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I wonder if there would be mileage in Wesley and Mitchell. Maybe in book two all the same a good read. thanks
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yep remember this but it seemed to be then unfinished look forward to reading it again and please end it.
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Not sure if "like" is the right term to use for such a subject, but the writing skill is excellent. Josh and the others are in for a long haul to get Galen back to something like "normal", again not too sure if that's the right phrase. Look forward to the next chapter.
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Chapter 73 Brothers in Arms
croyde commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 73 Brothers in Arms
What chance a successful adoption, enough evidence to stop that stone cold. Robbie acted out of self preservation, wonder how the Mafia will react to this, Don' s number one concern? -
Building up a solid story, yes may be a help how they both got to this point but not just yet, the building of a relationship is the priority for now, though the parents do seem to have some insight. Look forward to the next chapter.
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I like the easy reading style, a good read for the overground train journey.
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Great chapter but run up the "Storm Warnings" flag as it could be a bumpy ride.
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It's Frontier
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Has this been previously published?
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Great chapter the changes made make all the difference, adds to the characters and more alive. Maybe drunk the bear will mellow out.
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Perfect ending?
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So worth the wait, followed the story since the start and despaired at such a wait for this chapter thinking it may never come. Glad it did even if Marjorie was being an od sour puss. A second book in the future would be great.
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Great series, part of me would love an epilogue but then that's the romantic in me. Hope there is a book 4 to come yep greedy.
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Great chapter, love this like the others and i enjoy the difference. Think that Riley would have fitted in well with Aiden, Jamie and Eli.
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Well Nate is making some sort of run, but to what? Would love longer chapters but not at the expense of quality.
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Would have to agree, your story has promise, like Ava alot she could be a great ally.
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May he rest in peace. He will forever live in your heart.
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I can say that I enjoy this version of the story even better than the first time around though I do wonder at times how great a change you may make. Even so a good story is a good story. Thanks.
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Getting better and better, the obvious link is to Carter but who knows, maybe Owen's too scared of the rivalry.
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Yes love it too, just hope it's not going to fall foul of the cliches.
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So far it's quite different from books one and two, interested in how you develop this story.
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Brandon Meets Prince Charming
croyde commented on mitchelll's story chapter in Brandon Meets Prince Charming
Enjoy the first time I read this and will look forward to the sequel. Still a good story. -
This is proving to be an enjoyable read and I looked forward to each new chapter.
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Me thinks his mind was elsewhere at that point and so now the fun will begin. Oh what a glorious mes it seems. Good read thanks.
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Chapter 25: A life worth living?
croyde commented on Stannie's story chapter in Chapter 25: A life worth living?
Welcome back. Looking forward to the chapters to come.
