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  1. I've just read @Timothy M.'s recommendation and I wholeheartedly agree with him. It is a great and involving read. The writing draws you in and keeps you hooked, no matter that there's not much action, and only two main characters. Can't promise that I'm going to read the other recommendations 'cause I actually read very little ...
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    Chapter 1

    Thoroughly enjoyed this. I always like a protagonist with plenty going on in his head. Yes, nothing much happens until the conclusion, but that's fine, and the writing's so good that my interest didn't slacken at all.
  3. I've finally cottoned on to what @Timothy M. has been asking, as I noticed it myself earlier this evening. So not just him ... One total's 15, the other's 12.
  4. Eric got up out of his chair slowly. His arthritis was bad again because of a cold, damp, dreary November day, but he couldn't afford to have the heating on all the time. He shuffled into the kitchen to make a cup of tea to warm himself up. While he was waiting for the water to boil, he looked at the array of pill bottles and blister packs on the countertop. The pill organiser was empty, but that didn't mean very much. Had he taken his doses earlier? Yes … but his next lot needed getting re
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    Two's a couple

    Sharing a bed without sex is a new concept for Geoff. It's obvious, for him, the two are inseparable. We'll see how he gets on.
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    Two's a couple

    Yes, they are still making progress, and Tony, of course, hopes his suggestion will speed things up. Thanks, Puppi.
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    Two's a couple

    @droughtquake it's amazing how much you can glean from other people's behaviour. Just watching two people together can often tell you whether they're a couple or not. So Geoff can be excused for being his usual nervous self.
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    Two's a couple

    Hmm... Geoff and his mother ... Yes, the time is pretty much upon him, or already overdue. Thank you for your consistent support and appreciation for this story.
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    The Story

    Thank you! That it wasn't what you expected, echoes what a number of people have said. The fact that you enjoyed it nevertheless makes me happy.
  10. It had been a nerve-shredding week. Geoff was glad it was the weekend. What with the build-up to his job interview, and the news about Tony's ex, he was feeling both tired out and on edge. He was loading his car with what appeared to be every percussion instrument he possessed. Fortunately the weather was dry, although rain was forecast later. It was some kind of three-dimensional puzzle. Trying to fit everything in, and still be able to close all the car doors – never mind see anything use
  11. New year, but still the same old beguiling words, woven into tapestries that make me smile and wonder at your continuing skill and artistry.
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    Requiem

    Reading this story ten years after it was written, in no way diminishes its power. Yes, things have moved on, but politics, if anything, hasn't. Powerful, moving use of writing in the second person. Something I have yet to attempt. Thank you.
  13. C. James' Requiem is a powerful, moving product of the writer's art. Short, but packs a mighty punch.
  14. Happy Birthday, dugh! I hope you have a wonderful, headache-free day.
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    The Story

    @jfalkon I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The Green man is a north-european legend in origin. The trees aren't evil or violent, but nature spirits or gods aren't like that necessarily. Similarly perhaps, the people who follow them.
  16. I've still to see the light, Carlos ... , but I do recognise this statement. For me, it's not a cure for depression; more, a creative outlet which I never knew I wanted or needed. It gives me immense satisfaction - in the imagining, the writing, and the posting. I hope you have a wonderful, fulfilling 2018, continuing to create the story which has so many, dedicated fans (just not me ... yet ... ).
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    A stripey gift

    I thought I'd got off very lightly, but then the sheer openess of mine created its own difficulties ...
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    A stripey gift

    You had one of the presents I was very glad not to get. And you did an excellent job with it. Heartwarming, funny, entertaining. Thanks!
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    The Story

    I imagine that they'd tried to convert the uncle, and failed. As they assume James is like his uncle, I suppose they wrote him off. That you found it mesmerising, is a great compliment. Thank you!
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    The Story

    Yes, it's hardly a cosy Christmas tale. I love trees and it seemed appropriate to have them win sometimes. Thanks, Tim.
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    Forgiven

    Darkness, self-destruction, guilt, then absolution, redemption, and a second chance. What an amazing, gripping tale. That TV definitely was special.
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    Christmas Day

    What a wonderful package of Christmas feel good (as well as the minor matter of the ring ). Thank you!
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    The Story

    Thanks, Def. I like writing dark, I've discovered ... I'm very pleased it gripped you tight.
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    The Story

    Thank you! The collision of the two worlds is fascinating and fatal. 'The return of innocence'? Innocence isn't a word I'd associate with this story - for any of the participants, human or otherwise ...
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    The Story

    Thanks for reading and commenting, tim.
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