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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    One thing I'm fanatical about is having plenty of gas in the tank. They never get below a quarter of a tank. My mother was terrible about remembering to have the cars gassed up. I can't count the number of times she ran out of gas or locked her keys in a car. It left a permanent impression.
  2. I'm more discriminating about where I order oysters since a three day ordeal of acute food poisoning.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    You don't get a more perfect ending than this one. Thanks!
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    She was already showing signs of resisting control when she arrived outside, plus Swift wasn't precise with his command. He told her to shoot her friend, not to shoot Jase. Swift always put himself out there as a friend.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 18

    Well, that sucks. Jase has both the power and the ultimate temptation. The big question is where did Phillip get the you can't heal anyone else rule and is it valid here. It's not like Jase has an official rule book.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    The light bulb comes alight and Swift is revealed as the knawing feeling Jase has had. What has he been doing to Macy? From his description, he didn't strike me as someone who would have the size twelve footprints outside the condo.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Happily too. I like my whiskey neat and unadultrated.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Yes, I know. But She Who Will Not Be Named lives there now.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Please tell me you don't hate cats. For a drug lord, Mr. Mangy wasn't very awe inspiring.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    They zeroed in on them a bit too well. For having an empty gas tank, the Jetta is making the rounds.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 14

    Not really. The concentration was on the murders that night and evidence. None of the things left behind were evidence.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Incompetent security guards are the norm.
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    When you have no idea where to go, go back to the beginning.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    If Jase can sense Macy and find her, the dark side can too and probably know how to block the signal also. They have her.
  15. drpaladin

    Forward

    They always make the mistake of underestimating Kalien.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    It would explain a lot of what's been going on. One little blip there. He seemed to be affected by Jase's power at the station. Did he sense it and put on an act?
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    "There are no coincidences." It does beg the question, Phillip is there to talk to Jase just when he's needed. Does the mission ever truly end? Knowing they have counterparts with similar powers is a disturbing idea. It does cast a different light on the difficulties he's facing with this last task.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 8

    Telling his story would have to be cathartic and it should deepen their connection. The original meaning of lam is to beat and Mark Twain was the first to use it.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 7

    If these people will assault a police station, they are capable of anything. I'm not entirely convinced the condo is safe.
  20. Yes, those and the big wax lips. It's also used on fruit and some chocolate treats.
  21. Some forms are edible and most have eaten it in some form.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Yes, one of those gizmos would be handy
  23. Ninyani has gone to what must be for him Wonderland. It's hard to contemplate casually walking past the Messiah's Tower, especially after their recent attack. I wonder if it's the target.
  24. Some things change, but Gulf Wax seems eternal.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    I would have at least scored some fries. Jase and Lucas are meant to be together. There's no other reason his power is useless against him.
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