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Oh, what are we gonna do with Tobyn?! Frustrated, angry and conflicted and lashing out at poor Kellar. I think Kellar made a very valid point that maybe part of Tobyn's anger had to do with feeling like Elinor was replacing his father. I think part of it also is the fact that Denver ended up being her mate, then Tobyn looks at himself and Kellar and sees the similarities. I ahree that Tobyn is a very stubborn guy, but I have faith that Kellar will break through that wall and make Tobyn see that they are earth mates! Boy, Kellar has his work cut out for him! Lol!
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Brett saves the day! So happy Billy's dad thought of calling Brett and his mother to let them kno what happened! Was a tear jerker when he showed up and Billy let go with the tears. Sometimes that's all it takes is the right person to let it all out. Can't wait for the next part of the series!!
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What a wonderful, but sad story. Had a feeling Damien wasnt "real". He was correct when he told Matthew he'd see him again. Now they're connected forever.
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Great chapter! Gotta love these two! Just the way Kevin describes Parker coming through the door is entertainment all in itself! Lol!
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Poor Billy! Yeah, I kno something happening to his grandma was inevitable, but its still sad nonetheless. Brett's mother picked the wrong time to take him on vacation. Billy is just devastated and he'll really need Brett.
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That had to be one of the best make out chapters I've ever read! These two definitely have it bad for each other. Was cute when Parker asked him to call the next day instead of waiting. Kinda lets Kevin kno that Parker is more like him than he thinks. Again, great chapter!
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Omg, Kevin sooo reminds me of myself at that age! The hesitation to not be the first one to call, writing down what I might wanna say before I do call. I can totally identify with him on that! Lol! The kiss at the end was pretty intense! I'm glad Kevin did that!
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Hey there Comicality, really enjoyed the first three chapters! I think Kevin and Parker are so adorable! Can't wait to see how their relationship develops!
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Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
jaysalmn commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
Way to go Nick!!! Great chapter! Was so sweet that Nick made Peter promise that they would always be friends first. I enjoy these two so much. They have so much love to give, and are so worried about losing each other. I think how things played out was great, and they both confessed that they loved each other! Again, great chapter and looking forward to more!! -
Ok, so I have totally lost ALL respect for David. When he was telling Emily about him being a drunken asshole the night before, he lied right to her face when he said he didn't kno about the party. Rain had let it slip about the party at the bar after David's interview. The more we're getting into this story, the less I'm liking David.
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What a great chapter. It really warmed my heart to read about all the love and friendship these guys share. The hand holding and the hugs all around was just wonderful. The story about Mikey's dad's friend was a tear jerker. I think his parents have an idea just how close he and Jay are, otherwise I don't think the conversation would have taken place. I loved the swinging game, and that everyone participated. Its kinda nice to act like a kid again!
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Chapter 10 - After class practice
jaysalmn commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 10 - After class practice
A very deep chapter. I love how touchy feely they are, yet still afraid to say anything about their feelings. The end with th laying in the grass, Peter laying his head on Nick while they rest was so sweet. The sprinklers going off was a funny add! -
Chapter 9 - Will Nick come over?
jaysalmn commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Will Nick come over?
Another great chapter! I enjoyed their afternoon movie watching. U can have lots of intimacy without actually having sex, and Peter and Nick were definitely in that zone. -
Great chapter! Glad that Billy and his dad had that talk and Billy was able to get rid of some of what was weighing him down. Unfortunate how the whole thing started tho! Lol! I think I would have been mortified at that age being caught jacking off by either of my parents!
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Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
jaysalmn commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Omg, what are we gonna do with these two?! Lol! I think its sooo adorable how hard they're both trying to not let the other know about their feelings. I, too, am excited about the BIG MOMENT, but the lead up to it is great! -
Well, just came across ur story yesterday ahd have been loving it up until Parker found Nathan. As far as I'm concerned, if my partner needs more than me to keep him satisfied, he knows where the door is. Very disappointing that I had to read almost 37 chapters before I was turned off on the story.
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Enjoying the series so far. I have to take Aaron's side as far as his dad goes. I can identify with him as far as stubbornness and the ability to hold a grudge! Lol! I feel bad for Aaron because he has so much on his plate, and its not fair that his parents put that much on him. I'm happy he has Brett. He seems like the kind of boy that can lift anyone's spirits with his sense of humor. Looking forward to reading more!
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Another great series Gary! Normally not into the whole werewolf fantasy thing, but I totally love Keller and Tobyn! Ur doing a hreat job with this love story so far. I feel so bad for Keller, and totally understand him wanting to leave before he gets any more attached. I can also understand where Tobyn is coming from, although I don't understand why he would push away true love. They totally have that connection that Miss Cybil was talking about. I think feelings like that would be impossible for anyone to bury! Looking forward to reading more!
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Wow! Way to go Peter! Lol! Even though I'm not a fan of underage drinking, in this case I think it was probably the only way that they could do what they did,able to blame it on the alcohol if either regretted it the next day. Speaking of which, can't wait to see what happens in the morning! Still loving these two!
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Damn! Always interrupted by parents! Lol! Another enjoyable chapter. Pretty ballsy of Peter to suggest strip poker. Still think these two are so adorable. Always looking forward to new chapters!
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That, my friend, was a mean way to end the chapter! Lol! I can totally relate tho, as I was in a similar situation as a teen with one of my friends and we chickened out and never kissed. We hooked up later down the line, but that's another story. Lol! Still loving the story, and can't wait for their spark to turn into fireworks!
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Good, drama filled chapter! David seems like quite the self absorbed ass to me. Mike is working, not cheating. I don't understand what the hell David's problem is. I agree with skinnydragon, David knew that Mike was planning a surprise party for him. Cut him some slack. David strikes me as a whiny little bitch who throws a tantrum if he doesn't get the attention he wants. Hell, I'd work overtime too if that's what I had to deal with at home! Lol!
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It was one thing to get Eli involved, bit now ur talking guns? With all that has been going on with shootings lately, I'm surprised that u would go in that direction. I'm out.
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Enjoying the story so far. The banter between Blake and Sam is cute and fun. Have a feeling the build-up to the moment they both realize the other likes them is gonna be equally as fun. Looking forward to reading more!
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Epilogue - It's a Gift - Fight Song
jaysalmn commented on kuragari129's story chapter in Epilogue - It's a Gift - Fight Song
I read ur story on Nifty, and again on GA. I'm so happy u did an epilogue. It was great to have Nolan graduating, and to have he and Henry still together. Them singing the fight song brought tears to my eyes because of all Nolan went through and is still going through. Great story, great epilogue!
