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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 5

    School should have been child's play for Taine, but his academic righteousness couldn't stay silent and he humiliated what he saw as hacks. Wrexham is well named, she wrecks 'em. Charlie's mother is really impressive. I liked Tyler comparing her to a mob boss. And just to think, this was only his first day back and he's already a legend.
  2. The greatest discovery in life lies within our self.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 4

    Someone needs to tell Tim's dad about this place where he can get some free bacon. The secret phrase is, Denton sent me.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 24

    Yes, Fenn can be that stupid. No, not at the bottom yet.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 24

    Varilik is revealing more and more of his true self. He's willing to be dishonest if he gets his way. He also wants Fenn for himself.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 4

    You're asking him to violate site rules?
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 4

    Charlie has become too entwined with his borrowed life. He's more engaged with it than the real Charlie. We knew he would have to go and confront the real Charlie, who is both angry and scared. Taine has made a promise to fix this, but will Ellis let him. And Michael was a demon hunter, a good one. One piece of the puzzle.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    It's what happens when you get stuck with a gender neutral name.
  9. Alienation and loneliness have become more common in modern society.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    Tim peeled back enough of the onion to get an overview of the game they're trapped in. It's more complex than they thought. They don't even rank as players, but pieces. It's dehumanizing. On another level, the part they've started playing is unlocking real feelings.
  11. Whoa! We get a hot and spicy chapter where everyone is getting along. This means badness lies ahead.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    I'm happy for Enlin. Yarima isn't a bad sort. But having a relationship while this war is ongoing will be complicated.
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    It's not something a native speaker would notice because it sounds normal. It's mainly the glottal stops and devoiced consonants.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    We still don't know what happened in 1987 and the nature of the debt. And Tyler has his own mysteries with the pendant and Roman numerals.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    I do like Tyler. This will be fun.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    And when the witch floats up off the mat?
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    Trouble can be fun.
  18. Belonging is a desire exploited by social media.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    The ultimate high school play?
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    They aren't ten.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    As they said at the Colosseum, Bring on the victims!
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    Reality trounces all their carefully planned scenarios. If they continue like this, they're toast.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 21

    Ask Vanna for a vowel.
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    They could be seen by... Bob. God forbid, not Bob!
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 22

    Ain got a happy glow from Petre telling him she looked on him as a brother. After seeing Fenn's feelings toward him first hand, there won't be more of those anytime soon. Nothing was gained by this spying.
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