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Great chapter great read.
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Good story but I think it's Toni that messed up and it's him that needs to work out his feelings and stop transferring them onto Marc. The next chapter hopefully sorts it out.
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Certainly raised many a question and look forward how it all gets untangled in the end. Some questions include where is Tracy living and where is he going to stay now he is back for a while. Are Jase and Callen married or in a relationship. More please and sooner than later.
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Brilliant chapter and I loved the humour. Just a shame such a long wait, but well worth it as the quality shows.
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Guess that Corey will be on his high horse and he will forget that he too has stuffed up on more than one occasion. Jason will have his work cut out trying to get through. Good read though guessed what could have happened.
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Chapter 9 - Shoot for the Stars
croyde commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Shoot for the Stars
Should we worry over the last line as it is inviting trouble. -
Agree with the problem idea that something bad is coming their way and very very soon.
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I think he will have to. Good story though.
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Good setting of the scene and I hope you don't fall into the trap of same old same old. I did enjoy the initial read and await more.
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Good start to this, will be interesting to see how you develop the story, hope it's not going to be too obvious. The first in the series was good hope this is as well. Well written keep up the good work.
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A good start, enjoyed the build up so far let's see how it goes next.
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Two great stories of yours finishing what a pity they have been great to read. I hope there is more to follow.
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I think it is Jason's previous partner who is now looking to reconnect as his fling ended and Jason is in their eyes available. In any case it a gripping story and now we wait for the next chapter.
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An enjoyable read with good characters and a decent plot. I like the link to an earlier story line and do i detect a follow on series. I hope so.Well done.
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Good story that is building nicely, am interested in where it goes.
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I began reading this story only a short time ago, but it was one of those annoying stories as it was so hard to stop reading and so the cause of a few late nights. I loved the whole thing and though seeing a main character die like that i still kept on going. This was one of the best reads i have had in a long time. Loved it.
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Chapter 26 The Easter Weekend Part 2
croyde commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 26 The Easter Weekend Part 2
No need to apologise as it's a part of the story. Guess the angst will be along soon. A good read and very enjoyable too. -
Excellent and moving story.
