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Very sad chapter 😭 I knew what was coming, but it’s still so sad. I love Hayden, and his effect on Vic. I love this story and characters, however I’m not looking forward to Hayden’s death and the devastation that will cause Vic and their family. You’re quite adept at working our emotions with your stories. I just brought in a large number of tissues from Sam’s Club and can tell that you’re going to make me use quite a few. I’m looking forward to the next chapter despite the sadness that will be in it. Great story 😃

Great chapter! Adam has the resources to take to the in laws, political people can be easily smeared and removed from office without going over to the mob. However, Tibot’s contacts are not traceable back to Adam, since he and Tibot are estranged. The mobsters will be most effective quickly and thoroughly. As for DFS, Adam needs to prove the photographs are manipulated, again he has the monetary resources to have them investigated and the reports given to DFS showing so. The photos will most likely be tracked back to the in laws, and would lead to charges against them for custodial interference. Once that comes to light they’ll be politically dead and he can sue them into destitution. Once someone comes at you, you are forced to take them down once and for all. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Great chapter!, you’ve got all of your ducks lined up, and we’re ready for all of the battles to begin! I love this story and hope you’ll carry it on for a little while yet! 🙏 I’m looking forward to the next chapter 😃

I love this story and these adorable and amazing characters, I seriously don’t like cliffhanger’s, please keep the guys safe and let dear old Dad and Mike be shot going for the gun 🙏 Dead would be fine! I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter! 😃

These poor boys just can’t catch a break! Great chapter, unexpected twists, I’m seriously hoping that they will survive and be rescued by the police. I’m certain that Carlos knows somethings wrong. Please don’t hurt either one 🙏

Great chapter and story, you’ve created amazing believable characters, with many twists and turns. The emotional aspects of these characters is amazing.and spot on. You’ve had me laughing, crying, angry, frustrated and hopeful in each chapter. Thank you for creating this outstanding story. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter, and hope that Adam’s Pa gets a lengthy prison sentence, and that the sexual assault assailants are captured and sentenced under hate crime statutes, which generally are more severe, I would think that Pa should be charged under the same statutes! Lock them all up and throw away the keys.

Great story! I’m sad that Wayne and his brother had to go through the physical abuse by their father, the mother was useless and his childhood friends deserted him. Thank god for Carlos and his family and their support. Great characters!

Amazing story, great characters, dynamic plot and twists. I’m looking forward to seeing these characters in a future story. I just love ❤️ mom and her talk on relationships. I agree with “Yay Mom”. 😃

Oh no! It’s way to soon to be talking about ending. 😢 You could take these characters quite a long way. There’s so many possibilities!

Outstanding chapter! I knew that Hannah was going to be a major problem. Noah is in for a protracted battle with her, and Nick will be fodder for her to use against him. Why is it that some women can’t deal with their boyfriends friends and family spending time together? She’s showing all of the symptoms of a stalker: controlling, obsessive, explosive anger and vengeful. She’s going to be difficult to get around. Poor Noah, if he does go back to a guy, she’ll blame Nick’s gayness for turning her former boyfriend. Thankfully Andrews a lawyer and can force her to backdown. The guys need to clue in the Dad’s about what’s going on. Love ❤️ this story and the amazing characters you’ve created Geoff. Thank you! I’m looking forward to the next chapter. 😃

Great chapter! I’m so happy that life’s going so well for Nick. His family and CPS are so supportive it’s amazing. Billy is such a nice bonus for him, he’s so gentle and caring, I wish I had a Billy McAallister when I was a scared and closeted teen. I’m happy for the teenager’s today because of the societal changes that have been achieved in the last 25 years. They’re more accepted today than ever before, and by the time that their children are teens, hopefully the evangelical right will find something else to focus their hateful intolerance on. Hannah is making me nervous, however, Noah will not tolerate any grief, nor will Billy. I’m looking forward to the next chapter. 😃

Outstanding chapter! Great story and characters. This removal of Rob by Florida DFS, is extremely close to illegal. Adam’s legal representatives should have been notified and present when the DFS and Police arrived. Adam has the resources to fight this blatant attempt by the maternal grandparents to destroy Rob’s life. The grandfather should be brought down along with the grandmother for what they’re doing and have done in the past. I think I would be upgrading security at the house and putting in state of the art serveilance equipment as well as automatic drapes or shutters that would limit anyone looking in. Great story and I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Excellent chapter Geoff! I love this pairing and the entire family of carefully crafted and cultivated characters you’ve created. I know what’s coming next chapter and I’m stocking up on tissue boxes to be prepared. If you took my previous advice you’ll have a nice dividend check coming soon. Thank you for all of your hard work on these stories and characters! I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Outstanding chapter! You’ve started down a very complicated and fascinating road. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Thank you Eric, I really love the story and all of your dynamic and complex characters! This story just keeps getting better with each chapter. I think there will be a riot if you ever end this family! Keep up the great work you’re doing! I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Excellent chapter, it’s always a joy when a gay couple gets married! After so many years of persecution and denials it's a welcome step forward. I never believed that my husband and I would be able to get married in our lifetime, but thankfully laws were upheld for everyone, and we married on our 26th anniversary date in front of a County Justice of the Peace in rural, conservative Texas. The Justice even had created a special service for any and all LGBTQ couples to use for their special date. It was amazing! I’m really looking forward to the next chapter and this over the top wedding to come! 😃

Thank you for dusting this story off, this story is fascinating with very complex characters and plot lines. I am really hoping that you will continue this story. Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Outstanding Eric, I’m loving the interaction between all of these characters you’ve created and it’s amazing. This story and family is literature at it’s finest. Thank you for this and all of your other stories. 😃

Another great chapter! You keep adding,depth to your characters with interesting twists and turns. Each character is so very unique and complex. I love how detailed and thorough you are in creating them. I looked forward to the next chapter! Thank you for all of your hard work. 😃

Great chapter! Outstanding new characters, love the slang and dynamics of this new couple. I am looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Damn Noah, Billy and Nick are hot! Too bad they’re so young!😏

Your latest chapter is everything you’d expect when the first love comes around! They’re just too cute! Thanks for the advance warning about troubles ahead in this story, I’ll stock up on additional boxes of tissues. Great chapter, great story, looking forward to the next chapter. 😃

A very interesting start to what appears to be a very creative story, good characters and a terrific setting. I’m looking forward to the next chapter of this story! 😃

Great chapter and story the drama is intensifying, with the fake colonel not being aware of the corporal’s secret abilities. He’s in for quite a surprise. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Nice but short, you need to start developing these characters with a bit more depth, the teasing of the newbie was a nice touch, I also liked the description of the ship and crew areas. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! Just add some depth and details and a bit longer would be welcome. 😃