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Hope it is not an homage to Dallas and he wakes up from a dream!!!!
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This makes me want to visit the area. You're not sponsored by the Italian Tourist Board 🤭are you? A great read all the same though.
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Such a good story with very believable characters and a slow burn but gripping storyline and what a cliffhanger but oh so long to wait. Thanks for providing such an excellent. Well still a wedding to go and of course there is the question of Rob Bairstow.
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Realistic given one is emotionally screwed up and the other has socialisation issues. Just how they might have gone on is hard to say, but........... Ripe case for a sequel if TZ was ever a mind to do so. Held my attention as read the whole book in two days of commuting so thanks for making that bearable.
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5 to 6 seems as if there is something missing (a chapter?).
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Any epilogue swore I have seen an Oberon about the place.
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Yep Children’s Social Care and Child Protection ASAP. He might be Police but hitting your child is just not on. Richie get your revenge in as soon as.
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As a Social Worker albeit in Youth Justice I would be very worried about Dick. The problem would be he is Police and that influences decisions. Sorry to say Child Protection should be called.
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Brilliant, a deserved ending and good luck with your work. Eagerly await your next chapter. Thanks for a great read.
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Sat in bed when ill and read the whole story in one go, gripping and extremely enjoyable. Thanks so much
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Chapter 34 - New beginnings
croyde commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 34 - New beginnings
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Chapter 34 - New beginnings
croyde commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 34 - New beginnings
Still going strong and adding new characters in such an easy natural way. A great read when facing the commute to and from work. -
Just glad to see them all back. Eric’s life appears to be changing for the better, Alan and Adam seem to really care. Now he has the laptop he world should broaden and he can experience and explore new things.
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Great to see this is back, it's still an enjoyable read. Thanks.
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The Light in the Darkness
croyde commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
-Wow it was one heck of a journey, all great things come to an end. It’s one to re-read again at a later date. Thanks for the experience and pleasure. Enjoy the rest and hope to read you work again soon. -
An enjoyable read, thanks looking forward to what happens next.
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I find not a great deal to endear either to me. He is money grabbing as in I want the house. She is taking him for a ride and it’s fun to see how far it will go.
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The Men Behind the Masks
croyde commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Men Behind the Masks
Thank goodness as it about time for something to go right for Dustin, he's mending fences and seems to be slowly accepting help and support and it's great to see it's long term friend and Brett. Now for a hard part of making something of the new relationship, hope they make it? -
Sad to see the recent posting, a talented writer of wonderful stories.
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Condolences on your loss, take care of yourself, family and friends. Hope one day you might get to a point to write again.
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Well I have to agree that Brett and Dustin getting along was a promising first step. Billy and Dustin are best mates no matter and with Brett understanding they can help each other.
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Well let’s see how meeting his twin affects his mood?
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Is this story posted elsewhere or a revised version?
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At long last thank goodness. Now the fun really starts explaining to the families.
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One good story ends and one in the making starts. Waiting for the next chapter.
