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Between truly close friends , more often than not one feels more than the other , it’s a tradgedy of close friendships . When the truth finally flows in meaningful conversation it is often uglier and more painful than we want to admit to , but it also clears the way for more meaningful interactions. What an awkward , gentle , genuine coming out and confession of mutual admiration . Absolutely fabulous !!
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Being out of the sick-room and in the open is probably just what Milan needed , Ayu knows that and Ilaria recognizes it almost immediately . The Townsfolks reconnaissance has started , and the pack will soon know of Milan .
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Chapter 1 Flight or Fight
deville commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Flight or Fight
The layers and complexities that make up individuals , are always quite fascinating, though oftentimes astounding when confronted with them in the ones you love! Communication , sensibility and sensitivity are usually the only keys you will be equipped with to navigate this minefield . Chris managed exceedingly well to disarm a quite volatile situation and persuade Paul to listen to the both of them. -
Part one , done! All safe while inflicting the greatest measure of damage and pain . Check! Now to regroup , get intel in the other offensive and take the battle to the stars. Kohen makes an interesting statement at the end , verbalizing to the Captain that he will look out for him and his emotions too.
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Never a good idea to let a big Bio- investigation/ research company get close , especially if you have genetics you want to keep hidden. I think the Mayor let a little greed cover her judgement. Doesn’t seem that any one knows much about the company and what it is doing near their town! Seems negligent !
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Elsior is truly repugnant, his plans however are quite well thought out and set in motion. I feel however Rea may be a flaw , I sense she may be the mother of two certain innkeepers , one of whom is bound to be lurking in the subconscious of Birten. .... maybe !
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So Noom is changed now! Wonder how Kelaste will take that? I don’t envy , Envy his new role. I do believe Siccu is far more twisted than we’ve yet encountered .
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Dear me , I feel quite alien I actually do enjoy Shakespeare ! A fantastic read , different and quite believable .
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Well , the Morgan family are different .... to say the least. Did Dolon survive the collision? Chris’s comment that he got what he deserves is ominous. Mayhap Milan is going to be protected just fine....
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A vivid and masterfully rendered reminder of the beauty around us that we miss with our eyes perpetually glued to the next event-horizon of our lives or phones and i -pads. Thank you.
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Well that was refreshingly different . It’s always a little uncomfortable entertaining a deity in your sitting room . I always insist on meeting them in a circle , in my shrine room.
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Intriguing beginning , air travel is always a hazard for people with an immunodeficiency or on immunosuppressants, aero planes are generally crawling with a lot more than just irritated travelers. It’s heartening that his family are so close to Milan and aware of his limitations .
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Gosh a really sweet dinner date !
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Gay For You. Or Something.
deville commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Gay For You. Or Something.
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Subtle murmurings of a coup d’etat ? Let’s hope Marges’ days as the Iron Lady are limited .... severely . I enjoyed the scenes with the old guard.
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Redolent with the feel, sound and repetition of the court room. Excellent ! We do however often wish that justice wasn’t quite so blind ..... or maybe nowadays blind and deaf .
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Mayhap the conspiracy will learn first hand and painfully , how badly Lakshou let them down.
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Even though his emotions are involved , the Captains decision making process is less than stellar on this occasion . He needs to stop trying to protect Kohen from everything and show Kohen that he believes that Kohen is as capable as he keeps telling him he is. At least Kohen has his priorities in line .
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Well! The peddler and Elsior work together , the peddler sold Elan the sanguistis, the peddler has a teleportation necklace , Elan and Keps find a nest of hatchling dragons , when this phenomenon never happens .... so the peddler transports a number of eggs to a cave to keep all the dragon slayers involved whilst Elsior uses his conjured dragon to attack the kingdom or something ? Interesting to say the least! Why move Birten to the ends of the earth ? Where is Daegon?
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Loved the gentle manner in which Christmas rolled over and Andy and Adam embrace Eric and are embraced in return. Eric really had come into his own , accepting Adams offer of a gift , whilst truthfully justifying what the intention means to him . Quite beautiful , really.
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Chapter 28 - Salvation Road - Finale to Darren and Christian
deville commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Salvation Road - Finale to Darren and Christian
The overwhelming feeling for me , is that Ryan is a man swept up in the moment , protecting his family and not really engaging with the situation. Reality is slowly making an appearance and with it rational thought... I have a suspicion Darren is not getting off easily at all. -
Topher - "False Witness"
deville commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Topher - "False Witness"
I sympathise with Topher in the main, however his blithely following situations to avoid confrontation and his passive -aggressive approach to his father and other members of the church community is going to make s bad situation worse. I’m not sure Maverick has post - grade amnesia ...... just a feeling .... but it’s just too easy.... lulling his attackers and the rest of the school into a false sense of security , before he wreaks havoc on them . Anyway , perhaps it's what I hope will happen ! -
Maverick - "Spider Lily"
deville commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Maverick - "Spider Lily"
Maverick is extremely interesting...... I may even start liking him. -
Veikko - "The Dark Angel"
deville commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Veikko - "The Dark Angel"
Veikko is far more complex than his bitchy persona initially allows credit for. A chapter full of unsuspected insights into the characters. -
A beautifully touching piece of writing .
