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Honestly, I probably wouldn't have had as negative of a reaction if it weren't for the fact that Jordan was the one who pressured Noah relentlessly to take their relationship beyond just friends until he finally gave in, then out of nowhere backs out on moving in together. Whatever the reason is, yeah, that was a pussy move!
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So....all the progress they have made and Jordan is just gonna throw it all away! What a douche! I would send Jordan the dildo Jenn gave him with a note telling him to go fuck himself! Noah deserves better.
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So happy to have everyone back! The boys are always so entertaining. Link with his candy issues is so funny. I love he and Cody investigating and questioning the family. Levi and Brody are so adorable. I hope this bully Blu is talking about doesn't give any of the boys trouble.
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Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
I don't fault Jamie for meeting with Sam. I was surprised at what Sam tried to pull, so I probably wouldn't have been on guard either. What I do fault Jamie for, however, is letting the conversation go as far as it did. When he had to remind Sam that he was in love with Ben is when he should have shut the conversation down, got up and left. I'm happy that Jamie has matured enough to not go out and sleep around, because I have a feeling the old Jamie would have. Also happy he decided against looking up Josh, although I'm disappointed he even thought of it. -
Good chapter. Brandon is a total sleaze, and by the sound of it his brother isn't far off. Money doesn't buy class. The fact that Alex used Brandon to pay off his gambling debt doesn't say much as far as his character, either.
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Great chapter! So happy that Daniel finally has some stability in his life, not to mention two great guys that care for him. I think Stephen and Lewis are truly the kind of parents Daniel needs, loving, caring and non judgmental. I hope they're able to adopt him at some point. Its nice to see some positive things happening in Daniel's life.
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What a great story, and a beautiful ending! So happy that we will hear from them again.
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I think Asher and his family not having money at their disposal makes them more down to earth, more likeable, more realistic. Being an entitled snob isn't an endearing quality.
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Very hypocritical of Seth to refer to Bret Kavanagh as a spoiled brat after dropping 8 grand on a stereo and bragging about having Apple stock. I love Ash and his down to earth family. I hope he stays true to himself, and not start acting like Seth.
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Once I skipped past all of the stereo nonsense, I was at the end of the chapter.
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Have enjoyed the story so far. However, Seth really comes off as an obnoxious spoiled rich kid in this chapter. I don't find a teenager throwing around money an endearing quality. In fact, if I were Asher this would be a total turn off. I'm reading on, but my opinion of Seth has changed.
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Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
Great chapter. I think I shed a few tears with the boys when Ben boarded his flight! That must have been so difficult. I hope Jamie doesn't take too long to share his thoughts and feelings with Ben, or do something stupid to mess it all up. I think they make a great couple. I like Jamie so much more since he's "grown up" -
The Light in the Darkness
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
That was such a great ending. Have to admit, I'm teary eyed at the fact that I won't get to read any more about the boys. I've been reading from the very beginning, so its sad to kno that I won't get any more glimpses into their lives. This whole story, with all of its ups and downs, was a great journey and so well written. -
I loved this story! Karel kinda brought tears to my eyes. I felt so bad for him. Loved the ending, and really hope u continue with the story.
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The Men Behind the Masks
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Men Behind the Masks
Omg, I absolutely loved the chapter! The beginning was crazy intense! Thank goodness it was only a dream, not that Dustin's dad doesn't totally deserve a bullet between the eyes! The end of the chapter was so sweet! So happy Dustin and Nate finally found love! They deserve some happiness in their lives. So, isn't having sex with ur professor against the rules in college?? Just thinking Luke and Dr Thompson deserve a little karma! Lol! -
Yes Noah, STAY!! He has nothing to be worried about. He's safe in Jordan's arms. One or both need to have a talk with Jenn to tell her the truth. I think the truth will free Jordan from Jenn's "asshole" list, and she'll be happy for her best friend
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Great chapter! I'm so glad they're finally on the same page. Normally I'm not a fan of a character giving in quite so quickly, but Jordan really proved his feelings to Noah. I agree this is gonna be a messy situation. Jenn will probably be furious, with good reason, but her love for Noah will win in the end. Sebastian, however, will most likely blow a gasket! I can't see that going well.
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I'm so glad Sebastian didn't rape Noah. At least Noah was able to get away. Sebastian is a dangerous person. Not only lying, but forcing himself on others. A sociopath if u ask me. Hope Sebastian gets a good dose of karma! I felt bad for both Noah and Jordan at the end of the chapter. Jordan maybe figured things out a little too late, and Noah just seems so broken. I never did get any romantic vibes between Jordan and Jenn. They seemed more like two good friends hanging out.
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So glad Noah came out to Jenn. I knew she wouldn't have a problem with his being gay. She just seems very open minded and accepting. I had to laugh when she said they could check out hot guys together. My female bff's and I do the same thing every time we go somewhere! Lol!! To be honest, I don't know what to think about Jordan. I get his being confused, but his running away from Noah, then jumping on a plane was a bit overdramatic if u ask me. I can understand Noah thinking Jordan was disgusted by what he saw. Not the best impression he gave there. I have to keep reminding myself that Jordan is confused about his feelings for Noah, otherwise I would think he was a total ass towards him.
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Honestly, I couldn't read the whole chapter. I couldn't read any more of Aaron and Nick shitting all over Donovan. True, he has his issues. However, I don't think Donovan dumping Shane for all the rotten, disgusting things he's said was the wrong thing to do. Anyone with an ounce of self respect would have told him to fuck off from the beginning. They're putting everything on the wrong person, and I don't think its right.
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Personally, I would have left anyway if I were Noah. Even though WE kno Jordan didn't say those things, Noah doesn't kno Jordan well enough to kno that he didn't say that. Also considering the way Jordan has been treating him, it would be believable. If u didn't kno about Jordan's confusion, he did come off as a big jerk.
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700 strikes against Shane
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in 700 strikes against Shane
So, Shane tells some stranger at a club that Donovan is trans with an STD, and DONOVAN is the one beating himself up???? Seriously, how much more disgusting can Shane get with his comments? I agree that this story has a cruel undertone, and can't imagine saying that about anyone, much less laughing it off as a joke. I wouldn't waste my friendship on Shane, much less anything else. -
Enough to Make a Difference
jaysalmn commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Enough to Make a Difference
I say WOW too! I was wondering how u were gonna swap them back! I loved it!! I knew by Mark's comment that the it was coming. I can't wait to see Alex's reaction to all the changes Carter made, and how Aron will feel about having the shallow, narcissistic Alex back. So many questions that I can't wait to get the answers too! Great chapter!! -
I agree that Donovan was pretty irritating. He kicks Shane to the curb, then tries enticing him? WTF?? Don't get me wrong, I'm not feeling sorry for Shane. He did the right thing turning him down. There's no explanation that could redeem Shane's behavior for me, although I now understand him running out that morning. Oh, and what the hell with the Daks?? All chummy and going out....and NO apologies????
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Loving the story so far! Noah and Jordan are so cute together. Their night out with Jenn sounded like a lot of fun. She's one of my faves. I'm also beyond intrigued as to what Sebastian's secret is! Does he have a thing for Noah? Maybe he has a thing for Jordan? Maybe he's a homophobe and has figured Noah out?? Omg, the next chapter can't come soon enough!!
