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  1. Amazing chapter! A hero rises, a second hero steps up at just the right moment to support the first. A coward in the position of being the sheriff and deputy are exposed and the persecution of the teenagers is suspended for the moment. This chapter brought to light that some of the zombies are able to think and plan. Great story and complex characters. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Chapter 22

    Outstanding chapter! Now that Milan has been let in on the secret of Rory’s life and Kiyo was brought forcefully into the secret, things will begin to change for all the residents of Portento. Kiyo will now be aware of the evil plot that Biosense is perpetrating. Very soon Lechter will be exposed. I love this story and these complex characters. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 23

    Disturbing chapter. You’ve definitely taken us down a road that we all new was coming but were hoping wouldn’t come. I really love Henley and his directness and his complete and utter love for his sons. He’ll never win father of the year, but he genuinely seems to care. Jay is a very level headed person who sees what’s going on around him. He’s a very good friend to the boys. He’s seen right through Drew’s attraction to Amara. Everyone seems to be aware of the attraction between Drew and Amara. I’m shocked that Drew and Jeff aren’t out hunting down Ben and Aria. It doesn’t seem likely that he’d just turn the tracking App over to the police. I’m hoping that Aria is as strong as he’s hinted he is. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Part Three

    Amazing chapter! These boys are so special and they are truly inspirational. The topics that they discussed in this chapter were something that the societal movers and shakers should truly spend some time thinking about. The trials of the storm added a unique perspective for those of us who will never be subjected to. I’m really impressed with this story and the complex characters you are developing. Thank You! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 21

    Amazing chapter! Wow, what a great way to bring Rory’s secrets into the light. Milan and his family has begun to accept the relationship between Rory and himself. Now that the Wolf’s out of the forest, how will Milan react? I believe that the love for each other will overcome this trying time. The promise of good health and freedom from disease should tip the scale toward Rory’s favor. You’ve left us all wondering now about what will happen next. Please don’t make us wait too long. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 6

    Excellent chapter! Very saddened by the deaths of Jeremy and his family. Worthington and Jaimie are going to have some major problems with Colin’s choice to lose his virginity and pursue a dark path. The problems with driving. Intoxicated or under the influence of drugs is a lack of personal responsibility. We’ve become a nation of people who blame everyone else for their problems and behaviors. The concept of personal responsibility has become as extinct as the dinosaurs. Very sad 😢 I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    DSS Chapter 12

    I really enjoyed this second story of the ongoing relationship between Earth and the Sahndrol people. This is a character rich story with a terrific storyline and a depth of emotion and drama, which was a tribute to the original story. I’m hoping that there’s a third installment at some point in the future. The relationship between the two civilizations still has a long way to go. Thank you for another amazing story! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 19

    Excellent chapter! These two just can’t stop speaking without thinking. Jason is extremely guilty in this case, however Aiden knows how Jason reacts to adversity in his life. They both need to be more supportive and speak about their fears and doubts in order to make them both feel more comfortable and build their relationship together. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 1

    Outstanding story! This truly special story that deals with the sacrifices of not only our armed forces and first responders, but of each and everyone of their families and friends. What a terrific way to highlight their service to us all, while making each of us more cognizant of the meaning of these sacrifices. Some are the ultimate sacrifice and WE collectively should always recognize and respect them. Thank them wherever you see them!
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    Chapter 21

    Outstanding chapter! The coordinated outfits is a nice touch, even “Dad” got the memo. Now of course the birth female is about to make her grand entrance into the boys party. I’m hoping that dearest dad will witness the interactions between his sons and “trophy wife.” The chill over the entire estate should be enough of a clue. I don’t have high hopes for this party to go smoothly. Thankfully Drew and Jeff will protect the boys. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  11. This is an incredible story with rich characters and an intriguing plot. I’ve enjoyed this story and am looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Chapter 18

    Outstanding chapter! A classic cliffhanger which leaves everyone wondering about what will happen next. I’m really enjoying this story and the very diverse cast of characters, each with a variety of strengths. The love story of these two main characters is progressing nicely and it’s clearly time for a roadblock to appear to derail the new relationship. As always I’m rooting for the relationship to succeed despite the difficulties and drama. Thank you for another great story! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 28

    Thank you for a truly amazing story! I’m definitely looking forward to the next story! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 1

    Excellent chapter! This recap is a great lead to the next story and all of the mystery coming. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 16

    A very sad chapter 🤬 Ben’s been doing exactly what I was afraid he was doing. I sincerely hope that Drew arranges for a very painful and accidental ending to this piece of filth. He’s got all the right connections to drop a hint to the right folks and Ben’s terrorism will be brought to a fitting end. I know you can come up with a suitable demise that will eliminate any problems in the future. I’m glad that Amara finally was able to tell Drew what’s been happening. Hopefully some poetic justice can be dispensed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Date Night

    Amazing chapter! The dinner for Adam and Mason was a success. Great job Artie on making a meal out of nothing at all! Dizzy’s rice was helpful also. The dinner interrogation was pretty funny and Mason handled it like a champion. The interaction between Adam and Mason is sweet, and Dizzy’s questions were pointed but germane to his inclusion into this family. Adam doesn’t want to admit how attached he’s become to Dizzy. I think Mason will fit nicely into this dynamic family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 14

    Outstanding chapter! Loyalty to family is foremost, even when not necessarily earned or deserved. Families have issues between them that can change the dynamic between them, however, they are and will always be family. The relationship between Rory and Milan is moving forward at a steady pace. Connor as the Alpha certainly brought an end to the fight between his boys. I’m encouraged that Connor is planning to use the promise to the Goddess “to always welcome those who seek refuge.” Milan being sick may be the key to the human as a mate problem. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 14

    Excellent chapter! The dynamics between Drew, Aria and Amara are becoming smoother and more comfortable. Alicia is a mixed bag, you can’t be certain how she’ll react to any given situation. Maman aka the farm maid is a total bitch! She’s in for quite a shock if her “boys” don’t attend her party. Ben is a problem that Amara needs to solve with Drew and Alicia’s assistance. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ P.S. I’m saddened to hear about piegate, and hoping your sister came to her senses.
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    Chapter 11

    Excellent chapter! The Alex and his team seem unable to track or find the saboteur. Alex doesn’t appear to be using the technology and equipment available to him. The A/I should be able to track movements within the complex. The overall collapse of civilization is progressing and as of this moment, there’s nothing that anyone can do to help. Alex needs to get better acquainted with Noah. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  20. Excellent chapter! The complete collapse of civility as well as the overwhelming desire to survive at all costs is wreaking havoc within the shelter. The slightest hint that there’s something wrong with anyone inside the shelter is creating extreme paranoia and overreaction to the smallest irregularity. The Sherrif is way off base with this situation, he assumes based on previous behaviors that Donovan is in the wrong and overreacts. Now that there’s a major attack on the shelter going on, what’s going to happen next? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 13

    Great chapter! Milan and Rory are getting closer everyday. Poor Rory, he’s got a nearly impossible future, he’s Alpha heir and his mate is human. His pack is intractable and his brother is a complete ass. Some of his friends are willing to support him, will they be able to help with changing the prevailing attitudes? If a mate is destined by nature then how can the pack object so vehemently? It’s definitely unusual for the two species to interact let alone be mated. Human tolerance and understanding is nonexistent. The future relationship is practically doomed. Hopefully there’s a way to bridge these attitudes and let them be happy together. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 34

    A truly inspiring ending to an amazing story! Adam and Troy are an uplifting couple who can inspire everyone to be supportive of each other and to live their lives with love, caring and respect for one another. The support and love that they received from their parents,relatives and friends helped to overcome their trials and to enable them to become the best people they could be. Thank you for a great story! I will miss these excellent characters you’ve created! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 14

    Excellent chapter! Jason taking Aiden to his house was a good idea, mom was welcoming, having sex with someone who is impaired due to drugs and alcohol is a very bad idea, especially when they are suffering from the trauma of a beating and rape. The breaking news statement was a nice cliffhanger. It can lead to a lot of speculation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃
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    Chapter 13

    Interesting chapter! Despite all that’s happening in Aiden’s world, drugs and alcohol only makes the overall situation worse. When you come down from your high all of your problems are still there and in most cases you’ve added a whole new group of problems on top. Escapism never works! Thankfully Jason came to his rescue after confessing that he’s gay to his mother and that he brutalized Aiden. She offered great advice! Go Mom! You Rock! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃
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    Chapter 12

    Excellent chapter! Talk about running a gauntlet, the Takeda family is extraordinarily protective of Milan. First Ilaria and her rules which must be followed, then Ayu and his rude and aggressive behavior, which Rory got past both of these formidable relatives. Marie likes Rory. The dinner went pretty well and Rory saw that Milan was tiring and Rory decided to leave, which impressed Ilaria and Ayu. The visit with his grandmother was beneficial with the gift of the bracelet which will assist him in keeping himself under control. A vague warning is mysterious. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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