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Loved the chapter! I knew Mark wouldn't have a problem with Andy being gay. He's a pretty cool, laid back guy. I'm so happy Andy has Nico and Jackson as friends. Even though they may have their own issues with each other, they're good friends for Andy. Maybe one of them will become a romantic interest?? At least Rex had the common courtesy to text Andy this time. I wonder, though, why he texted Mark.
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Great chapter!! I'm so glad that Eddie and Matt were able to help Galen. He and Josh definitely made a first step in their relationship. The kiss they shared when Galen got back to the farm was so sweet. Galen has made such great progress! I'm really gonna miss this story. 2 more chapters is too soon!! 😭
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I'm just very unsure whether to continue with the story or not. So far, it definitely seems to have gone in the same direction as Unexpected. We've gone from hate and animosity to fucking and going on trips with the kids within a couple of chapters. With the past of bully and victim, which went on for years, for me it would have made more sense to have the "good old fashioned throw down about the past" before any feelings or sex. I don't want to be 20+ chapters into the story waiting for something that's never going to happen.
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We’re goin’ to Disneyworld
jaysalmn commented on Dahawk's story chapter in We’re goin’ to Disneyworld
Omg, what a great chapter! I think this trip is just as exciting for us readers! Kasey had me laughing throughout the chapter! For me, I think the best part was Kasey, protecting Cody, calling the man a shithead and kicking him in the shin! Lmao! Cody talking about the movie he's gonna be in was pretty funny too. I'm so proud of the boys saving the other boy's life. They have been so well behaved. So has Nan....so far. The cliffhanger sounds very ominous. Glad to hear that u are feeling better! -
Yes, exactly! I quit reading the story at that point.
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Unfortunately, the same exact thing happened in the @Bndmetl story Unexpected. Big drama, then cut to the characters going on like nothing ever happened. Nothing was ever discussed, nothing was ever resolved. I feel its unfair to the story and to the readers when there's so much drama....then nothing.
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I don't understand this story anymore. We went from one being a bully and the victim hating him, to the two of them being a couple and nothing was resolved. There's a huge chunk of story missing.
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Love Troy and Adam. So happy Troy's birthday party was a success. The banter between Troy and the salesman at the store was hilarious! Troy is quick with good comebacks! Lol. I hope that they squash the situation with Jason quickly. I also wonder if maybe he's a closet case.
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Chapter 12 Under the Stars
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 12 Under the Stars
Jamie is correct, Sam doesn't deserve him. Sam deserves WAY better. I sure as hell wouldn't be sad over someone who shoves his hands down the pants of the first guy he meets. If I were Sam, I would stay far away from Jamie and his friends. -
Chapter 11 - Conclusion and Epilogue
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Conclusion and Epilogue
This is definitely one of my favorite stories ever! I've read it on another site at least five or six times since u started posting chapters on GA! I love all the ups and downs and drama u put into the story. I love that they called each other out, and weren't so quick to forgive like in so many other stories on here. I don't kno what else to say other than I absolutely love the story and really look forward to the bonus chapters and the other stories about the characters u have planned!- 43 comments
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Friends And (Ex) Lovers
jaysalmn commented on WhenItRains's story chapter in Friends And (Ex) Lovers
I'm glad that starting high school went smooth for Andy. Also glad that he has new friends in Nico and Jackson, although they look to have their own issues with each other. I don't think Mark is gonna have a problem with Andy's being gay. He sounds like a pretty cool guy, as far as brothers go. Honestly, didn't really miss Rex. Kind of on the fence as far as he goes after he skipped the trip with his parents and didn't bother to tell Andy. I thought it was a little rude. -
Well, have to say that was a pretty damn hot chapter! I still don't understand how u could possibly love or even lust after someone that made ur life hell, no matter what the reason. Personally, I would lean more towards a good beating over fucking them. Lol! I guess everyone is different.
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A Day In San Antonio, A Night In Heaven
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Day In San Antonio, A Night In Heaven
Wow, what a cliffhanger! Hannah is batshit crazy!!! I laugh at the thought Mr Webster was worried about the dads destroying his family, when obviously Hannah is doing a great job of that all on her own. They were correct...Frank Webster is a total dick! Lol! -
Chapter 2 - The Ultimate Car Buying Experience
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The Ultimate Car Buying Experience
Great chapter!! Colin on a date with a greek god, and Charles jealous as his heart breaks. The drama is brewing! Can't wait!!- 23 comments
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I'm loving it already! Can't wait to read more!!
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Gay Thoughts, Gay Thoughts Everywhere
jaysalmn commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Gay Thoughts, Gay Thoughts Everywhere
We really got to see how much of a d-bag Alex really is. Making Aron choose between he and Carter? No way in hell would any man make me choose between himself and my best friend. Even worse Aron chose. So, Aron is a gold digger?? I can't understand going along with that for any other reason. No matter how good looking, I can't imagine marrying someone who is such a narcissist. Alex is definitely the kind of guy I can't stand, and Aron isn't too far behind so far. -
And then blames her husband's death on Adam just because of who he loves. Yeah, she's brainwashed by the church and her husband, but that doesn't make what she wrote to her 15 year old son any more acceptable. Not to mention she just did nothing while her husband physically abused their son. These are among the many reasons I don't believe in organized religion.
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Great chapter! So happy so many kids showed up to the GSA meetings! That says a lot about the support the boys have. So disappointed by the letter from Adam's mother. She's a disgusting individual that is not worthy of the oxygen she breathes! I hope she gets a damn good dose of karma!
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I also have to wonder how warped of a mind Brady has to even want to start something with someone so out of it that he was not only mumbling incoherently but almost puked in his car just a few minutes earlier. There's something disturbing about that. Obviously he wasn't drunk if the policeman let him go.
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I lost just about all respect for Brady, taking advantage of Ember knowing very well that he was beyond just plain drunk. I passed out drunk once and woke up to my friend's roommate messing with me. I didn't like it, nor want it to happen. I don't care how much attraction they both have towards each other. I found that whole situation back at Brady's wrong. If they're gonna fuck with each other, make sure BOTH parties involved are able to remember and are in control of what they're doing.
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That was a great ending. I always knew Riley had it in him to be the kind of guy he became, and Carter played a big part as did Eli. He has his family, his love, and now Spirit. I think it was funny that he found a dog with the same personality! Lol! I'm really gonna miss this story. This was by far my favorite Underground book. I would have kept on reading if u had continued writing. There's no such thing as too much Riley and Carter! Lol! Great story, and I'm sincerely gonna miss it.
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Love the story! Have to say, though, Aron and Alex sound like a couple of narcissistic asses so far. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds, but definitely not the type of guys I would ever be friends with.
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Moving Forward & Epilogue
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Moving Forward & Epilogue
That was such a wonderful ending. I'm so glad Vic was able to open his heart to Jack, and also so glad they were able to adopt the girls! I have to say, I don't think I've ever been so emotional over a fictional character passing as I have been with Hayden. U have a way of making ur characters people we can relate to, and feel close to. One of the many reasons I've loved reading all of the books from The Chronicles series. I'm so excited to read about David! -
Honestly, though, I don't forgive people that have treated me badly. There's no acceptable reason for it.
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Really, everyone is being so hard on Ember! How would anyone react to someone who terrorized u through high school turns up years later wanting to play nice?? I don't care how good looking the guy is, I'd have nothing but hatred for the bastard! I'd be mad as hell if the guy who bullied me just conveniently showed up everywhere I go, not to mention working at the business I own! Btw, I NEVER would have hired him! Ember has every right to feel the anger he does. Personally, I think Ember is an idiot for falling for someone who bullied him for so many years.
