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Gus still has that cast on, you’re right. And it won’t make it easy for him in the water. You may also remember that Gus isn’t much of a swimmer, either.
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Chapter 3: Valentine's Day
Parker Owens commented on NFields1608's story chapter in Chapter 3: Valentine's Day
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Lee is lucky to still be alive. Eddie just let him go, and his infected wound hasn’t killed him yet. Lee is tough, and he’s discovered work he likes. Harlan knew Greg was wrong, and I’d love to know how. Greg and Clay finding Lee eased my heart; I won’t need my medication tonight. However, my heart goes to Avery, who took his courage in both hands and told the truth. You told this well. Thanks.
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Cadet Third Class • II
Parker Owens commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • II
This is such a good chapter on lots of levels. What made me smile most was Ritch standing up to the traditions of hazing, which if allowed to grow and fester, eventually become deadly. That was well done. -
Get out your rod and reel; there’s a great deal to be said for spending a quiet morning on a sparkling lake, especially if someone as attractive as Gus wants to be there with you. Rick felt incredibly fortunate. But just at this moment, he’s feeling the shock of cold: Butternut Lake is spring fed. Thanks for joining Rick in the canoe, and for your kind comments.
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Even Gus has imperfections; he’s a Yankees fan. But notice Rick forgives Gus even that. Such are the things we do for love. And Gus’ observation on the subtle music of the day around him and Rick must make him grow ever lovelier. Your comments were very kind and encouraging. I’m very happy the description of their morning on the lake resonated with you. Many thanks for reading and for your response.
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Well they’re cold enough now. Kinda changes the whole day, doesn’t it?
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This has been a delightful outing for both Gus and Rick. At least, it was until they tipped into the lake. Butternut Lake is very beautiful, and I’m glad you enjoyed the music of the world with Gus and Rick. However, they just discovered how cold it is! Thanks very much for your thoughts and for reading!
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You and Gus can watch Yankees games while Rick grumbles. As for the swimming, the water’s cold! Thanks for reading!
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Could it be Aditus?
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I'm glad there were some memorable lines for you uttered by Rick and Gus in this chapter. Rick and Gus getting to know one another's world makes me smile every time I get to write about it. Thanks a million for reading and for jotting down your favorites.
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No, not even Gus is perfect. Perhaps it's a good thing that Rick discovers that, so he won't idealize Gus so much, or put him on some kind of pedestal. Perhaps Gus can try the Gondolier role when his cast is off. Gosh, there's no telling what might have happened if Rick had remembered to bring the beer. On the other hand, he might have been a little flustered in getting out of the house. Rita definitely does not go fishing, at least not in the literal sense. That's a great mercy. Thank you very much for continuing to read, and for your thoughts.
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First, they'll have to get to shore. It's cold and deep in Butternut Lake. But what a lovely thought. Thank you for reading!
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Rick would agree that this vacation day would rank as the best ever. I'm glad the peace on the water came to you. Not sure that swimming was what Rick and Gus had in mind, however. Thanks very much for reading, and for your response.
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Well they certainly made a splash, didn't they? Thanks for reading and for the delightful pun.
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“You what?” Rick couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “Please tell me you’re making this up.” Gus smirked at him from the passenger seat of his old pickup truck, the trees along the highway whizzing past in the early morning light. “Sorry, Rick. It’s true. I hate to disappoint you.” “I can’t believe I bought you coffee and Danish. I even let you in my truck.” “You want to turn around?” The truck hit a rough spot in the pavement; conversation was briefly interrupted
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Whew. Fergus sees the bloody consequences of his folly, but can’t recognize his own ineptitude. He literally has it rubbed in his face, but he’s too foolish to see. And now he wants to turn what’s left of his pack into a troop of zombie-walking automatons? Talk about grotesque: this is is one seriously pigheaded wolf.
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No. Not a single word needed. Thanks for the smile this morning.
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I’m very happy you enjoyed this quick story from Andy and Zander’s life, as well as Monica’s observation. I shall have to add your vote to the others who have tallied their opinions. Thank you for reading this vignette.
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Thank you for your kindness and encouragement. Andy’s journey is definitely one from deep darkness into warm sunlight. I can only wish that this kind of journey might be made real for the so very many who must travel in today’s darkened world. I hope also that Andy and Zander will live in your mind, as they do in mine.
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What a train wreck. Avery and Lee, what was once so beautiful is now a mess. Right now, I’m imagining a thousand outcomes, every one more and more awful. Like Bailey trusts Harlan, I’m trusting you.
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Prompt 856 - Moving Day
Parker Owens commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Prompt 856 - Moving Day
That’s funny. What will Matt and Andrew - and the cats - make of this new addition to the family? This was a great response to the prompt. -
The Compassionless Ape
Parker Owens commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Compassionless Ape
This line really resonated with me. I know these kids... “Afraid of differences / like inexperienced children...” This also sounded like harmony in my head: “All we have of significance / is, each other” Thank you for the gift of your words today. -
Cadet Third Class • I
Parker Owens commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • I
Amongst the many fine bits of dialogue and action, this one made me smile... “It sucks to get old and have to grow up.” This is so very true. Welcome to life, Ritch! Great chapter, thank you for all your excellent work and research. -
Heinrich certainly seems satisfied with himself for one reason or another. This may not be the Middle Ages, but the old man is far too used to having his own way. You’re right to be wary of a smiling Heinrich Senior, though. Thanks very much for your thoughts and for reading!
