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What a sweet beginning! And I mean that in the best way. I was a little weepy at the end, which seems kind of silly as I type the words, but your story touched me. Thanks. Jeff
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This chapter had a couple of serious, thought-provoking moments, but mostly is was a lot of fun. Christina's comment to Sean about the gym and the potential hookups at the end were eyebrow raisers. I know "birds of a feather flock together," but does CJ know anyone who is average, plain, overweight, or skinny? Not that I'm bothered by the mental pictures I have of CJ and his friends. Anyway, I got my CJ fix for the week. Thanks a bunch, Carlos! Reading your stories always makes my day a little brighter. Jeff
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Today was a binge of the first three chapters. I like your characters. Jeff and Paul are more than your typical gay romance characters. I love Maria and the other supporting characters. Your dialogue sounds real and believable to me. Like Hobo I am curious to see if Tom will complicate things The romance is off to a good start. I am looking forward to more. Thanks. Jeff
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I like Jeff and Paul even more after this chapter. What fun to watch them interact with Maria! Thanks.
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Wow! A lot of ground covered in one chapter! I like these characters, but things are going pretty smoothly for a gay romance. I imagine drama and trauma to follow. I am on to chapter two to see what's next. Thanks for a good start. Jeff
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I liked the fun, sweet, and serious (all in one) talk between Shay and Nikki. I really like these characters and enjoyed "visiting" with them again. I'm on to chapter two, and I hope you have more adventures planned for these guys. Thanks. Jeff
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From realistic to fantasy to fantastical! This story is great fun! Can't wait for more reveals and more adventure! Lucky Duncan. Thanks. Jeff
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I like how Ian and Micheal's relationship is progressing. My guess is Ian will bring the drama and trauma to this relationship. My hope is that Micheal's stubbornness, persistence, and what I perceive as an understanding of Ian's nature will win in the end for an HEA. Thanks. Jeff
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Wow! Interesting characters and steamy sex! Nicely done. Micheal and Ian are both great. They seem like your typical gay romance characters, but there's something about both of them that doesn't quite fit the mold. I just found your story and binged to catch up. On to chapter three and can't wait for more! Thanks.
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Chapter 45 The Awakening
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 45 The Awakening
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Hot sex and a great ending moment between the boys! And Hrishi let's down his guard a bit. Thanks Sasha! I like Hoho's statement about two steps forward and one step back. It's one of my often used phrases, but I never thought of Marty and Hrishi in those terms. Spot on.
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Hot sex and some tenderness! I'm still rooting for these two to grow into a more positive relation. Thanks for another good chapter. Jeff
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Hooray for Duncan! I think it's past time some good came his way. Maybe that's what Mike will do. So if Mike is the good guy, are the dark eyes in Duncan's dream just a dream or something/someone evil? Keep writing. I am anxious for more. Thanks. Jeff
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So what is up with the enigma that is the newly returned Mike? Hopefully you will drop a few hints in the next chapter. Thanks. Jeff
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Chapter = great! Cliffhanger = not so great
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Thank you for a most enjoyable story. There were many tense and frustrating moments, but I was happy with the ending. Maybe you'll revisit Peter and Alan and the boys several years later in an epilogue? It would also be interesting to read more about Keidan, Steve, and Jacob. Just suggestions in case you wanted to write more but didn't have ideas.
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I am not a bit surprised that CJ and company have provided such a good support system for Ritchie. I feel a bit like Caesar: I am pleasantly surprised when CJ calls on his mature side. What great conversations with his brother. No doubt they will both have the other's back forever. More good stuff, Carlos! Thanks.
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Time for Phoenix to make amends with his father and get his help. I don't understand why Landon thinks the king will allow him to make Noah his catamite. Even if the king likes Landon, he can't want that for his son or his family's reputation. Good chapter! Write fast, please.
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I am glad Liam and Nathan had a chance to talk. Now with agreeing to start with friendship, romance can happen with less (or no?) stress. It was also nice to touch base with Corey. Kinda like catching up with an old friend. I assume he will be more in the story for now. I am going to miss Marty. Hopefully he'll be back for a visit, or to stay, before the story ends. Nicely written! Thanks. Jeff
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I just love these two! I'm glad it didn't take long for them to make up, and it doesn't appear to have hurt their relationship any.
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Another great chapter! I know the contract is void, but can we really assume Daven is safe? I am rooting for Kian to make a clean get away. Gotta have that for HEA. Thanks for more fun!
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I like your story, and I am curious to know more. I find it interesting in stories with twins they are often more different than alike, and I wonder how much that happens with twins in real life. I am also anxious to learn more about the mysterious Mike. Thanks for a good start. Jeff
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I really liked the sweet moment between Seth and David at the beginning of this chapter. So how long until Seth cools off enough to make up with Dorothy?
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