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Chapter 24 Facing Demons
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 24 Facing Demons
Great chapter! Was an interesting call with Karen. So sad tjat she just tosses aside anything or anyone that doesn't fit in with her perfect life. Its amazing how many so-called religious people are really like that. Wonder how long of a shelf life the twins will have? Was kinda surprised but happy Kellar got in touch with Warren. What a great twist that Warren and Adelin's colors match! As usual, can't wait to read more!! -
Yeah, I agree that he shouldn't go through with his plan. I can kinda understand what Zac is going through, but boy is he being a dick! Poor Adrian is getting treated like shit and he hasn't even done anything wrong. However, I can totally understand that he doesn't know who to talk to. I wouldn't either in his situation.
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Really liking the series. I'm enjoying how things are going with Lance and Julian. Becky was pretty cool. Good to kno he has his big sister looking out for him. So, what's the deal with the whipping? Don't really care for that part.
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Love the stories! Jesse and Marty are adorable together! I was kinda leary of them meetimg Greg and Raphie, but I like the way u handled it. Raphie holds a special place in my heart, too. I admit I was a little misty eyed after Raphie called Jesse after they had left. Absolutely loved this piece! Can't wait to read the next!
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I'm a big fan of ur series, and this chapter sure didn't disappoint! Denise and Jason's mother are on a whole other level of crazy! Lol! At least he has his father's support. Happy that Jason put everything he's been feeling out there. Now very interested in what's on that memory stick Shane gave him to watch! Can't wait to read more!
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Great chapter. So happy things worked out the way they did with Ed. For some reason I just knew Ed would be accepting. Thought it was kinda cute that Ed was so worried about Brian that he followed him! There's a true friend.
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Great chapter! I, for one, am sooo anti-Josh! I think he totally deserved what he got from Liam. For blaming instead of listening to anyone and listening to his freak boyfriend, Josh deserves to feel like shit! I sure as hell wouldn't be in line to forgive him! That being said, looking forward to see what happens next!
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Great chapter! They're so adorable! Can't wait to see what u have planned for these two in the next chapter!
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Enjoying the series so far. Even though I'm a car enthusiast, I'd like to start reading more about relationships and love rather than cruising and quarter mile times.
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What a wonderful, yet so sad story! I definitely cried at the end, and still have tears in my eyes as I write this review. Even though his time was short, I'm happy that Ren found Jake and found love.
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Great chapter! I agree that Toph probably didn't do as bad in the interview as he thinks. I like Teddy, and was cool that he came to Gary's birthday party. Gary's parents are wonderful, and I was also misty eyed when they gave Gary the painting. Maybe they knew how much it meant to them?? As always, looking forward to reading more!
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What a warm, wonderful chapter! So glad Tobyn and Kellar are finally on the same page! I think I held my breath through the whole time they were ridding Kellar of the poison! Lol! Can't wait to read more!!
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Hey Luiz! Great chapter! What a special gift Nick gave to Peter! He couldn't have given it to a better person. It was an emotional Thanksgiving, but in the best way!
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I liked this chapter. Its nice that Tyler at least has Ryan as a new friend. Unfortunately, still think that Elli is a total d-bag, and can't wait til Tyler lets him have it both barrels! What the hell kind of friend embarrasses someone in front of a bunch of strangers?? I don't think Elli can get much lower....although I have a feeling he's holding a shovel behind his back! Lol!
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Absolutely loved ur story! Roy and Randy are definitely heroes in my eyes! I'm happy things turned around for them, or I should say happy that they turned things around. A very inspirational story. Kudos!
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Great chapter! I'm really liking the "new" Jackson! I was surprised that he broke up with Ally, but it really needed to happen. I guess I see Ally and the other guys as part of the old, not likeable Jackson. Kind of the asshole crew! Lol! I'm happy that his mother found her heart and set up the tryout with the legit swim team. Definitely made me smile when out of everyone Jackson wants Luke to be there! Definitely looking forward to reading more!
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So far, I totally hate Elli! I think Tys deserves to beat him to a pulp! Tys has a lot more patience than I do, because I would totally be out of there in a heartbeat! Elli doesn't deserve Tys friendship.
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I feel so bad for Dustin. I wonder if his dad really physically abuses him. I hope he was telling the truth when he claimed to have misspoke. Unfortunately, if it brought him to tears what's going on must be something big. I guess I have more sympathy for Dustin, because he's emotional and confiding in Billy, instead of treating everyone like shit like Brett is doing. Will be interesting to see how bowling goes!
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What a fitting last sentence. Seems like everything in David's world is all about him. How Mike can deal with someone as needy and self centered as David is beyond me. I still say he deserves what happens when we get to the prologue part.
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Chapter 18 A Day of Reckoning
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 18 A Day of Reckoning
Wow! What a chapter! I agree with everyone else as far as not feeling sorry for Tobyn. I once thought it was because he was under so much pressure as far as the pack goes. I now realize Tobyn is a self centered ass. Even though they're earth mates, Kellar deserves better than a man-child that only cares about his own feelings. Good thing Kellar brought his truck. I would load up and haul ass out of there if I were him! -
Wow! I never saw that coming! All that work that Tys went through to get everything ready, and this is his reward?? So Elli lied when he said he would come back for Tys. I, for one, would be walking in the other direction if I were him!
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Great chapter! The way Peter described the other jocks was entertaining. There's not much that doesn't turn on a horny teenager! Lol! The locker room after was pretty hot! Still loving these two! Can't wait to read more!
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I feel bad for Jackson losing his scholarship, but I honestly think the fact that everything is no longer just being handed to him on a platter is humbling him and making him a more likeable person. I also like the fact that he's taking Luke's support instead of pushing him away. I always thought I would never like Jackson, but he's slowly breaking down that wall. Just so he continues his becoming a more respectful young man.
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Wow! What a change from the summer. I know Brett is going through something, but I'm surprised that he's being an asshole to Billy, of all people. Billy definitely doesn't deserve the treatment he's getting from Brett. Maybe Billy needs to take a break from Brett and spend some time with Dustin. I would feel bad if a friend was going through something, however I wouldn't stand there and just take beimg treated like shit. Looks like Cold Winter is gonna be drama filled. Can't wait to read more!
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Pretty good chapter overall. Its surprising that Mariah went from trying to hit Will to being his friend, yet Jeremy went from what seemed to be a nice guy to a major asshole. So far I've liked the series, but for me personally the whole sex slave thing going on between Will and Jeremy kind of turns me off on the story.
