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    Chapter 1

    So Colin could be an inverted snob instead, denying what his background is and looking down on others. Poor Charles does have a clue. Great read but Colin is to righteous for me. Let’s see how it develops.
  2. Glad to get this latest update. I do hope the wealth can be kept in check though and keep the fine balance of "normalcy" and opulence. Too much and poor Dane could become another spoilt brat in the making and that would be a shame. Love the story.
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    WSD Chapter 17

    Pessimist in me says Emm has died as it’s rare that the main guy gets his man.
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    The Pen

    So if you get more than 37 comments does that mean that we get a new chapter tomorrow and not wait a day. If so keep the comments going. Serious note the boys done good and the story get better and better was a joy to break the monotony of my commute home this evening.
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    One Like Ryder

    Teddy needs to be careful, emotions are running high and his dad still has no clue what is happening and when he does then sparks might fly. The way the characters are developing makes for a great read.
  6. Excellent
  7. Gets better and better. Thanks for not keeping us waiting. Roll on book 2.
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    BF Chapter 30

    Guess its got rid of Matthew as well, but lets see how it goes.
  9. Brittle as a bird excellent, well try this then and see. Would love a third book.
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    Chapter 18 - Adam

    just getting better and better.
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    BF Chapter 13

    Did we miss a chapter, last seen in a supermarket.
  12. This is chapter 4 surely ?
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    Chapter 4

    I think Hans could be very insightful and eventually a friend as Klaus sure has some problems. Still not liking that man.
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    Chapter 13

    Just a good story nothing more, nothing less. Enjoyed immensely and helped with the trek to and from work.
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    Chapter 3

    Hi son sprung to mind so how will the step dad take this. Trouble ahead I think.
  16. I think you could say the adoption is never likely to happen as any half decent Social Worker would pick up on the homophobia and as Daniel could fall into that group seeing what an excellent role model he has had and they share a room I think its safe to say that this idea is dead in the water. Don may of course want to keep this all under wraps as the ideathat his social standing could be threatened does leave him somewhat at a disadvantage. All in all a great read and it appears to get better and better, roll on chapter 80. Thanks
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    Brittle as a Bird

    A great story and well worth reading, no more details just find out for yourselves.
  18. Just so good. Thanks
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    FS Chapter 30

    Enjoyable story but rushed ending and still no firestorm as he returns to his home town. Do I guess a book two, I hope so.
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    FR Chapter 32

    These are stories that I love to read on the way home from work, but Wesley, Huon, Mitchell and Anton though all successful in life appear to have done it the cost of their own ability to have a friendship. Simon in case, a mate but treated more like the hired help, if they were really close wouldn't he want to stay. Why can't these successful people have the success and a relationship as well. I do not mean that there has to be sex scenes all over just the notion that they enjoy a relationship. Still i keep on reading all the same, it just an observation thats all.
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    Chapter Nine

    Tease as so short
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    Facing Reality

    sensitive subject handled with care thanks.
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    Chapter 2 - Ian

    Good side track, love the way it adds to the whole saga. Look forward to the next chapter, do the Coach's get a say soon a story lies there as well.
  24. Good chapter, Walter was brilliant at guiding Robbie into not making a rash decision, looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Cal

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