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I have to agree with Lifesavergreen as far as the grammar goes. Sounds more British than Texan. However, I like Callum and Jake and their friends. They sound like a fun, supportive bunch.
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I hope to hell u give Kenny a HUGE dose of karma, because the fucker deserves it! He deserves way more than a black eye. I don't think Adrian was any better for not stopping it. If he likes Zac as much as he says, how could he just stand there and do nothing, no matter what his situation is. I agree with Timothy..where the hell WAS Marty when Zac needed him?? He needs his ass kicked too! Lol!! Seems the only ones he can reallt count on for support is Billy and Lonnie. Please start passing out some karma soon!
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Wow! What a chapter! A proposal AND a shooting!! Lol! Too bad Mike was shot, but happy that it did put to rest the possibility of Chet's grandparents ever getting custody. I agree with Eric that Chet is a smart, loving young man. So glad to see that he's adjusting to being in regular school and making friends. Looking forward to reading more!
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Am so excited about book 3! Boy, what a change in a few months. Billy definitely isn't the sweet, happy boy that we left in the last book. Kinda surprised that he and Brett haven't done more yet. Understand his thinking tho. Looks like this book is gonna be drama filled. Looking forward!!
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Love thos story so far. So happy that Eric and Mark found each other again, although not under the best circumstances. What can I say about Chet? I absolutely love him already! I hope they can come to a conclusion with Mike's inlaws quickly so we can get back to Mike and Eric's growing love, and watch Chet learn and evolve. Great read so far!
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Chapter 1 - Being pop is right, right?!
jaysalmn commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Being pop is right, right?!
Hey Luiz! I'm not so sure about this one. I really enjoy Peter In Highschool, but Chris and his friends seem like real asshole d-bags. Not sure I wanna read about characters I already can't stand. -
I, too, am very interested in what Rachel told Elise. Its really none of Elise's or Kenny's business, so pretty d-bag move on their part to treat Zac like shit! I like Valerie. I think she just might be the one to break through the wall Zac has up when it comes to Adrian. I liked the little peek we got into Adrian's life, too. He definitely has more to lose than Zac if he's found out. Hope Zac considers that.
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Another good chapter! Feel so bad for Julian getting kicked out for just being himself. Hopefully mom and her asshole husband get their karma for that. At least he still has Becky on his side. Also happy that Lance's parents made Julian feel so comfortable and so loved. I agree with Columbus Guy that hopefully they find out what's behind the whole marinet deal and get past it. I agree that doesn't fit with Lance's personality, and honestly that's the only thing I don't look forward to with every new chapter.
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I enjoyed the chapter. Adrian is by far my fave after the bathroom scene! He definitely knows Zac is into him, and I had to laugh at the way he "presented" himself! I still can't like Zac yet. Even though I understand what he must be going through, I think the way he's treating Adrian makes him look like a real ass. I feel that what happened with Rachel was some well deserved karma for Zac!
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Chapter 24 Facing Demons
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 24 Facing Demons
Great chapter! Was an interesting call with Karen. So sad tjat she just tosses aside anything or anyone that doesn't fit in with her perfect life. Its amazing how many so-called religious people are really like that. Wonder how long of a shelf life the twins will have? Was kinda surprised but happy Kellar got in touch with Warren. What a great twist that Warren and Adelin's colors match! As usual, can't wait to read more!! -
Yeah, I agree that he shouldn't go through with his plan. I can kinda understand what Zac is going through, but boy is he being a dick! Poor Adrian is getting treated like shit and he hasn't even done anything wrong. However, I can totally understand that he doesn't know who to talk to. I wouldn't either in his situation.
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Really liking the series. I'm enjoying how things are going with Lance and Julian. Becky was pretty cool. Good to kno he has his big sister looking out for him. So, what's the deal with the whipping? Don't really care for that part.
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Love the stories! Jesse and Marty are adorable together! I was kinda leary of them meetimg Greg and Raphie, but I like the way u handled it. Raphie holds a special place in my heart, too. I admit I was a little misty eyed after Raphie called Jesse after they had left. Absolutely loved this piece! Can't wait to read the next!
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I'm a big fan of ur series, and this chapter sure didn't disappoint! Denise and Jason's mother are on a whole other level of crazy! Lol! At least he has his father's support. Happy that Jason put everything he's been feeling out there. Now very interested in what's on that memory stick Shane gave him to watch! Can't wait to read more!
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Great chapter. So happy things worked out the way they did with Ed. For some reason I just knew Ed would be accepting. Thought it was kinda cute that Ed was so worried about Brian that he followed him! There's a true friend.
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Great chapter! I, for one, am sooo anti-Josh! I think he totally deserved what he got from Liam. For blaming instead of listening to anyone and listening to his freak boyfriend, Josh deserves to feel like shit! I sure as hell wouldn't be in line to forgive him! That being said, looking forward to see what happens next!
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Great chapter! They're so adorable! Can't wait to see what u have planned for these two in the next chapter!
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Enjoying the series so far. Even though I'm a car enthusiast, I'd like to start reading more about relationships and love rather than cruising and quarter mile times.
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What a wonderful, yet so sad story! I definitely cried at the end, and still have tears in my eyes as I write this review. Even though his time was short, I'm happy that Ren found Jake and found love.
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Great chapter! I agree that Toph probably didn't do as bad in the interview as he thinks. I like Teddy, and was cool that he came to Gary's birthday party. Gary's parents are wonderful, and I was also misty eyed when they gave Gary the painting. Maybe they knew how much it meant to them?? As always, looking forward to reading more!
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What a warm, wonderful chapter! So glad Tobyn and Kellar are finally on the same page! I think I held my breath through the whole time they were ridding Kellar of the poison! Lol! Can't wait to read more!!
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Hey Luiz! Great chapter! What a special gift Nick gave to Peter! He couldn't have given it to a better person. It was an emotional Thanksgiving, but in the best way!
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I liked this chapter. Its nice that Tyler at least has Ryan as a new friend. Unfortunately, still think that Elli is a total d-bag, and can't wait til Tyler lets him have it both barrels! What the hell kind of friend embarrasses someone in front of a bunch of strangers?? I don't think Elli can get much lower....although I have a feeling he's holding a shovel behind his back! Lol!
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Absolutely loved ur story! Roy and Randy are definitely heroes in my eyes! I'm happy things turned around for them, or I should say happy that they turned things around. A very inspirational story. Kudos!
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Great chapter! I'm really liking the "new" Jackson! I was surprised that he broke up with Ally, but it really needed to happen. I guess I see Ally and the other guys as part of the old, not likeable Jackson. Kind of the asshole crew! Lol! I'm happy that his mother found her heart and set up the tryout with the legit swim team. Definitely made me smile when out of everyone Jackson wants Luke to be there! Definitely looking forward to reading more!
