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The Wild Night in the Country Cottage
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Wild Night in the Country Cottage
Great chapter!! I knew that pregnancy was right around the corner. Her reaction kinda proves she hasn't changed as much as Dustin had thought. I agree Dustin hasn't hit rock bottom yet, and that's very worrisome! Both Dustin and Nate deserve better than their current situations. -
As this was aimed towards me, I comment on the characters of the story. I think characters that are frustrating and complex shows that the writing is good. I don't, however, make comments about another reader. Rude.
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Not true. Its not that I haven't liked the story. Its just so extremely frustrating when someone like Shane walks through life blaming every hateful, homophobic, bigoted action on his father. This would be plausible if he were late teens or early twenties. We're talking about a guy in his mid-thirties that still can't form an opinion for himself. There has to come a time when he takes responsibility for his own actions, instead of always going to "but my father". Shane is at an age where his father isn't the problem anymore, he is.
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That was the lamest fucking excuse I've ever heard! Calling that sentence a "catchphrase" shows exactly how much of an asshole Shane really is! Donovan believing that line of bullshit makes him just as pathetic as Shane! I can't anymore with this story!
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I want to see what Shane's explanation is just as much as everyone else, but bottom line its gonna just be a bunch of excuses.
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If things didn't happen the way Daniel thinks they did, there would have been no reason for Skyler to apologize to him when he caught him with his boyfriend. A "best friend" doesn't do anything that could be misconstrued with being remotely sexual with his "best friend's" boyfriend, no matter what way it happened. Then to see the two together days later. I say that's a definite back stab! I don't trust Skyler AT ALL.
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Do you think there is an acceptable explanation for treating people like shit?? I don't.
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Yeah, you are kinda defending Shane. Its ok for Shane to shame and demean Donovan at every turn just because of how his father is. I think he should be held accountable for all of his actions, no matter what the reason. I'm sorry, but Donovan deserves someone better in his life than a person who makes him feel less than, boyfriends or even friends for that matter.
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Ok, I guess I'm the only one still hating Skyler! I don't kno how Daniel got through it, because I would have done some physical damage! I would have never agreed to pretend to be boyfriends with someone who had stabbed me in the back without any thought about it. Not so sure after this chapter.
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Great start!! Loving the story already. I'm totally team Daniel. Sometimes karma needs some help, and Skyler got exactly what he deserved. I would have been mad as hell, too. Like Daniel, I can hold a grudge too. Can totally understand him still hating Skyler 3 years later. Can't wait to see how this story plays out!
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I totally understand ur story, and sympathize with the guy u dated. I respect u for helping him through difficult times. That being said, ur situation happened in college. Unless Shane's father is paying his living expenses and giving him an allowance, Shane doesn't owe him shit. He's old enough to kno right from wrong as far as how to treat people. The fact that he shames feminine guys without flinching shows me that he has no concept on how to treat anyone. At his age, I'd say this is beyond being his father's fault. My father and I differed on many subjects, but no way in hell would I treat others like shit just to try to make him proud. Its bad enough that Shane has a shitty personality, but the fact that he can't think for himself is really pathetic. There is absolutely no reason Donovan should waste his time on that loser, or the other idiots for that matter. He deserves WAY better!
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I agree with Spikey that Donovan has some definite self esteem issues. I also agree that the fact that he still wants Shane in some way makes him pretty pathetic. The only thing I got out of this chapter is Shane is still an asshole, and his father is also an asshole. At this point, is there really a need to hear from Shane?? I think not.
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Have to say, I love the new Scott! Its amazing what love and support can do for a person.
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Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
I agree with u that Shane definitely has issues, but none of those are an excuse for shaming Donovan just because he's more on the effeminate side. Its sad that its even an issue in our community. As much as we want to be included and accepted, there are those in our own community that think its ok to shame others. Shane is one of those unfortunate people. The fact that he uses the term "fag" when referring to effeminate guys is disgusting. -
Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
I also don't believe any of the DAKS are redeemable, especially Drew! -
Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
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Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
I disagree. At this point I don't think there is anything Shane could do or say to redeem himself. Why would Donovan want to be with someone who seems to have so much disgust towards him as a person?? Donovan needs to set the bar way higher. He's kinda scraping the bottom of the barrel with Shane. He deserves better. Hopefully he realizes that.- 47 comments
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Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
Well, Donovan, that's what u get for trying to date an asshole! This coming from Shane is no surprise for me. First impressions mean everything to me, and the few cutesy chapters in between didn't waver me from the shitty first impression we got from him. I am, however, very disappointed in Drew. I thought he of all people would come to Donovan's defense, instead of being a asshole like Shane and the rest of the DAKS. If Donovan ever goes back to Shane, he's a damn fool! -
I'm happy Scott has Alex for support. He and Marie sound like very supportive, loving people. Hopefully Scott can redeem himself and take a more positive road than the last.
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Nope...still don't feel bad for Scott. Bobby was absolutely correct when he said Scott deserved it. Karma is a bitch! We'll see if he learned his lesson when he gets to Arkansas, or if he needs another big dose of karma.
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So happy to see a new chapter! I just love Ariel and Tyler as a couple. I could picture Tyler in his shiny shorts, tshirt and barefoot. Ariel is right, that is hot! Lol! I really think these two are meant for each other.
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I don't think I'll ever feel bad for him.
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Wow! Great chapter! A lot going on. Can't believe Carson is the boy's half brother! I hope they get Carson soon. They should have put both Penelope and Randolph to death right fron the courtroom! My heart breaks for Nan, but its still not right for her to take it out on the poor kids. On a positive note, I just knew Levi and Brody were gonna be more than friends. I think its sweet. I can't imagine that circus adding a St Bernard to the mix! Lol!! Maybe they can come up with an acceptable alternative for Cody. I can't even begin to imagine what's coming next!
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Yeah, I have a feeling he'll be getting that call pretty soon! Lol!
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As usual, grest chapter! Really love Adam and Troy. Always excited to see a new chapter. Good trick Adam and Mom played in Troy. He was a good sport about it. Congrats to Troy for passing his driver's test! I'm happy to see that they're getting back into a normal routine, now with some wheels!
