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Honestly, I wasn't either, but looking at videos of his performances from 1974 it's glaring now.
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The first concert I went to was Elton John back when he was losing his hair.
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Zimmerman knows her job well. She reminds me a bit of a teacher I had. Both of these couples compliment each other. Young love doesn't always pan out well, but this has a sense of permanence to it.
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Mission accomplished. HEA achieved. I wonder how Jonathan would have liked a theft charge? Of course, Marc is just too darned nice.
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Chapter 8 - Intoxication
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Intoxication
Our bio-shift revenge thruple have become more ambitious by slaying 18 at one time. Vion lucked out. I wonder if they were all dead when he came home or just didn't come down stairs. How awkward. It reminds me of this true story of an MP in Germany responding to a domestic dispute in base housing. He and his partner came under fire before exiting their jeep. He screams into the radio, "We're being shot at! Call the f'ing police!" The calm reply comes back, "You ARE the f'ing police." -
fallow - Word of the Day - Tue Mar 21, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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What was your solution?
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The touchdown play against the Bobcats was epic and so vivid. It was the ultimate icebreaker with the team. With an entire football team having your back, why worry about Dickie and his cronies? The whole Greg and June bug thing came as a blindside to everyone, but was so obvious once it was thought out. I don't think it'll take a month for Greg to figure it all out.
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I hope I'm not making a mistake by starting with a later story rather than at the beginning I suppose I'll find out quickly.
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Chapter 7 - Dozi's Family
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Dozi's Family
So much for an idyllic reunion with her family and friends. She had no clue how bigoted they were. It's unfortunate and sad. At least Dozi didn't bring her friends to her former home. -
I hate to impose the guy on anyone, but Dickie and Carla? What an aroma those two could make.
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All this time I've wondered about Marc's parents source of income. It has to be some type of non-profit. Now don't get me wrong, there are many wonderful and selfless people helping disadvantaged people. Jonathan is not one of them. He violated the primary rules of decency by not raising and caring for his own son. He has a bad case of savior syndrome.
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Since this is a voluntary gift, it could go directly to the charity in May's name to deprive Jonathan of the glory.
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Jonathan is such an unmitigated ass. He deserved nothing at all for the years of neglect. Marc is a saint. "That's Bruce Banner, and I think you just made him angry." That was a scream.
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And they don't hang about in sculleries with scullions.
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Chapter 6 - Vion, Part Two
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Vion, Part Two
These Messiahs are more than just a bit obtuse to not know how people feel about then. It really is too bad the residual energy of the shift wasn't enough to kill them. -
You will not find sculls in a scullery.
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Yeah, there's more.
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Keep in mind Geron lives in New York State. I've heard this type of inflection a lot. Most of it depends on the neighborhood you live in. You speak what you hear every day.
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This was a wonderful chapter. It captured all the joys and fears of young love. "I mum-mew." LOL
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Chapter 5 - Ninyani & Ilya
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Ninyani & Ilya
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Chapter 5 - Ninyani & Ilya
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Ninyani & Ilya
It seems the story Ninyani's mother told him about her friend's daughter didn't sink in or he's still in shock. Good thing Ilya has thermal immunity or she'd be dead. Dozi may be close to her wish of becoming more than human since Ninyani has the old man's mantis gland. Time for a seek and destroy mission against these creatures taking children. -
I mentioned in an earlier chapter that the brother's names were flip-flopped if you go by the traits of Tom and Huck.
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But which nickname did he give to which boy? Did he go by name or their nature? We may never know.
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From the adrenaline high of the discovery to the crash of knowing this will be the end between him and his parents. No matter how old you are, a child still craves love and affirmation from parents.
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