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I hope that a little self discipline has been learnt as well as everything else. The world runs on varying shades of grey and black and white is for penguins and zebra, self discipline lets us think and evaluate before we leap. My rant is over. An awesome chapter and the time spent in the Hall of Maktar was potentially very useful (I wouldn't want to usurp the author in their own work). Thank you for sharing and very well done.
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Gustav should have been incinerated in the same fashion as the rouges were! All in all a very strong chapter, well done and thank you for sharing. Perhaps bending time will allow him to realise this and to take appropriate action, the Royal Preogitive to eliminate enemies where ever they may be found.
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Returned to dust! Awesome result and remembering to do a mind sweep. Brilliant chapter very well done and thank you.
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This is just getting better with each episode, a true opus magnus. Very well done and thank you for sharing this wonderous tale of yours.
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Again another awesome chapter, very well done! Your tale is one that I eagerly await the arrival of new chapters, of course you have no way of writing fast enough to actually assauge my impatience. Subsequently I am needing to exercise patience myself. Thank you ufor sharing your story.
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Everyone swimming with the Wyrm; developing familiarity, awesomeness and cunnning scribbling scribe! As always another exciting chapter from our extroridinarily enchanting enlightener.
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At least there was land under his feet, could have been very much worse. An awesome start I am eagerly awaiting future episodes of this tale. Thank you very much for sharing and very well done.
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Again an awesome chapter, but even more questions than answers. SOP for you my friend LOL. I hope that you are not getting too much smoke where you are, we had a dose here which was pretty spectacular but disturbing at the same time considering the distance between our homelands.
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Biological expansion crafting environmental habitats, terra-forming at its best and easiest. The enhancements caused by the "White Power" are interesting, each member of the team each has their own specialist group of bonus powers/abilities. We are likewise becoming reinvigorated with this end of the tale, excitement builds and landscapes develop, the meeting of minds and the execution of justice to be done, it all will come together in the fullness of time, okay just not too quickly Mr Author! Thank you for sharing and very well done
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Confusing curious creatures is what you are doing and this critter is getting lost. New twists and turns in every chapter at this rate you will be at this lark for quite some time yet. Another awesome chapter, thank you and very well done.
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Paper, pen, pattern and patience are required; lists of aims and goals with steps abounding all floundering for want of a sensible agenda and even marginal meeting protocol would make it more manageable, especially as this is supposed to be the opus magnus for Kieran so we need organisation to achieve greatness. Rested and stained let the planning and calculating commence. Awesome chapter, thank you, I am having headaches just thinking about the task ahead of our intrepid journeymen and guides. Very well done that man.
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Sleeping on the job, must be a West Island thing, tut, tut. Truth is rest and recuperation, as we all know, are essential to being able to perform and function properly. Ponderously perturbing perambulations, to regain full knowledge for himself and Mr. B or to retain the status quo? Peeling onions again, layered complexities and contentious conundrums keeping us guessing. I hope that Kieran takes close note on how to order his new realm from the excellent example provided by Ranevargar. Awesome chapter and thank you for sharing.
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It be like peeling onions and just as eye-watering. Layer below layer, the depths of perfidy are revealed, isolation and constriction of power will be the most galling of punishments, with the disbursement of empowered rubies; even further punishment. Another awesome chapter in this tale of bewilderment and intrigue. Very well done and thank you for sharing your tale of extravagantly enveloping exciting entertainment. (Sorry folks I just had to do it)
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? And what of us whom are even further ahead of you dawdlers?
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Convulsing convolutions, have you more twists in that devious imagination of yours? Letting the attempted usurper create a noose from the extra rope he is availed of, good job. Another excellent chapter, another character subjugated and a clear imposition of power delivered with clarity and purity of Will. Thank you very much and very much well done.
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With all this shilly shallying about the ax of justice must be terribly blunt for it to take so long to be wielded, however that then becomes our advantage because we get more tale to read. I have a feeling that court politics is about to get a shake up with the court of the new Realm Lord being established. The fledgling that was released has returned and behold it is now a mighty Eagle. Very well done my friend another excellent chapter to entertain us and leave us pondering the perambulations of your authorship as we eagerly await the next parcel of mana from your penmanship. Thank you very much.
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LOL reference back to last chapter's comments, plus you have stated that you hand scribe before you type so it does fit!
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Scribbley scribe you've done it again another awesome chapter. Very well done thank you.
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An interesting start, I am definitely curious as to how you are going to develop this tale. Well done and thank you for sharing your story.
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With your authorship one should always accept that the unusual, unexpected and potentially unexplainable are expected in whichever shade of grey, black or brindle fits best with your tale.
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Oh ho! How the mighty are fallen, the reckoning is nigh, subjugation of greed and ego, humiliation of the usurper! Awesome chapter, faster, faster scribble and scribe, hieroglyph or cuneiform matters little to we. Exciting as this is it occurs to that the end is nigh; Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone. Silence the pianos and with muffled drum Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come.(W H Auden) Thank you for sharing this story and very well done.
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I am not sure if I almost broke my nose or sailed over a cliff, incredibly fast paced. Like an auto accident, it's not the speed that kills but the sudden stop. Awesome chapter thank you
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This is an interesting start and the style of your writing certainly piques my interest I am eager to see where you take this story. Thank you for sharing and very well done.
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So now we're ready for the huffing and puffing to discommode a certain super-egotistical pest. Awesome chapter, thank you and while I impatiently await the next exciting installment I shall watch the bumble bees, honey bees and red admiral butterflies working on the cherry plum tree. Just wonderful!
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Well done and thank you for sharing, I would love to say chapter however in reality it is but an egotistical paragraph. I sincerely hope that you seriously return to complete this story not that you other tales are not good it is just that I especially like the essence of this one.
