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  1. Butcher56

    GFD: Persona 1

    This story is going to be a very interesting one to read. How did Jason get from the darkness of the basement of the library and in a real bed waking up to an alarm clock.
  2. It appears that Chuck Farmer is not a very nice person for the boys and is going to get two of his boys to meet with the new leader of the Gentlemen’s Club who happens to be Phillip. I think he was hoping to recruit the boys from the swim team to be a part of his harem of boys. I hope Phillip can figure out that somethings wrong before he meets with these two boys and arranges to have someone else stand in for him.
  3. It seems like Reinhard is going to be a tough one to get out of his depression after his clan was killed, leaving him it’s only survivor. Nareen is probably the best thing for him for getting through this rough time in his life.
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    GW Chap 21

    I enjoyed reading this story quite a lot. The way that the family has come together to make the business run better was a great thing for me. I was sad that they had the wreck with the fuel truck and had to get a new car for the train shipped from Switzerland which took a while. I’m glad that the communities around where the wreck took place rallied and took passengers to the accommodations that were set up for them as well as the hospitals that took the injured. I hope the ARG continues to strive and grow as a strong railway company for Australia. I noticed how much Vern has grown throughout this story and he’s become a great asset for the company as he helps make up the train schedules as well as the routes that each train has and also a great spokesperson for the company as well.
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    GW Chap 20

    What a great chapter. The train is on it’s maiden voyage for the new route being added to the other routes. Then they wind up hitting a fuel truck that was on the tracks. I hope that the engineers are okay since they were the one’s getting the brunt of the force of the collision and then the fire from the fuel in the truck.
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    Chapter 6

    I’m glad that Davey is safe after his dad called the White House after finding the information in his desk drawer. It’s almost like he suspected something was going to happen when he was informed that he was going to be taken to the naval base. Now that he’s told his dad some of what he’s doing with the government he needs to go with him to Washington to meet with the president and then he’ll decide what is going to be done as far as Davey’s concerned. His dad has also figured out that he’s gay but didn’t say that he would not have anything to do with him, he said that he would have to get used to it, he also said that he could possibly change if he tried. I hope that Davey is able to stay with his family and friends and live his life and not be under government control.
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    Saturday

    My thoughts exactly. The 16 missing boys is going to be hard to prove that Chuckles had anything to do with the disappearances, although I’m sure they’ll keep looking until they find what they’re looking to find. I hope he gets everything that he gets for his leadership in this group of pedophiles as well as the other members of the group, especially since they’re promenant citizens of the town.
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    GW Chap 18

    What a great chapter. I would have to say that Vern did make history that day after making the presentation of their plans for increasing the railroad line in southern Australia. He was the youngest person to ever speak to the parliament and he did it from the gallery. I hope their plans will make it better for tourism once they get the lines repaired.
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    Chapter 43

    I agree with Parker that the women are badass in the story. I hope Jimmy is up to the challenge of being an alpha, there’s going to be a very long line of things to be done so that everything is legal so there’s no questions asked. There’s going to be 2 new wolves in the story now that Sawyer has been bitten by Jimmy so that he’s marked as his mate. Maddie bit Jada so she wouldn’t turn rabid so the back is becoming a bit bigger with it now having seven members including the alpha Jimmy.
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    Card Sharks

    At least Phillip has the knowledge to let the boys know that if they get caught in their game by an adult it could cause them some serious problems because of Tommy being disabled. The more information he gets about the middle school, the more he can give to detective Oswald and then he’ll be able to decide who to contact about the situation. I think Stevie is going to be alright after the talk to the Mayor tomorrow sometime when Phillip and a few other boys go to see Rodney after he’s released from the hospital.
  11. I’m loving the story so far. Tasha doesn’t know it but she has just met James dad. I hope that in the near future James will find out that his dad’s family has powers as well and he’ll get the training he needs. He might even be able to get Tasha and Casper some training as well that’s if they find him.
  12. I hope that the information will get the Vice Principal out of the school so that the bullying will stop, since he’s the leader of the boys who are bullying the other boys in the school. Dirty Harriet doesn’t know that her source is who she left the boys with at around 3 am. Once she gets the warrants she can put a task force together so that they can execute the warrants and put the bad guys away for a very long time.
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    Meet the Press

    Phillip has an advantage over the adults who run the Y he’s not much older than the boys he’s helping by talking to them about whatever they want to talk about. The reporters asked him where he learned to be such a good and smart big brother he said that he learned it from his best friend Javier who was 2 years older than he was and was always available if he had questions or just wanted to hang out with him. Javier taught him to treat everyone like he was glad to see them. It’s Javier’s influence that he relies on when the boys come to him with a question, he says that he doesn’t have all of the answers but he does have a lot of people with degrees that he can go to for help with the questions he can’t answer.
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    Andy

    I’m glad that Rodney is going to be alright after the surgery to remove the testicle to prevent the cancer from spreading. Phillip finally has the answer to why when Pat starts calling Bryan a cock whore it hurts his feelings, he used to say things like that when he and Andy would be together. Phillip has to worry about reporters tomorrow sometime after finding out that Rodney is the son of the mayor.
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    Mikie's Courage

    I can hardly wait for Phillip to get more dirt on Chuckles the Vice Principal at the middle school. Once he gets his information he will forward it to Sergeant Daniels and then sit back and wait for the police to do their job and take down his operation. The Gentleman’s Club just got bigger after the big initiation they just had at Phillips house.
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    Kickoff

    I hope the information is going to be used wisely and then there will be more information coming from Otter to the police department and it’s going to be used to make a few arrests that are probably long overdo. As far as Chuckles goes I hope he’s careful and doesn’t get himself into trouble.
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    Shopping

    I have a feeling that you’re right with your comment. The brothers were being victimized by their older cousin and it wasn’t something they should have been forced into. I don’t know if the younger ones were done the same way as their older brothers were, I hope not. Even Scotty was thrilled that he had someone who understood his problem and was able to help him with it.
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    Human Interest

    I truly believe that Phillip has made quite a difference in the lives of these boys who all needed a role model to look up to. He’s someone who they can go to for answers to their questions as well as just to hang around with. Some of the boys come from some what of a rough life and they had no one to turn to before he started working at the YMCA as a janitor for the summer. After he lost his mom, and his best friend and his mom in a traffic accident in March he and his dad moved to a new city to try to heal and get their lives back on track. He’s become the best employee ever hired by the Y and even though he has a lot of responsibility he still makes time for the boys no matter how old they are. The one thing that I think means the most to me is that ever since meeting the boys on the middle school swim team they have become great friends with benefits for them all.
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    Chapter 1

    I think this is going to be a great story, I can’t imagine what it would be like for a man or woman to go back in time to when they were 12 years old. Much less make a phone call to the White House and tell the person on the other end about an assassin’s attempt at shooting the President. I can’t wait to read the next chapter already and the stories just getting started.
  20. The problem with a situation like Rodney has is that it can be very scary to the boy and they’re embarrassed at the thought of having to talk to their moms about it. I had a friend go through something similar to this situation and it turned out that his testicle had to be removed to keep him from getting cancer. He’s doing better now and from what his grandmother told me is that he shows no symptoms of infection now and he’s back going all out again like a normal teenaged boy.
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    Escapism: 3.7

    Casper could easily call James to come help him but my question is how would he get out of the house undetected with his grandmother there? I’m sure she’d figure out that he has powers and she would tell his dad and then he’ll be getting trained by his grandfather whether he likes it or not. I wish Casper all the luck in the world.
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    Escapism: 3.4

    So Casper turns out to be a mage and went to learn more about his ability and begins his training as a mage.
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    NF Ch 3

    I believe that the idea that Anton proposed will be a great thing for the environment. It would also solve the problem for the company that owns the ship of how to safely remove it from the island without damaging the coral reef in the area around the island. Great chapter and story.
  24. It seems like there’s more to James having these awesome powers than he thought about. Not only can he fly but he can also control the wind. Now Casper discovered that he’s losing weight he went from 82 pounds to around 32 pounds. I don’t know how he’s going to hide that from his parents especially his dad, who has powers of his own.
  25. I think this story is going to be a very good one to read. The topic is something that isn’t talked about as much as it should be, sexual assault at any age is very traumatic to the victim. I feel bad for James as being a 12 year old boy and being sexually assaulted and getting some marks on his face that he’s worried about what his friends will say about his having them and then wanting to know how he got them. I hope the sessions with the dr help him to find peace with what happened to him so he can become a better man and not be afraid to go out in public.
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