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That was a tough chapter. So heartbreaking that Richie lost his first love in such a way. Wade had his issues, but I think he really loved Richie. He definitely needs some counseling, and his asshole of a sperm donor isn't helping. Seriously, grabbing ur injured child off the bed like he was nothing?? The fact that he's not in jail for abuse is just so frustrating and infuriating!! Why the hell are people trying to protect him? His bang buddy should have called the police the first time he laid his hands on Richie! That's so not right. Richie has 100% earned the right to all of the anger and bitterness he has. Personally, I would have taken Wade's suggestion of the baseball bat!
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His "father" has already hit him! What justification is there for that???
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If I were the aunt and uncle, I would get social services involved. Its obvious Dick has some serious control issues and the fact that he's already had balled up fists with his interactions with Richie tells me he may be an abusive person. Richie is his son who just lost his mother, not someone he's arresting. He left Richie's mother to play house with another family...how the hell does he expect Richie to react?? At 15, I think a judge would consider what Richie has to say about who he would rather live with. I have absolutely no respect for the narcissistic asshole, and feel so bad for Richie and his siblings.
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Wow! That was a powerful first chapter! I feel so bad for the kids for having lost their mother so young. I also feel bad for the kids for having a self centered asshole for a sperm donor. Can't call someone like him father or dad. I can absolutely 100% understand Richie's hatred towards Richard. Of course, Richard's shitty narcissistic attitude makes it so much easier to hate him.
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Great chapter! I do take mom's side as far as Harry goes though. Lol!
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Great chapter! Todd and Gary getting caught by Josh was hilarious! I'm glad Shaun feels guilty, however I wouldn't be forgiving of him. Maybe its because I'm old and bitter, LOL, but who wants a person in their life that would treat their "best friend" the way Shaun treated Gary? He may feel guilty, but he still did what he did.
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I like where u left off. Keeps everyone wondering what's coming up next!
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Ur absolutely right, this was a difficult chapter. So relieved that Daniel finally told Lewis what was happening with Loz. He really needed to tell an adult, and so glad he has Stephen and Lewis to love and support him now. Getting this out and having his dads and Michael to support him, maybe he can finally start the healing process.
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Well....depending on the story, I have been told opposite. Lmao!! Honestly, I just comment what I'm feeling when I read it. This is one of my favorites.
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What a great love story! I absolutely love Griffin and Benny, and have enjoyed their journey. This is one story I'll definitely be reading again.
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Totally hooked! I think Griffin and Benny are adorable! Looking forward to their journey!
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Great ending! I suppose it makes sense to have Carter forget the whole ordeal since his "case" was won and his wish for Aron to be happy was granted. This has been one of my favorite stories on GA, and can't wait to read the epilogue!
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I agree that he needs to get out and live life. I DON'T agree with hooking up, or whatever they did, with the woman that he cheated on his recently deceased wife with. What disrespect to Annie's memory. He should feel guilty. From a moral point of view, that's pretty low. I would have had more respect for him if he had picked up a stranger at a bar.
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So disappointed in Paul for sleeping with Cheryl. Seriously, I don't think Annie would be one bit happy that he was back to sleeping with the woman he cheated on her with. Kinda sleazy if u ask me.
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I feel so bad for Paul. Jared is a very good friend. I definitely DO NOT like Cheryl. Its bad enough that Paul cheated with her, but to have her hitting on him right after his wife died shows what low class trash she is.
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I'm sorry, but "um, I'm not sure if we should live together" is pretty much backing out. His "concerns" were excuses. At least Noah had the balls to tell his best friend, Jenn, that he was gay and eventually he was dating Jordan. I'm not letting Jordan off the hook that easily, and Jenn also made my shit list for sticking her nose in where it didn't belong. Noah had good reason to be angry and hurt.
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Honestly, I probably wouldn't have had as negative of a reaction if it weren't for the fact that Jordan was the one who pressured Noah relentlessly to take their relationship beyond just friends until he finally gave in, then out of nowhere backs out on moving in together. Whatever the reason is, yeah, that was a pussy move!
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So....all the progress they have made and Jordan is just gonna throw it all away! What a douche! I would send Jordan the dildo Jenn gave him with a note telling him to go fuck himself! Noah deserves better.
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So happy to have everyone back! The boys are always so entertaining. Link with his candy issues is so funny. I love he and Cody investigating and questioning the family. Levi and Brody are so adorable. I hope this bully Blu is talking about doesn't give any of the boys trouble.
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Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
I don't fault Jamie for meeting with Sam. I was surprised at what Sam tried to pull, so I probably wouldn't have been on guard either. What I do fault Jamie for, however, is letting the conversation go as far as it did. When he had to remind Sam that he was in love with Ben is when he should have shut the conversation down, got up and left. I'm happy that Jamie has matured enough to not go out and sleep around, because I have a feeling the old Jamie would have. Also happy he decided against looking up Josh, although I'm disappointed he even thought of it. -
Good chapter. Brandon is a total sleaze, and by the sound of it his brother isn't far off. Money doesn't buy class. The fact that Alex used Brandon to pay off his gambling debt doesn't say much as far as his character, either.
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Great chapter! So happy that Daniel finally has some stability in his life, not to mention two great guys that care for him. I think Stephen and Lewis are truly the kind of parents Daniel needs, loving, caring and non judgmental. I hope they're able to adopt him at some point. Its nice to see some positive things happening in Daniel's life.
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What a great story, and a beautiful ending! So happy that we will hear from them again.
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I think Asher and his family not having money at their disposal makes them more down to earth, more likeable, more realistic. Being an entitled snob isn't an endearing quality.
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Very hypocritical of Seth to refer to Bret Kavanagh as a spoiled brat after dropping 8 grand on a stereo and bragging about having Apple stock. I love Ash and his down to earth family. I hope he stays true to himself, and not start acting like Seth.
