JayT

Oh I'm so mad at you now.....that was a joke kinda cuz Atlantis was supposedly destroyed for mixing tech and magic...remember I was supposed to be the first to read a sexy scene between 2 certain characters???

was it a story about Atlantis???

The author I'm referring to is talented, he has some grammatical errors in his stories and I was editing for him for a while. I'm no longer editing because he is actually doing better. We still brainstorm all the time via text about his storylines... And if they read other of his stories, they would see he isn't a rainbows and unicorns guy. He isn't afraid to kill off a main character. He writes the words, the story goes where it wants. I'm the same way in my writing. The idea is mine, the words are mine, but the story writes itself, I simply transpose it to written word.

Thank you bub....That's what I was trying to say the whole time but I'm seeing red right now because you know how defensive I can get of friends

Actually I didn't really recognize the name of the reader...but they said the story was going down the drain and was not their cup of tea and they couldn't read anymore. That's insulting and rude. To say any author's work is going down the drain in a public place where anyone can see before the story is complete is like saying hey your ideas and thoughts suck. .This person did not need to say that in a chapter comment. Oh yeah BTW jp....love you bub

The message would be....You're awesome and I love you. How long did it take to find the message??? hehehe

Now, let me add something real fast. It's okay to leave a review of the completed story saying that it wasn't your thing or whatever. Just make sure that it's left as a review of the completed story. And give valid reasons as to why you didn't like it. Don't comment 39 chapters in that you're not going to continue reading

Would you rather a reader let you know that a story you are writing isn't going the way they like and will no longer be reading the story or not say anything at all. Personally, I would rather them not say anything. If they don't like the way my vision is going, don't continue to read it. But don't insult my vision by commenting that the story isn't going a way you like and they just wanted to let me know they would no longer be reading it. They can send me a personal message letting me know, but they don't need to let everyone know they won't be reading more. Sorry I'm ranting, but I noticed some comments on a friend's story stating that the way the story is going isn't their cup of tea and they will no longer be reading the story. That's insulting my friend's hard work and vision in front of everyone. And to what end? Why would you post in a comment that you won't be reading anymore. Just stop reading the story if you don't like it.. If you don't like a certain part of the story, leave a comment and let the author know hey I didn't like blah blah blah and leave it at that. Everyone doesn't need to know if you're not going to continue reading..

You would really give up on a story 39 chapters in just because it APPEARS something is going to be bad and not go the way you think it should??? Real life isn't rainbows and unicorns....a lot of people like to write stories that reflect real life. To say the story is going down the drain is insulting Ace's vision. Maybe you should wait and see what happens before you say something is going down the drain and you're not going to continue reading it. Why would you wait a few chapters before looking in for a welfare check? And what does the term welfare check even mean? For whose welfare are you checking? Thank you...I figure you've seen my comments about Velocity. I will defend Jamie's death any time any day. THat was the ONLY way it could've ended. Not all relationships are smooth sailing. There may be stormy seas out there and maybe a ship gets blown off course...but in the end they always end at their needed destination.

@Renee Stevens make sure you take out almost every "that" you have in your story, @Kitt HATES that hehehe @Carlos Hazday and I were talking a while ago and I told him I had thought about sending Kitt a document claiming to be a chapter to edit that had nothing but "that" repeated ....I would repeat it like 5,000 times just for you Kitt....I love y'all and y'all know it

Please, Teddy is a little spoiled brat who everyone feels sorry for. He was bully until the day at Mike's party. Not stopping the bullying is participating as far as I'm concerned.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! read my post above lol

Allow me to preamble this and state-nothing that follows is a hard fact as far as the story goes. I have knowledge of the direction, but I will not spoil that for y'all and would never do that to Ace (he's p art of my online family). Now allow me to ask a few questions... Okay did anyone around here read The Underground: Velocity??? do you think Ace is afraid to kill off a main character??? What if Ryder accidentally od's on his prescription meds, which he has already started abusing??? What if Teddy can't handle what Ryder is contemplating and gives up and ends things??? What if Brandon decides he liked the kiss and Ryder seduces him into bed and they end up together, while Teddy forgives Mike, who finally admits to being in love with him (evidence is all throughout the story) and they end up together??? Or what if Ryder starts on a downward spiral which leads him pushing literally everyone around him away??? Including the band, Teddy's uncle and parents, Liz and Blake, and Teddy himself....He then starts a solo career but keeps the name Messiah because he has become so delusional that he believes he is his fan's savior and the best way to save them is to follow his lead when he posts to social media a message which reads: "If you're like me and end up destroying everything around you that is beautiful because you're as effed up as I am, follow my lead. Don't let those around be destroyed because you're selfish." and the next day he is found hanging from a ceiling??? Are there really and truly HEA's in the real world??? Now, again let me say, nothing above is the direction the story is going, so don't speculate anything. I just wanted to point out that Ace isn't afraid to kill his main character and leave the other completely destroyed,.

humans baffle me period

oh I know.....trust me......we just encouraged each other in our brainstorming sessions....speaking of which. @Aceinthehole...we need one....I have some ideas I want to run past you and get some feedback...new story stuff but only thoughts right now...no big rush

Oh Ace...I love the way our minds work....some of the phrases in the chapter are perfectly written....like I so want to point out .....or when they say .....and then OMG the comments are exactly what we said they would be and the speculations....sooner or later your readers are going to realize that you met up with a sick and twisted editor at one point and we couldn't stop ourselves......or maybe that didn't happen and everything will work out in the end....cuz Teddy owns a white horse and a knight's armor right???

Hudson, please don't hate me, but I had to say something about this: Wasn't that the last book??? I mean this is only Chapter 3 and they're not doing porn anymore and they're still getting covered in the white stuff??? HA!!!!

And nobody is very surprised about the kiss with Brandon???? Oh and the line was "Marilyn Manson and his bassist would have oral sex on stage." hehehe Ewww ugly visual of Twiggy and Marilyn Manson doing it (neither are remotely attractive...well not in a conventional way)

NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and they smell better as men hehehe

We are some hateful evil mothereffers aren't we??? should I confess that we brainstormed this back in November/December??? You'll never guess what happens next

Think of like the difference between watching an Andrew Dice Clay movie vs watching The Birdcage.....one is definitely rated R and one is PG-13

I think if the words are few and far between it could be rated teen....now if every 5th sentence has an f bomb in it, it should probably be mature

In Samuel L Jackson's first "What's in your wallet" commercial he actually said What's in your goddamn wallet

It's also the practice of sidewise drilling when the oil and gas companies already have a drill set up but discover it's not in the correct spot and need drill 100+ feet to the right or left and use high pressure water to displace the earth between where the drill is and the pocket is so that they don't have to pay mineral rights to different people and pay to relocate the drill

I think they mean spelling s h 1 t and stuff like that