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    The Ceremony

    drpaladin commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in The Ceremony

    Being gang banged is a rough way to gain power and allowing some unknown entity to share your body is sketchy. Needless to say Qualls left out an awful lot of details. I hope this isn't a big mistake.
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    Remains

    drpaladin commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in Remains

    Rescue is only moderately better than captivity by the goblins. Simon has the right idea, there is nothing left for him here.
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    The Goblin Camp

    drpaladin commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in The Goblin Camp

    The goblin chieftain treated Simon like he was a great treasure. I'm guessing he told the other one Simon was off limits. Amos might be out for himself, but he's not quite as bad as he first appeared.
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    Sit On It

    drpaladin commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in Sit On It

    No seconds for Trent. He was a bit dull witted. The fact the goblin wasn't fazed there were three of them should have given him pause. IMO no great loss. Time to make tracks or for Simon to be all he can be.
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    Seeing one definition is 'an historical process by which the semantic and connotative status of a word tends to decline' makes perjoration a study in irony. There aren't even any examples of recent use.
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    The Bargain

    drpaladin commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in The Bargain

    For some reason I envision an acute shrinking spell in Bronn's future.
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    Prologue

    drpaladin commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in Prologue

    This Lord Byron isn't the poetic and romantic type.
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    Yep.
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    More like German cinema rather than Hollywood since it was Nosferatu which started the trope. In Bram Stoker's novel, Dracula could walk in sunlight, but couldn't use his powers. It's only by accident copies of Nosferatu exist since Stoker's heirs sued and won a copyright infringement suit and all copies of the film were ordered to be destroyed.
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    I have always enjoyed the night.
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    Chapter 37 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 37 S1

    I can't.
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    No chotomies actually died or were harmed here.
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    Chapter 37 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 37 S1

    Of course it's unnatural. After all, it's why they call it supernatural.
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    Chapter 37 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 37 S1

    I'm troubled by Mac not telling his parents. Why doesn't he want to tell them? I know Bill won't say, but is this secret another one to be revealed if/when they find out?
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    In other meanings, the moon has a dichotomy when it's half illuminated. When there are two ancestral lines which are separate and divergent, this is a dichotomy.
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    This is proof @Myrreads our comments since we talked about this one yesterday. And Myr doesn't teach English.
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    Chapter 14

    drpaladin commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Saturday?? Don't get carried away.
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    Chapter 14

    drpaladin commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 14

    You could go ahead and post it early.
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    Chapter 37 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 37 S1

    I was referring to keeping this from Mac's parents.
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    It gets more confusing since ravish can also mean rape. The words ravish and ravishing (of unusual beauty) come from similar but different words in Middle English; ravisshen and ravyschinge respectfully.
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    Chapter 37 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 37 S1

    They are transitioning to being back home and into a new normal. Teaching Mac to change into birds and fish will have new challenges to face. I can imagine learning how to duplicate gills while in human form could come in handy. If an entire tribe became skinwalkers, it would fairly quickly be devoid of females unless they were added also. It would certainly attract notice. A whole flock of very long lived individuals would be hard to manage and hide. Secrets can be hard to keep in families. I hope this one doesn't come back to bite Mac in the ass.
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    We naturally use our thumbs for so much and it seems right to use the palm and fingers to grip and the thumb to find the pulse. It's the most common mistake people make when learning to take a pulse.
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    But he didn't show him exactly where the pulse could be found or warn him not to use his thumb. The directions were very general. It was a ploy so Jubal would feel comfortable holding on to Lucas.
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    Chapter 6

    drpaladin commented on Roland's story chapter in Chapter 6

    So many relevations in this chapter. Xavier feels Kandric's third dragon kill and it reminds the group of the god, Rovnar. The amulet Lucas wears magically reveals the image of his mother holding him as a baby and Mablin is able to discern Lucas is a direct descendant of Odin and Greysac. The legend of the magical weapon hidden at Lucas the Lost surely gives them a new destination to their travels. They have reluctantly accepted Syth must pretend to be a gladitorial slave for them to travel safely in this time.
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    Hopefully Lucas and Jubal.
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