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  1. Parker Owens
    Ethan, miserable and broken, at least goes to a good place and person to recover. Maybe he will listen and move on. Maybe Caleb will slowly fade, even as the new baby takes his place. And maybe that is what was meant to be. But what of Caleb?
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    I shall have to ask Michael how they look...
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    Thank you for trying these on for size. Both of these are principles on which bits of modern life are founded, and worth a bit of poetic fun. Hugs!
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    daniel

    Parker Owens commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in daniel

    There is an emptiness I feel I this. There is cavern in which your words echo with the sadness and waste of all this, and the grim outrage of betrayal. This poem is wet with the tears you shed, as should we all, for a man who knew too little love.
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    You have made my day! That you should read these aloud at all makes me very, very happy. That your mum enjoyed them - and maybe you did too - lifts my heart this evening.
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    It's always fun to find a scientific or mathematical principle that needs a poetic treatment. I believe Aditus put up the challenge of The Universal Gas Constant once....
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    Who says nerds can't understand love? Thank you so much for reading these!
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    Chapter 17

    Parker Owens commented on BDANR's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I loved this chapter. You wrote the action with such intensity and my gut tightened as Chris pulled back that fist. But Stefan heard 'love' from someone who could really mean it, and that might make all the difference. Beautifully done.
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    Thank you, Dodger! These are fun to research and write, and perhaps fun to read, if your memories of school aren't too horrific...
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    Chapter 5

    Parker Owens commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 5

    An awesome connection just made. And now we get to ponder what it might mean...
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    Chapter 4

    Parker Owens commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Darkness. Despair. Joey's determination ripped to shreds. You've painted lavishly in black, and it's so very sad.
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    Occam's Razor Will Occam had a razor keen, the like to which has ne'er been seen, though Aristotle came quite close, as logic seemed to him routine. It's not a razor (I'm jocose), but Occam's rule for all verbose explanatory theorems states: eschew the over-grandiose. Instead, in rational debates, if two ideas have equal weights, the one with least assumptions wins the day o'er other postulates. My heart is burst, my head, it spins; the simp
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    3-7 - Hate

    Parker Owens commented on Cynus's story chapter in 3-7 - Hate

    And while I liked this chapter, it makes me so very sad, for Caleb realizes he can never live again in the light with Ethan, even though he can try to give his lover the life he ought to have lived. But even this may not be possible, for the Ruler now stalks Caleb, as well as his hounds. I am filled with foreboding.
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    3-6 - Beneath

    Parker Owens commented on Cynus's story chapter in 3-6 - Beneath

    So Orpheus is unveiled and revealed for who he is. Ethan was so easily broken, and all The Ruler needed to do was sow just a little doubt. Now Ethan knows real pain, pain undisguised and unmasked by his drive and desire for Caleb. Can Ethan's love regain any of its purity by being so tried by Death itself? You weave such a tale of intrigue and mystic adventure here, and all derived from that simple, foolishly undeclared love...
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    Of course you cried, as I do too now. How sad, so sad Eurydice is gone, gone because Orpheus has abandoned her.
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    3-4 - The Warlock

    Parker Owens commented on Cynus's story chapter in 3-4 - The Warlock

    No, I don't hate you. But you have left me pondering questions. Is Orpheus up to his own game? Is Ethan - the boy Caleb loved - really anywhere at all? Because the all powerful warlock doesn't seem like that guy. Of course, you smash that all-powerful notion to tiny bits at the end of the chapter. I do like psionic snow plowing, though. Great idea!
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    I love the flashbacks and the way in which Caleb is reaching for Ethan. How much you make me wish time could flow in two directions. Beautifully written.
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    I'm thrilled for you dear Gary, for on your tales I tarry, and lose myself in stories that show your talent's glories. Congratulations, and Well Done!
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    I can see why you liked this chapter so much. Jake becomes far more human, and Ethan retreats from becoming something quite other than human. Perhaps he can find a way to move on, and perhaps not. Or perhaps there will be another way to reunite the pair that none of us foresee, and that even Ethan's magic cannot fathom. But there will be many rivers to cross before that happens, I imagine. Great chapter!
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    Caleb is learning more and more, and we are doing so with him. But I wonder if he will truly die when he meets Ethan again. For who knows if the Ethan of the journal or the Ethan returned is the one Caleb loved. You have simply multiplied the mysteries for me. As usual, I might add. Thank you!
  22. Parker Owens
    Well now. Jared isn't making any secret of his attraction for Sam, is he? What is Sam going to do about it?
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    What, another interesting man? Pretty soon, the whole firm will look interesting to Sam!
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    A Fresh Start

    Parker Owens commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in A Fresh Start

    A lovely cute beginning. Hope Sam finds what he is looking for...
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    Cut the Cake

    Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Cut the Cake

    You have me laughing. Alas, I fear I don't have such a super-nerd this year. But that sounds like fun....and frosted! I prefer that any day.
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