just the first of many teenage tantrums to come. He did apologize for his anger. Jimbo taking Mason to classes with him on Thursday proved that Mason can handle college level courses. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Disturbing chapter! Davin is the friend of Juliana and who she was going to place the twins in his dungeon where he practiced on others to perfect his plan for the twins. I can’t even understand how you prosecute people like this. They’ll plead insanity and get locked up in an asylum for the criminally insane, but with Juliana’s acting abilities, I’m certain that she can eventually convince the social workers that she’s cured and be released, hopefully to a prison cell, or better yet, just charge her with capital crimes and execute them both. The upcoming media storm will be brutal on the entire family. I sincerely hope that you’re done torturing them now and will help them to recover and live completely happy lives together.in relative peace. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😡❤️

Excellent chapter! Leon telling Logan that he’s in love with him, haltingly was just what Logan needed to hear, they’re relationship restored is so nice to see. The plans to ferret out the persons responsible for the assassination attempts by faking the death of Prince Leon are being accepted by Leon better than Logan believed possible. David, and Sadie Riku, Petr, Anselm and Paul not knowing that Leon’s alive is going to be hard on them all. Their grief and reactions are necessary for the plan to protect Leon’s life to succeed. Logan will be in deep trouble with all of them until he can explain after the ringleader and his co-conspirators are captured. Constantine was not who I thought was behind everything. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️

Outstanding chapter! Logan and Leon hugging each other on the beach for over an hour, YES! Unfortunately another assassination attempt very much a full frontal attack with guns and multiple shooters is about to make Prince Leon’s life infinitely more complicated with the impending announcement of his being the Crown Prince. He’s going to be forced into the Royal Palace and his security cordon will be extremely tightened. This will definitely make Logan uncomfortable, however I believe that the Queen has a plan to keep them both happy. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 🤬❤️

Excellent chapter! Artie was having trouble focusing during the game until he started using the breathing technique that Jose gave him. He was more focused and confident and played better. The team didn’t have the focus that he and Jose did and they lost by one run. Jose pointed out that the fun had gone out of the game, so he tasked Artie with helping the team with their focus and Jose said he’d bring the fun back into their games. The call with Ezra was surprising in that he remembered what Artie had told him. Artie’s invitation to Ezra is making Adam uncomfortable, but he’s letting Artie make his own decisions. He’ll still support and comfort him if everything goes badly. He’ll help pick up the pieces if necessary. The final games will be more complicated with Ezra on the scene. It will be interesting what effect he’ll have on Artie’s ability to focus during the all important final two games. This visit could be a disaster of epic proportions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The relationship between the twins and the Currie family is growing very strong, the twins can’t help feeling safer and happier than when they are constantly reminded of their mother’s illness and death at home. How can they not be thrilled with hanging out with a group of boys similar in age and having fun. The combined family is in for a rough period when the mother dies. I know that Josh, Danny, Brandon and the rest of the family will be there to support and comfort them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Brandon outs Jeremy at the bakery in front of his mother, she’s unhappy packs up and walks out of his life, then Alex confronts Brandon and Brandon is unhappy that Alex doesn’t know him. Alex is finished with Brandon and won’t forget about his betrayal. Jeremy is very sad about his mother’s reaction to him being gay. Alex reassured him that he would support him no matter what happens. Alex has become more mature but still suffers from his addiction. I’m hoping he won’t let Jeremy down. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! Were learning a bit more about Eddie and Matty with each chapter. Matty taking the leap of coming out to his best friend and telling him he’s in Love with him is beyond courageous. The new relationship between them could prove difficult for many reasons. Matty needs to explain to Eddie the reason his father started hitting him just so he’s aware of what could be brought up by his father. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! This is a great start to a new story with new and developing characters. The premise of the story can lead to a great many twists and turns. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! Brandon and Danny’s birthday trip is giving them some time alone as a couple and to recharge and reconnect. All of the other adults stepping up to complete the renovations for Holly’s room, while they attend Elliot’s commencement ceremony and graduation. This family is the ideal so many of those children living in less than favorable conditions dream of finding themselves being taken in by. It’s ashamed that there’s not a network of hotels that can house and give hope to teens who are abused, tossed out for being who their meant to be, runaways and any others who need help and guidance. They would be expensive to run and the religious right would be totally against them. Finding qualified house parents and counselors would be problematic also. Reality sucks and I wish we all could live inside your universe. Thank you for another great chapter and an uplifting story for us all. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Everyone seems to be looking forward to moving into the hotel and are actually looking forward to living there. The family is now prepared for whatever changes need to be made to accommodate the transition for the new kids. I believe that the new additions to the Currie family will add a whole new dynamic where the all male family will become more aware of what is necessary for young ladies and girls to feel comfortable. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m so sad that the bitch will survive. I’m happy that Aria and Jay are well. Amara being shot by his mother is sickening. Aria slapping, punching and scratching her face had to have felt good for him. Lady Jane, Robert and the Police SWAT officer arrived after the main drama was resolved, and she started giving commands, she was arguing about what hospital to take Amara to. I’m not going to try to figure out where this story is going from here, but I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😡❤️

Outstanding chapter! Maman as the evil mastermind isn’t too big a stretch based on the story so far. The torture and sexual abuse of her twins is too sickening to imagine. She deserves to be killed by one or more of her twins, that would be truly poetic justice. My guess is that Aria is the shooter, he made her believe that he’s week and helpless, and she dropped her guard and he grabbed the gun to protect Amara and Jay from what she had planned. Everyone will be surprised that he could do it, but after all the verbal and physical abuse at her hands, he decided enough was enough. If I’m correct, then I will be very proud of Aria, even though I already am. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😡❤️

Outstanding chapter! The first day at school went reasonably well for Jimbo, the first day for Mason wasn’t as nice, since he’s being bullied. Gino the professor is a very nice addition. I think that black is going to alleviate the bullying that Mason is suffering through. I won’t even try to predict where this story is going next. I am enjoying the twists and turns and the gradual character development. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The trauma associated with his fathers reactions and pointing a shotgun at him, in addition to the stresses placed on him by the representatives of Masons family caused a mental meltdown. Who could blame him? They’ve given him no options to adjust to his new found responsibilities. Mason stayed by his side which shows that their relationship is strong and based on love and devotion. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️

Excellent chapter! Artie and Adam’s rather heated discussion about Ezra coming to visit was headed into dangerous territory, thankfully they decided to think about their positions and sleep, which enabled both of them to realize that they both have valid points and that they would move forward slowly and with caution. Adam agreeing to let Artie lead is a terrific idea, he’ll remain in the background to provide support and safety. Dizzy’s always a mess but is fiercely protective over Artie. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The conversations with Ezra are a bit trying for Artie, however he’s going to proceed with getting to know the man who is his father. Adam and Dizzy are supportive while being cautious. Artie’s distractions and inability to focus are stressing Dizzy’s normally distractive behaviors, he knows that he needs to get Artie out of his head without causing more harm. Adam is certain that Ezra is up to something, but isn’t sure about what. His answers about coming to San Francisco show his distrust and concerns. The breathing exercises should help Artie to better focus his mind and body. The suggestion by Jose was wonderfully timed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The transformation of David Chase and Charlie Danner is nearly complete! They’ve survived their breakup, separation, failed relationships, fame and fortune and finding one another once again. I’m really happy that their happily ever after appears to be within reach. The relationship between David and Noah could prove to a stumbling block, but am hoping you won’t use that against them succeeding. I’m heartbroken about the Barnstable Chronicles coming to an end. You’ve created a very special world with unique and very diverse characters. I’ve fallen in love with all of them and will miss them terribly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😅❤️

Excellent chapter! The elephant in the hut has been finally revealed in a not so controlled manner in front of the entire group. Ryan feels betrayed by Milan stepping away and later after Ryan admits that he’s gay, running away, Ryan becomes devastated. He’s feeling completely disconnected from the rest of the group, especially when Ryan’s mother doesn’t defend him against Milan’s family. I feel badly for Ryan and his hopes for a relationship with the handsome boy as it appears to be impossible. I’m wondering what reactions Milan will have after the revelation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Amazing chapter! This story of a self absorbed teen stepping up to defend a smaller boy whose being bullied in the boys room, and getting suspended for a week for his troubles. The friendship that develops between Ren and Jake ignites a spark in their lives, Ren who has been bullied and tormented and Jake who was forced to move into a new town and school. They become best friends with a mutual love of painting and art they fall in love. Tragically Ren dies unexpectedly. Very well written story, the emotions and feelings come through perfectly! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️