Emi GS

@Comsie: First of all I am sorry. Its not like I am the one of them that are against you or harassing you. But I the one of your fans who fail to appreciate properly. I am sorry I never let you know through my likes that I read your stories. I am sorry I never reviewed you stories much. I am sorry I never told how good you write. I am sorry I have never been a good fan of you other than those silly messages I had send. I am sorry for being an invisible fan always. I am sorry I never had the gut to tell I am here on GA only because of your stories. I am sorry. I am really really sorry. When you texted me back, I felt so surprised and smile never left me that day. I am smiling like a was one of them fangirling dumbs. But I loved you a lot. Its so sad to hear that some are harassing you for their pleasures. Please don't shut off yourself and us from you. We love you Comsie. As person, as an author and mostly as a good friend. We just love you. And remember there are lots of people who are silently waiting for your stories. And they love you admire your work.

Thank you William. You are the first one to accept with the surprise and not the one to blame Elli. Interesting questions you had in mind, but sorry I can't answer them all. Yes Lisa is Jacob's sister and they resemble to each other, because they are twins. Ryan and Jacob!!!? Cathy and Ryan!!!? Or like someone said Elli and Jacob!!!? You have to wait up for the future chapters to know more. Thank you for all the compliments and I hope you'll stick with the story until then. ~Emi.

Such a wonderful and vivid images floating around my minds eye as I read this. I am afraid, have you just wrote this poem? In this moment? Cause I can feel that calmness of the winter sky standing right infront my window. This early!!!? Wonderful Poem. And definitely heart touching images.

I know it's early but I can't let anyone other than me to be the first one. Hey buddy this is for you Many More Happy Returns of the Day Cy!!!!! You are the Yin and You are the Yan. This is a small tribute from Your Friend and A biggest Fan.

Wow!!! It's really a surprise. Renee, thank you so much for the feature...

Okay. Talking of serious issues, instead of the insects, and the people in the name of insects, I am scared of death too. Its not like I am scared of death, but I am so scared to die alone. I have always feared being alone without any companion to live with. Yeah, parent and family will be there, but the aspect of a soul-mate is different from other relationships. I am the who told "Love is Everywhere", but without a partner the circle will never get complete. You may have seen this before, but I'd be glad if you read it again and understand how some poor soul felt about dieing alone... https://www.gayauthors.org/story/emi-gs/napowrimo-2016_MGK/10

So, does that means I have to say 'pitchforks' too...???

I have to agree with some of the fellas here who replied. A brief or detailed scene of sex is must when the situation or the story demands. As a reader and as a writer, I too not support a full novella of sexual content.And as for the age content, we write our stories as practical as we are experiencing a life. So sometimes some secrets looks great when they are kept as secrets. No need of detailed info, but just let it to the imagination of the reader. And sometimes they are necessary to give a brief talk.So the demand of the situations, is what we need to consider before we write something. :thumbup:Need example??? Hand experience hah, Drew...

It was quite experience, in a bad way, to go through this all. But I can say you might have seen some things that was a lesson for you or for others to tell. Like the humanity of your parents and aunt, etc.

:0 You don't have to be intelligent to tell about what you fear about. And you don't have to bring the Nazi issue as an example or haven't had to go for alien fiction. Its so simple. You can answer just like that. For example, take me. Even the little insects like cockroaches and one type of grasshoppers and mostly the spiders scares the shit out of me. Crazy monkeys, silent street dogs, wickedly smiling men, and so on and so on. You just name it, I'll find a situation happened in my life as an example, instead of alien abductions and birdman. A man is a man scared of a lot issues in a lot situations. Just give a little thought, and you'll find a lot of things, a lot of situations to be, and lot of explanations to do will get to you. All the best.

Happy Thanks giving to all Canada and Be Happy and Be Safe...

Its not like I consider labels. But labels are way funny. But some times give us some knowledge about with whom we are to hangout.

Thanks Buddy. :hugs:

I am still pretty young Fairy Tail...

They were good. As everybody else, I too connected with the second poem more. And the first one made me smile. Thanks for writing and sharing those beautiful poems with us...

Thanks...

Thanks for reminding me of that Val...

You know who is my first crush was!? A Girl. Yes, a girl. Its about almost ten years back, my brother, brother-in-law and I went for place of devotional aspect. We travelled through a train and after some time I saw her. She is beautiful and a full traditional girl. It was just some peeks at each other and some smiles at first. But after some time we just forgot all the people around and just looking at each other. Hahaha, I almost wanted to propose her. But we arrived at our destination and I tried to give her my mobile number through the train ticket, which utterly failed. And I just went my way. But we again met at the temple. And these are my feelings, below, I got when I had seen her in 'Langa & Voni' a traditional South Indian half saree. She just looks like an Angel. But I never get to see her after that and I never ever told her how I felt. And what a surprising news(for me) is I am active about my feeling for boys then too. A glimpse of her face My heart raced with the blood flow A small smile appears A wind blew across My core filled with aroma A blush generates A gleam of her eyes My soul gotten a purpose A life just fulfills

A Compliment!!!!??? Or A Comment!!!??? I don't know how to receive this. So I'll just put it at right there. Ikthifaaq hi sahii, pyaar ka zakm ki dard pyar tho nahii nibha payega. Jaise Nafrat, nafrat ko nahii mita payega. Thank you for sharing this beautiful, bitterly sounded, poem. Such a wonderful poem.

:wizard: Many Many Happy Returns of the Day Mr. M :wizard: Enjoy the Blissful Essence of the each moment of Your Life...

:wizard: Happy Happy Birth Day Steve. :wizard: Enjoy the Day well...

Tum Ho Tum oh khushboo ho phool kee jiss bageeche ka rakhwaala hun main. Mujhe thumhen gale lagaane dho aur raksha karne dho iss vyast duniya se. Tum oh aasmaanee sparsh ho jiske dvaaran main turant pighal jaatha hun. Mujhe tumhen pavitr se bandh ne dho aur chhipaane do iss dusht logon se. Tum oh aakarshit anubhooti ho jo mere dhil ki dhadaknon ko badaadhiya. Mujhe surakshit chhupaane dho tumhe aur bachaane dho iss bhrasht bechaare ruhon se. Tum oh dard bharaa sach ho pyaar ka

:worship: Physics and Chemistry!!! What next Law and Accountancy??? Just wonderful poems Parker. You are giving new trend of teaching perspectives. Bravo... ~Emi.

Alive— but away from a life. For your glee, absent from delight. Is there another torment than this— You are still here—yet still afar. I am not in despair of that —this society has changed. My life got wedded with you —lest you change thyself, dear. At night I prayed, in plea, I sought for my death. But, God spoke back —For sure, I'll grant thee death, but what of that one who sought the wish of thy long life—

My feeling after reading this ~ I was breathing heavily. And you can use your imagination what is happening with my rest of the body. Such a hot and fascinating second part of the chapter. Its felt intimidating and I thoroughly enjoyed every movement of it. And the first part is as natural as it should be of a mother and son interaction. Lovely and stunning chapter Stannie. ~Emi.