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How to say stupid things - Shane 1/2
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in How to say stupid things - Shane 1/2
Good chapter, but Shane is still an asshole.- 22 comments
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I also agree with those who say he should be paired up with Drew! He's a sweetheart!
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I do have to say the romper was by far his worst choice so far! Lmao!! 😂😂
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Very true, but at least give him half a brain! Lol!!
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Donovan would be stupid to go, although he's already proved that he's not too smart.
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Mr. Neighbor and his crew
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Mr. Neighbor and his crew
Lmao!! Too funny! I'm really interested in how Shane plans on redeeming himself. -
Mr. Neighbor and his crew
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Mr. Neighbor and his crew
I enjoyed this chapter. I like Donovan's new group of friends. Maybe they can give him advice on a more mature level. The DONNAS aren't really there yet. Lol! -
I think we all know general grammar here. It is, in fact, insulting to pick through every chapter and point out mistakes that nobody else cares about. Us readers are more interested in how good the story is rather than if the author used their, there, or they're correctly. Btw, I highly doubt your undeserved criticism will go over any better by PM. I would suggest just letting it go.
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Are you only here to correct grammar?? We're not a bunch of grammar snobs here on GA. I think everyone knows what is meant, so there's really no need to point it out.
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Exactly! For me, just a quick "sorry for being an ass" is pretty damn lame considering all the shitty things Shane said to Donovan. Shane will have to do WAY better than that if he really wants to redeem hinself. Of course Donovan is looking like quite the pushover at this point, so it might be enough.
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Let's talk about standards
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Let's talk about standards
I don't feel sorry for either of them. Gordy is a hypocrite who lowered whatever standards he had just to get some D. Shane is a d-bag. Why does he expect anyone to be nice to him when he treats them the way he does? I think they're both getting what they deserve. -
I agree alcohol lowers our inhibitions to a point. However, no matter how much I drink there's no way in hell I'm hooking up with someone I hate. Its not worth throwing away self respect and lowering my standards.
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I agree. I was very disappointed myself. I think of all the stories I've read on GA that went this route, there have been maybe 2 that the bully fully redeemed himself. Most of the rest I quit reading. This one I'm on the fence. If I can't stand someone, hooking up with them isn't even a possible outcome, and alcohol isn't an excuse.
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I had a difficult time with this chapter. For me, first impression is EVERYTHING, and no way in hell is an asshole gonna all of a sudden maul me without getting a black eye or a knee to the balls. Its almost impossible to change my mind on someone who gives as horrible of a first impression as the one Shane has given. Add alcohol, and I would definitely dislike him more instead of giving in.
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I agree, I don't understand that mentality either. I also don't get why an adult would do that. At least if it were a story about school age boys, they're not at an adult maturity level so I would kinda get it. Shane just sounds like a total asshole. Obviously also not at an adult maturity level! Lol!
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Oh hell no! If I had to choose between leaving when everyone else does or being left behind with the asshole of the group, I'm out of there! Sure as hell wouldn't dance with him!
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I enjoyed the getting ready chapter. I just can't with the romper, tho. For me, wearing a romper would itself be the reason for Donovan not getting laid! Lol!
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Ch16 Rest, Recovery ... and Texan's.
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Ch16 Rest, Recovery ... and Texan's.
Unless the accident has given Jamie the wake-up call he needs, every guy in the story so far is too good for him. -
Another great chapter! I'm so happy Donovan kicked Shane's ass on that last play! He more than deserved it! Bois night out with the heteros should be VERY interesting!
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Kill him...with kindness
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Kill him...with kindness
Shane's a grade A douche! I would have let the air out of his tires! -
I wouldn't have been proud of Sean speaking up like TJ was, after all it was Sean who made him invite that cock jockey to his house in the first place. John was totally disrespecting TJ right in front of Sean, yet Sean wanted TJ to be nice and invite him to the party. Then John continues disrespecting TJ by blowing Mark outside of TJ's house. No way in hell would a boyfriend EVER talk me into inviting the disrespectful d-bag that took his virginity to my house, not to mention sitting at our lunch table after.
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I read the story from start to finish a couple days ago and totally loved it! I'm normally not a fan of a bullying victim ending up with the bully, but Cody made a big effort to apologize and to prove himself trustworthy. Also how he quit bullying Trick when he found out he had a crush on him, and how upset he was when Trick changed schools made him not a total ass! Lol! Cody and Trick are great guys, as are their friends. Too bad Mason had to be such an ass, but at least he made an effort at the end to give them a nod and wave. It must have helped figuring out that out of everybody, he was the only one being an idiot. Lol! Definitely a story I will enjoy reading more than once.
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So sorry for ur loss. Such a good chapter. Levi and Link have such big hearts. Link guarding the bedroom so Cody can get his sleep, and Levi being there to support his best friend. Levi laying in the hospital bed with Brody to comfort him was so sweet. Brody is gonna need his best friend, and I kno Levi will be there with him every step of the way. Now, how are we gonna torture that asshole Carson??
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I'm still very uneasy about Rex and Mark all of a sudden being so buddy buddy. I thought it was pretty rude of them to eventually ignore Andy all together. Neither of them even noticed that Andy left with Jackson. I wouldn't be jealous, I'd be angry as hell at both of them if I were Andy. I was on the fence about Rex before, but I can now honestly say that I really don't like him.
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What a great sequel! I'm so happy Bart is convincing Dean not to be afraid of coming out. Also very happy that Dean had the courage to come out to Hugh. He would have never got the kiss or the date offer if he hadn't. I hope u add more to their story. Really love Dean and Bart, and would love to see what happens with Hugh! From the things that have been shared about Dean's father, I can't imagine him having a problem with Dean's sexuality. He already likes the guy Dean is gonna go on a date with after all! Lol!
