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Loved the concert! It was great! Who knew Harriet was a rock star! I really can't say anything bad about Vicky's reaction to her mom and dad. I think I would have had the same reaction if I had been faced with that at her age. I see only bad things happening with Richie's plan of getting Nicholas back at the ball.
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Richie is so frustrating, thinking Nicholas is still his friend. He should have been written off when he suggested parting ways, then started hanging out with those other a-holes. Obviously he's still not hanging out with Richie again. He's letting Nicholas walk all over him all because of his stupid fantasy that they're "together".
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Little does Richie kno, he's already being a doormat. Nicholas is a bigger dbag than I first thought. I'm hoping maybe there's a chance with him and Stu, and he can leave Nicholas in the past where he belongs.
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Still loving the story. I feel so bad for Nick. Nothing seems to go right for him.
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Still loving Vickie! She's my fave! I definitely wouldn't have let Nicholas off the hook. He's the one that suggested parting ways, then gets upset that Richard went along with it??? I don't trust him at all. All he would have gotten from me is a middle finger as I walked by!
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Well, u got me hooked! Loved the first chapter. Always has to be at least one bible thumper in the group! Lol! Can't wait to see how things unfold with Rick and Freddy. I also saw no need for an editor.
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Enjoying the story so far. Ricky's dad is a total sleaze! I would have ripped him a new one at breakfast! Lol! Don't kno what to think of his mom. Maybe she already knows, and is just glad to have the asshole out of the house. She's just way too cool and calm about everything going on. Love Vicky! Loud, mouthy and overdramatic...so entertaining! There's not much I can say about Nicholas without getting a language warning! I hope karma beats him like a drum! Looking forward to reading more.
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Not to mention Mark still choosing to have unprotected sex with Mickey even after he hooked up with a walking STD! Just because the test came up negative THIS TIME, doesn't mean it can't show a positive a few months down the road. Lets be real, this relationship has a very short shelf life. Lol!
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I think Mickey was more worried about HIV and AIDS than he was about hurting Mark. That seemed to be his main concern.
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Well, not too surprised after Mickey commented that Sean would get what he wanted to give him. This chapter pissed me off! Marilyn is going on about how Mickey didn't kno any better. I'm sorry, but no matter how "sheltered" a person is, I think its common knowledge that cheating is bad. He did it because he wanted to, not caring one damn bit about Mark's feelings. Oh, lets ghost Mark for a week, then go back acting like nothing ever happened after Sean dumped his ass! I wouldn't have wasted my time going to the hospital.
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 1
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I love Silas and Jamie! I'm totally a Silas when it comes to straight guys, and I haven't been a teenager in a long time! Lol! Can't wait to see what happens with Ricky and Jamie! -
Loved the first chapter! Sean and Tyler are so cute! Can't wait to see how their "date" goes!
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A very comical chapter. Both Gideon and Regan have their hands full with each other!
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Great chapter! Absolutely love Doris!!
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Daniel's grandparents sound like horrible, judgmental, homophobes. They seemed cold towards Daniel at best, which he even noticed. They were rude and judgmental towards Stephen and Lewis. It should hardly be something to think about. It should be a no-brainer for Daniel. I always cheered for Daniel, but to have him even consider leaving the people that saved him and gave him that better life kinda angers me.
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A Mother Knows These Things
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Mother Knows These Things
Omg, great chapter!!! Absolutely love Maggie! She's the greatest! I enjoyed the backstory of she and Clay. I also love the mother/son relationship she and Eddie have. Of course she knows about the love Eddie and Matty have for each other. Mothers always know. Eddie and Matty are adorable together. Can't wait to read more!! -
The Truth Is Out Here, pt.1
jaysalmn commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in The Truth Is Out Here, pt.1
Brandon is an asshole! He had no business sticking his nose where it doesn't belong! He and Alex are far from being besties, and even then doing what he did would be wrong. Then being the asshole he is, he turns it around on Alex?! Also, he conveniently forgot that Alex paid him back every cent of that money he gave him! I don't think Brandon really has the ability to have feelings. Maybe a bit of a sociopath?? All that money he gets from mommy and daddy sure as hell hasn't bought him any class! So...is there any way of arranging Brandon walking in front of a moving bus anytime soon?? Lol! -
Great story!! I love that Anthony and Clark got a second chance. They sound like a perfect match. Its funny that everyone knew about their "secret relationship" Lol! I'd like to think Andrew got abducted by a tribe of headhunters in that jungle he wanted to visit so bad!
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Sad, but well written chapter. I think we will all miss Nan. I, too, think she died of a broken heart. I wish there had been some kind of resolve to how she treated the kids after Stephen's death. It was kinda; she was mean to them, then nothing was said about her, now she's dead.
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Very well written. I don't think I could have forgiven Grant if I were Elliot. I feel along with PTSD, it would be extremely difficult to open ur eyes every day just to be reminded that ur partner didn't value ur safety. Seriously, didn't the fact that Elliot had to take out a restraining order on Sarah's boyfriend mean a thing to Grant??? He should feel guilty.
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I get that he's struggling with being gay, but I feel there has to be more to his violent outbursts than just that.
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Wow! This story is getting really good! I can't wait to see what Salem's deal is. Can't wait for another chapter!!
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I agree with you. It seemed like for the second half of the story Richard threw money around only to buy Richie's acceptance. Of course, Richie is ur normal materialistic teenager so he totally fell for it. Richard beat him, belittled him, and cussed him out on numerous occasions. I think what he did to Richie in the beginning of the story were his true feelings for his son. I think he only started to pretend to care to save face and so people didn't think he's the bastard he really is. Like I've said before, forgiveness isn't alway the answer and isn't alway deserved, and Richard definitely didn't deserve it. I don't think the fact that Richie even acknowledges Richard is exactly a happy ending.
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Great chapter! I'm liking this Alex. He's matured a lot since the first chapter. I think Jeremy is inspiring Alex to be a better person. I also like that Alex wants to finish his schooling. Telling his parents not to deny his sister the opportunity to study abroad because of his screwup was very big of him. Oh, and Natalie needs to get over it! Lol!
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Decisions, Decisions, Decisions
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Decisions, Decisions, Decisions
I had a really difficult time with this chapter. I kno that Jacob has to be cast as a villain so Charlie can get back with David, but wow you really shredded the hell out of his character. It would have been better killing him off. Personally, I don't think David deserves a second chance with Charlie. He would have been successful whether he went to Russia or not. He made the conscious decision to leave his so-called true love. Honestly, I couldn't read past what was written about Jacob.
