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Once I skipped past all of the stereo nonsense, I was at the end of the chapter.
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Have enjoyed the story so far. However, Seth really comes off as an obnoxious spoiled rich kid in this chapter. I don't find a teenager throwing around money an endearing quality. In fact, if I were Asher this would be a total turn off. I'm reading on, but my opinion of Seth has changed.
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Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 21 Bon Voyage and Welcome home...
Great chapter. I think I shed a few tears with the boys when Ben boarded his flight! That must have been so difficult. I hope Jamie doesn't take too long to share his thoughts and feelings with Ben, or do something stupid to mess it all up. I think they make a great couple. I like Jamie so much more since he's "grown up" -
The Light in the Darkness
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
That was such a great ending. Have to admit, I'm teary eyed at the fact that I won't get to read any more about the boys. I've been reading from the very beginning, so its sad to kno that I won't get any more glimpses into their lives. This whole story, with all of its ups and downs, was a great journey and so well written. -
I loved this story! Karel kinda brought tears to my eyes. I felt so bad for him. Loved the ending, and really hope u continue with the story.
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The Men Behind the Masks
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Men Behind the Masks
Omg, I absolutely loved the chapter! The beginning was crazy intense! Thank goodness it was only a dream, not that Dustin's dad doesn't totally deserve a bullet between the eyes! The end of the chapter was so sweet! So happy Dustin and Nate finally found love! They deserve some happiness in their lives. So, isn't having sex with ur professor against the rules in college?? Just thinking Luke and Dr Thompson deserve a little karma! Lol! -
Yes Noah, STAY!! He has nothing to be worried about. He's safe in Jordan's arms. One or both need to have a talk with Jenn to tell her the truth. I think the truth will free Jordan from Jenn's "asshole" list, and she'll be happy for her best friend
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Great chapter! I'm so glad they're finally on the same page. Normally I'm not a fan of a character giving in quite so quickly, but Jordan really proved his feelings to Noah. I agree this is gonna be a messy situation. Jenn will probably be furious, with good reason, but her love for Noah will win in the end. Sebastian, however, will most likely blow a gasket! I can't see that going well.
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I'm so glad Sebastian didn't rape Noah. At least Noah was able to get away. Sebastian is a dangerous person. Not only lying, but forcing himself on others. A sociopath if u ask me. Hope Sebastian gets a good dose of karma! I felt bad for both Noah and Jordan at the end of the chapter. Jordan maybe figured things out a little too late, and Noah just seems so broken. I never did get any romantic vibes between Jordan and Jenn. They seemed more like two good friends hanging out.
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So glad Noah came out to Jenn. I knew she wouldn't have a problem with his being gay. She just seems very open minded and accepting. I had to laugh when she said they could check out hot guys together. My female bff's and I do the same thing every time we go somewhere! Lol!! To be honest, I don't know what to think about Jordan. I get his being confused, but his running away from Noah, then jumping on a plane was a bit overdramatic if u ask me. I can understand Noah thinking Jordan was disgusted by what he saw. Not the best impression he gave there. I have to keep reminding myself that Jordan is confused about his feelings for Noah, otherwise I would think he was a total ass towards him.
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Honestly, I couldn't read the whole chapter. I couldn't read any more of Aaron and Nick shitting all over Donovan. True, he has his issues. However, I don't think Donovan dumping Shane for all the rotten, disgusting things he's said was the wrong thing to do. Anyone with an ounce of self respect would have told him to fuck off from the beginning. They're putting everything on the wrong person, and I don't think its right.
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Personally, I would have left anyway if I were Noah. Even though WE kno Jordan didn't say those things, Noah doesn't kno Jordan well enough to kno that he didn't say that. Also considering the way Jordan has been treating him, it would be believable. If u didn't kno about Jordan's confusion, he did come off as a big jerk.
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700 strikes against Shane
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in 700 strikes against Shane
So, Shane tells some stranger at a club that Donovan is trans with an STD, and DONOVAN is the one beating himself up???? Seriously, how much more disgusting can Shane get with his comments? I agree that this story has a cruel undertone, and can't imagine saying that about anyone, much less laughing it off as a joke. I wouldn't waste my friendship on Shane, much less anything else. -
Enough to Make a Difference
jaysalmn commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Enough to Make a Difference
I say WOW too! I was wondering how u were gonna swap them back! I loved it!! I knew by Mark's comment that the it was coming. I can't wait to see Alex's reaction to all the changes Carter made, and how Aron will feel about having the shallow, narcissistic Alex back. So many questions that I can't wait to get the answers too! Great chapter!! -
I agree that Donovan was pretty irritating. He kicks Shane to the curb, then tries enticing him? WTF?? Don't get me wrong, I'm not feeling sorry for Shane. He did the right thing turning him down. There's no explanation that could redeem Shane's behavior for me, although I now understand him running out that morning. Oh, and what the hell with the Daks?? All chummy and going out....and NO apologies????
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Loving the story so far! Noah and Jordan are so cute together. Their night out with Jenn sounded like a lot of fun. She's one of my faves. I'm also beyond intrigued as to what Sebastian's secret is! Does he have a thing for Noah? Maybe he has a thing for Jordan? Maybe he's a homophobe and has figured Noah out?? Omg, the next chapter can't come soon enough!!
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Great ending, although I'm sad we're there. Adam and Troy have been one of my favorite couples here on GA. Its great that they had so much love and support from Troy's parents. More parents need to be as loving and supportive as they are. Definitely a story I'll be reading again.
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The one regret that changed everything -Shane
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The one regret that changed everything -Shane
Excuses, excuses. That's about all Shane has to offer Donovan. As if Shane couldn't be any worse, he let someone he doesn't even know talk shit about someone he claims to care so much about... for a job! Pretty damn low if u ask me.... oh wait, using a disgusting "catchphrase" in response to said person talking shit about ur boyfriend instead of defending him is definitely lower! Normally I wouldn't understand why anyone would want to even have anything to do with a homophobic bully with an ugly personality, but considering Donovan's poor decision making skills and what I guess is a lack of self respect, I think I get it now. Doesn't make it right tho.- 33 comments
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I kno Loz has a lot of problems, but he needs to be stopped. I hope Daniel finds enough trust in Michael to tell him who's hurting him. Daniel doesn't deserve what Loz is doing to him.
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I definitely wouldn't want to be in Scott's shoes. I think choosing David would be more of a shallow choice. He really doesn't kno David other than how he looks and jacking off with him in the shower. David comes off as wanting more of a fuck buddy. Also, I think choosing David would crush Devin. Devin has gone through a lot, but I think it makes him more in tune with his emotions. He knows Scott from the conversations they've had and how Scott stood up for him with the bully. I think Devin looks past the whole "getting laid" subject, unlike David. I can't wait to see how this plays out!
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If it's a bad idea, why does it feel so good?
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in If it's a bad idea, why does it feel so good?
I feel the same. I've ended up friends with guys that I've hooked up with, but I've never hooked up with guys that I'm already friends with. For me, once we're friends I just can't look at them in a sexual way. -
If it's a bad idea, why does it feel so good?
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in If it's a bad idea, why does it feel so good?
To be honest, I don't see this as being any worse than Donovan wanting a relationship with a homophobic bully. Obviously Donovan's decision making skills are shitty at best. -
Loving the story! Noah and Jordan are great, and I absolutely love Jenn! Sebastian is a difficult read. He could go either way as to homophobic vs accepting. We'll have to watch that guy. Noah closing off when meeting Sebastian, I see his difficulty making friends. Can't wait to read more!
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I feel so bad for Devin and what he's going through. I'm glad David set Scott straight about bullying. Scott is still a work in progress, but its nice to see him making a conscious effort to change his ways. Maybe Devin has a crush on Scott??
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I wish I could do both the love and laugh emoji. I agree with u about Scott and his new circle of friends, and I thought that first line about all those porn movies being true was hilarious! I'm sure I even own a few! Lmao!
