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  1. An expression can also be a figure of speech.
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    "You really did hit your head harder than we thought, didn't you?" Charlie has people around him who are far too observant. Chloe. His mother. Tyler. And those pesky hormones.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    I just had to.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    I'm confused. How do you blackmail them into a public pretense of intimacy by threatening them with photos of intimacy?
  5. drpaladin

    Prologue

    From terror to more terror. A night neither can remember and a hotel room crafted as meticulously as a movie set. They easily found the condom wrapper, but more importantly no condom. This signals a setup. They aren't sent a steamy sex video, but photos merely suggesting intimacy and it's more than enough to ruin them. They're both trapped.
  6. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Yummy Yummy.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 21

    Varilik has been planning this for awhile. He had to find out Fenn's measurements and have clothing crafted beforehand. Fenn is so naive and easy to manage by an expert like Varilik.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Alistair's dilemma gave me a headache. Ellis is devious. One person's heaven is another's hell.
  9. Identity has become another possession to worry about being stolen.
  10. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Oh my. A devil's bargain. Never force philosophy professor's into anything.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    I still recall Elias' first reaction to our valiant Jack. He thought he was ugly. As Theo pointed out, he understands and he carries grudges.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    To chaos finding its calm. And calm finding its chaos.
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    Ain seems to be cursed by foot in mouth syndrome. And Varilik has Fenn ensnared. What a mess.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    There are tracks in Merrickville. Absence of a station means little.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    They'll still find a right of way, but honestly.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 7

    You know Finn has the Highmore Snap-On pry bar.
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Gerald says, Never you mind. Orel is nosy enough.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 7

    FAMILY (The Real Kind) "Laeling creates a new reality." But a little help never hurts.
  19. Somehow I never seem to transition from imagining exercise to the embodied version.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    It's never a good idea to try and cheat a professional gambler. They already know all the tricks. Bruce better get used to being Brucie. Cam so deserves his happy ending. They all do.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    Maybe switch to singing telegrams?
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    Fenn is firmly under Varilik's spell. Going back with an attitude and the big head won't help him any.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Ollie hasn't had any dating experience, but he is intuitive and wise. He knows it would be disastrous to give Axl a car. I can say it's an almost reflexive action when you have money as Ollie does. Maybe he's learned this from observing Finn and Orel.
  24. Becoming is also used to indicate something is flattering to appearance.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Salvation comes via an unlikely and reluctant union of a feral boy and a war horse. Jack does his duty again and Kieran stones for his sins.
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