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    Chapter 7

    Excellent chapter! Leon being shot in the woods outside of his castle means that his uncle and cousins are looking for a way to eliminate the competition for the crown. The Royal security seems powerless to protect them. Logan has captured the group that killed Leon’s parents. The intervening years have not treated either of them well, and they won’t take a chance to meet and pick up the pieces of their relationship. They’re both head over heels for the other, but won’t make the first move. The Queen needs to have her oldest son imprisoned or have him eliminated as a threat to her choice. She’s in danger as much as Leon since upon her death the first born ascends to the throne regardless of whether the title of crown prince has been for bestowed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  2. Outstanding chapter! Mason’s family is very supportive of both boys. Jimbo’s family seems to be very religious and unfortunately, Baptist, who are extremely homophobic. I see stormy weather on the horizon. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  3. Excellent chapter! The schism in the camp is beginning to form with the entitled adults appointing themselves into positions of power over everyone and dictating rules and regulations to be followed. Over time these rules will begin forming animosity and eventual rebellion and violence. Society only works when everyone is equal and does their share. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 6

    Excellent chapter! The death of Leon’s parents at the hands of Isaak should be sufficient grounds for the Queen to remove him from the lines of succession. I’m certain that he’s got several levels of cover between himself and the assassin. The Queen clearly isn’t safe nor are any others eligible to take the crown. The assassination of the prince and princess means that someone on the inside is assisting with the plot. Who can Leon trust now that Logan has been reassigned? Is someone in the Royal Navy involved? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
  5. Outstanding chapter! Jacob’s story has made me understand him better, everyone loses faith in themselves during difficult periods, he was so focused on being the perfect father with a special connection to Noah, that he forgot that he already had one. It’s ashamed that he couldn’t or wouldn’t talk to Charlie or the family about what was going on, he probably would have saved his marriage and relationship with Noah. Jacob telling Charlie to find David is the last step before heading to New York and Project Runway. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 39

    Simply Amazing! The story of Jay is a horrible travesty of the justice system. When you’re fighting for your life, you fight until you stop all future fighting from happening. The fact that the prosecutor filed charges in a clearly self defense case is due to the fact that the defense was a public defender. These crimes against children should be treated with care and compassion and on a case by case basis with Doctors and Counselors instead of attorneys and judges. As a result of telling their story to Drew, they have gained an ally that will not let any harm come to them. He will defend them to his death. They can see this in his reactions and caring mannerisms. They will ultimately be fine once they get the counseling and treatment that they need. Drew’s conversation with Lady Jane should prove interesting, and she will come away with a new understanding of how to treat people who’ve been abused and tortured. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter and hoping it will lighter. This was very difficult for a lot of us to understand. Thank you for having the courage to tell us about these situations. 😢😡
  7. Great chapter! Another holiday celebration for the Currie-O’hara family. Revin is a natural fit for the family as well as a reminder to the rest of the family that manners are important. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 4

    Excellent chapter! Logan finally decided to take the chance with Leon and they appear to be quite happy. The Queen is obviously alerting the rest of the family about troubles coming from within and to strengthen security. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Outstanding chapter! Prague was a bit of a test for the travelers, Riku, Petr, and Genevieve have a complicated relationship. Leon had Darius, but there was no spark, Logan suffered while Darius was observing his reactions to Leon being with him, he told Leon about his observations. Riku advised Logan of Leon’s feelings, it’s up to them to take the next step. The Crown Prince Isaak would kill every member of the family to prevent them from taking the throne. Things are about to get extremely complicated for Leon and Logan. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  10. Outstanding chapter! The Ellen show was beneficial to both David and Parker’s careers, it appears to have been good for Justin to realize that he was taking Parker for granted. David let Parker know that he’s not able to love him since he’s still in love with Charlie. Charlie still loves David and they may cross paths in New York City. The closeness of Charlie and Noah is inspiring. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  11. Amazing chapter! David and Parker back together after 8 years is sweet, then you added Ellen DeGeneres and their Chopsticks performance is like sensory overload. They both seem very happy together. Now you’ve added Charlie Danner and Noah into the mix and god only knows where this story will take us. Thank you Geoff for bringing back these amazing characters from your previous amazing stories. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    San Francisco

    Awesome chapter! Thank you Geoff for bringing another Barnstable story to life! I’ve loved each one and the depth that you go to, to develop your characters. David was a great character who made his choices and has been living with them for quite a while. Tran has had the handicap of his job getting in the way of developing anything with David. Parker showing up at David’s table should hopefully get a conversation going at least. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 2

    Great chapter! The relationship between Leon and Logan is starting to thaw after the deception that Leon perpetrated. We’re starting to get glimpses into the characters and how they interact. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 1

    Excellent chapter! College grads out for a good time, what could possibly go wrong? The approved itinerary is out the window already, I sincerely hope that Logan is fully prepared for any and everything. Welcome back Sui! I’m definitely looking forward to getting to know these new characters and the story as you develop it. I’m also definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 25

    Excellent chapter! The missing guests, the magical components involved into the Disney movies and theme parks could lead some to believe that Walt was aware of or a practitioner of magic. The closeness between Kyle and Worthington is nice, but with Kyle’s religious indoctrination is a relationship possible without causing serious harm and damage to them both. Mark seems like a very nice person but could there be Demons working behind the scenes to grab mages from the park for some as yet unknown reason. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  16. Outstanding chapter! The letters back and forth is too amusing. After camp ends Jimbo’s parents will be very much aware of the relationship shortly after they arrive. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    The Truth

    Excellent chapter! The plot thickens with Trish manipulating Lynnette into her plan to break up the boys using Jace’s mothers jealousy to wreak havoc on everyone. The glimpses into the beginning of Brody and Jace’s beginnings is so sweet. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Becky

    Outstanding chapter! Wyatt wanting a dog is interesting, I’ve always wondered why there’s never been any pets for all of the generations of Curries. Kids and pets typically go together like Oreo’s and milk. Revin’s mother Becky is really nice and is going to include Wyatt into future sleepovers. Two more for Easter dinner won’t be a problem for this family and I believe that they will enjoy themselves and become regulars going forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  19. Excellent chapter! I like that you’re allowing both boys to give their version of the story, first Jimbo in Chapter one, now Mason in chapter two. Mason has undergone a major transformation from total nerd to a teenager who understands himself and how to arrange for the goal to be reached. He’s grown tremendously emotionally and physically, he’s incredibly smart, but was sorely lacking in confidence. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Tension

    Excellent chapter! Helene is a jealous bitch. She’s unable to bond with her autistic twins like Brody can and she despises him for it. She’s losing Jace and Lara due to her treatment of their friend. Her husband was correct in telling her off, unfortunately it was in front of the other jealous bitch Trish. This look into the manner of Jace and Brody’s early courtship is wonderful to see, while troubling that to be different is such a risk for losses of family and friends. Even today it’s still a major risk to come out. The abject hatred and propensity towards violence in today’s society is still a profound problem. The changes towards tolerance and acceptance are still moving at a excruciatingly slow pace. As long as mainstream religions are allowed to spread hatred and intolerance from the pulpit no one is safe. I support freedom of religion however they shouldn’t be allowed to preach hatred anymore than someone can run into a theater and shout fire and be protected by the first amendment. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 24

    Outstanding chapter! Worthington and Kyle seem to be getting along very well and there’s less animosity about same sex relationships. The surprise vacation location for Kyle is pretty nice of Worthington. The guide Mark who is a mage makes me think that there’s something going on that Worthington is completely clueless about, and means that the vacation is over before it started. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Revin

    Excellent chapter! Revin and Tristan’s first stay over went well. Revin fit into the family dynamic in every way and he was unafraid to ask questions and to ask for the kiss goodnight that everyone was getting. He’s missing the closeness between him and his deceased father. Danny and Brandon were able to give him some of that male bonding between fathers and sons. I’m sorry for Wyatt feeling left out of the new relationship between Tristan and Revin. I’m certain that there will be a friendship for Wyatt soon enough. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 38

    Excellent chapter! Lady Jane vs Jay, the conservative matriarch is overreaching once again. In her zeal to protect the family she’s forgotten that Jay is an abused child who has done what was necessary to survive. She clearly needs to be more sympathetic and supportive of the twins family. Drew taking Jay to the bus was a great idea, since it’s familiar and neutral territory. It’s heartbreaking that society finds fault with the victims of human sexual trafficking. They’re taken at a young age and cruelly treated by their “owners”, whatever steps they took to gain their freedom should be supported not criminalized. The victims are desperate and have only known cruelty and torture. Hopefully Jay with Drew’s support will put this part of their past to rest and will then be welcome into the family that’s being developed before our eyes. The twins are much stronger than anyone gives them credit for. They will accept and support Jay even against their grandmother. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    The Spark

    Excellent chapter! The relationship between the boys is deepening and Trish being the self centered individual that she is will bring disaster down onto everyone in the squad. She’s trouble and will not stop until she gets what she wants or destroys the relationship between the boys out of spite. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Ex

    Outstanding chapter! The difficulties and awkwardness of the teen years is rearing it’s ugly head in this situation. Both guys are totally in love with the other and very afraid of losing their friendship if they should slip and reveal their true feelings. Trish is a terrible friend and a two faced sneaky person who only cares about what she wants. She doesn’t give a damn about how anyone else will react to her treacherous plans. I hope that she fails. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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