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Fascinating and brilliantly executed action and character development until the end, CJ and Owen were charming and intelligent and respectful. They loved the ballet and continued to meet ( network with) interesting people. I wonder what Kent George will be telling him later? I am glad CJ is going to be able to play golf with him. After the performance they handled the scared leading male dancer with kindness and respect. He was told to do whatever they wanted--ie have sex with them. I admired them and how understanding and considerate they were to the dancer. They improvised the next steps . Cj's handling and talk with the ambassador was wonderful and deftly done. He got his points across speaking clearly and in a normal tone. Dormogarov and his bad actions were identified and the Russian Ambassador knows they will be broadcast widely. I found two maters that concerned me. One, Dormogarov thought CJ and Owen were gay predators and would take advantage of the straight handsome male dancer who was expected to be naked and was told to be ready to have sex with them. I guess he was projecting his own nature onto them. Then two ,Cj, in my opinion, was brilliant in expressing his outrage to the ambassador and most of his talk with the spy but at the end he went beyond his training and diplomatic service role. He strongly and plainly told the Russian spy that what he did was very wrong and that he had told the Russian ambassador about his inappropriate and blatantly wrong behavior at his home and with the Russian dancer being offered to him and Owen. He spent private time reinforcing his displeasure. I think saying he might kill him was overboard. He is not a trained killer. The Russian spy might be. CJ could be inviting retaliation from this Russian spy or another one. The Russians' might get the wrong impression of CJ. He might show to them something new and they might now think he is not just a low level administrative operative but an undercover person worth following now even more. Of course, on the last point, I could be wrong, CJ might instead be judged to be an overly aggressive, young at his job and not aware of what happens in foreign countries, upset American I bet Ambassador Cox and Jimmy will be contacting CJ after he files his report.

Once again, you went above and beyond other writers do to help us better understand your thinking and your story. Thank you

Had to say it again--great sex episode--They are bonding in part through sex You have a gift. But, nuff said on this topic. I like guys connecting emotionally, intellectually and sexually. They are on the way to doing this, Sex seems the neediest and easiest for them now .

I think we both do not like soap operas. Actually, I think Drsawzall is complimenting our glorious, engaging writer by showing what she has written makes him and us think and ask questions. She even might answer some of them in a future chapter if it fits her plans. I know the real story will be written by the writer and our speculations are just that. One of the joys of this commenting format is that lets us honestly express ourselves unlike what happens on social media platforms

OK--I felt it important to add that the blow job scene was tender and very considerate and thrilling for Jason ( and likely Adam). It was totally new experience for him. His boundaries are being tested and he is willing.

I started reading this chapter with trepidation--thinking it would pick up the last story theme and convey what has happened to Elijah and Wayne and Sandi. Their stories will now fall into a future chapter. I am concerned about them and if they are being hurt and if their undercover mission had been found out. Maybe they were believed but a young pup was needed fast so Elijah had to be taken. Or, maybe they were found out and are now in deep trouble? This background chapter felt very reasonable and a building sequence. The guys had a romantic time and then professionally studied and installed surveillance cams on the suspected site. They did not detect anyone noticing them, but that is not a full assurance since a smart security effort would have had ideal surveillance places monitored with their own cams. The place that could be holding the pups is tightly secured with one way in and electronic locks. It will be a real challenge for the six to get inside or until we learn the full power of the Sentinels. The six are moving into the area. They are going to get more intel and then make a plan. They have one new understanding of their Sentinel nature. I hope they learn about more powers. Sebastian might be getting more updates on the hacking and other investigations. Playing with the bad guys finances could really upset and turn them against each other. When are we going to see the High Council members? BTW--that kind of sweet liquor is not my cup of tea and would rugged , masculine type wolves like it? I am getting online ads for peanut butter whiskey--Screwball. When I lived in Madison, Wisconsin the popular liquor was inexpensive brandy--like Korbels- and it was used in mixed drinks , instead of whiskey. So, I guess there are regional tastes.

“We only got a couple of months of this,” I said, rubbing my thumb across his index finger. “Then it will be summer and we can do whatever the fuck we want.” “You can, I can’t,” he said, offering me a small smile. “I have a life sentence.” Re-reading this quote suggest to me Luke and Jackson have different time limits. Jackson thinks they have months to get close and closer and maybe longer. Luke does not. Luke thinks he is stuck in town and with Cindy's full control. Maybe he sees Cindy forcing him into a loveless marriage to a proper church girl. As a former homeschooled individual he is not aware of college options. Conservative Christians often do not want their children to go to college where they would learn the "wrong" ideas. So for Luke what Jackson and he will do must happen carefully and privately soon and he can continue to enjoy only near term experiences with Jackson. He might have an idea of a safe place. Tonight Jackson left with what he was wearing--no blankets or lube. It will be up to Luke to be prepared again for intimate sex. If Murphy's Law does not prevail--If things can go wrong, they will--then tonight could be path breaking by doing all they want and intensely pleasurable and taking all the time they dare. Their sex drives will be ramped up and I bet they will want more passionate sex after tonight. Luke might think it is now or never.

Hey, when I lived in Korea, I was told cats are good for eating to treat nervous disorders and dogs were good for eating to help someone adapt to the heat. I did not eat either one.

The galatic still does not know much about Garjah's people and history. Still, Garjah and his people are so far apart in some things that matter from those who he is meeting. He does not like what he is seeing on earth. “Nature is preserved in all major cities and landmasses on my planet.” Garjah rolled one hand toward the window. “This level of industrial building does not happen.” I hope this is not a bad sign for a mutually agreed upon treaty. BTW, will Essell eventually get into trouble for leaving his ship? He is uncertain. I love how effective Bouncer is at relieving tension. If he is sentient, as Essell does not think so, he is holding it very well. I like that possibility.

They have to work on their intimacy and relationship issues. I think they will and still be scared., moody, romantic, hormonal teenagers with peer pressures. But, a critical matter deals with what lies ahead after high school. Jackson and Luke see different futures. Jackson commented: “We only got a couple of months of this,” I said, rubbing my thumb across his index finger. “Then it will be summer and we can do whatever the fuck we want.” “You can, I can’t,” he said, offering me a small smile. “I have a life sentence.” “It could be different,” I said, shaking my head." Cindy is Luke's warden for now. I hope they can both get free and live a much more normal life after high school. Henry will have to step in, I am sure.

What a painful passage in this chapter --worries of being seen when meeting at night, school pressures, a week of detention, promo nomination drama , evil Cindy, helpful Henry, Luke's indecision and finally kisses and more kisses and they agree to go out some place safe in a week and not around others Friday night So the chapter ends as they are driving to some place private Luke will chose since he is driving his truck. I hope Cindy or their friends do not see them driving away. Some encouraging signs--They began to hold hands and earlier they really passionately kissed. They have high expectations for this date. Somehow, I sense Luke might be prepared with a genral location or maybe have somethings to help them enjoy themselves. The truck's front seat is a bench so in a pinch they can lay down on it. I hope they have a great time and test their limits and grow closer. Jackson needs to get his head prepared for his swim practices and later competitions. He and Luke hopefully can avoid at least more near term problems. For the upcoming date, can they just enjoy the moment?

Puppy love and sweet dreams. Both boys are charming and happy and hopeful. Aric has saved Blake from living outside, it seems. Blake is head over heels for Aric. Now how will they proceed? Aric is not going to touch Aric. He still wants Blake's towel wrapped around his pillow. Something that touched Blake will be touching him. Will Blake take the initiative? I am going to enjoy their next innocent, natural impulses.

What a mess and what a disturbed, complicated, violent, broken up so far irredeemable, gang infested family. Brother killing brother (and young daughter). The pain and sicknesses were transferred to Tuct Side and the gang life ruined and is still ruining family lives. Antonio ,Tuct Side Saturn's gang leader, realized what he was finally."I am a destroyer. A thief. And there is no coming back." He was killed in an unsolved homicide, He knew it was coming." It’s time to take my place beside the Devil." With these letters we see how messed up and interrelated all the gang and Morterero family have been and is. Death and crime and violence are constants. Neil understands how dangerous his family is and how they pull people in. He seems to be setting out on a new course after his sex play and tapes (and possible government law enforcement witness help). He is honestly telling West to get away. West is over his head and unable to see who he is facing. His friends are not realizing how entrenched and powerful and deadly the Saturns are. Maybe, if West and Neil get together more and become realistic and fatalistic about the messes, they might see that they can only live in the moment and not worry about the future. They can live day to day and enjoy each other and what else motivates themselves. There are so many possibilities that I don't have a clue on a likely path and major upcoming events for the key players. But, I expect reading about all of them will be entertaining.

Ok--"an emotional slow burn"--I am now fully warned. It could be very painful to see them miss opportunities to learn and grow faster, but life can stink or simply doesn't follow a happy path at times. Plus, the high school crucible is tough and full of mood swings, various stages of physical and emotional maturity and fierce peer pressures. These two guys have lots of personal and family pressures pulling at then as you masterfully have shown. Some major things that seem to rule in high school do not matter latter. I will revise my assumptions about the two guys and still like seeing them as they progress according to your plan. Perhaps, the last chapter might be very revealing and unlock keys. I can see a value for one that happens when the leads have graduated and have a perspective--just saying--and its only my opinion.

Very intense--I could feel the tension. I liked how you took us along for the dangerous ride. It also felt like I was watching a horror movie. The imagery you created was that good. The Nichols pack is very dangerous for outsiders. They are not accepting and very suspicious as we saw. Sandi and Wayne and Elijah were prepared but were appropriately wary and somewhat out of sorts. The pack did not mess around. Elijah was kidnapped the first night. He is going to find out what is happening to the pups very soon. Can his disguise be kept and not noticed? Is he fully accepted as a pup or are there any doubts which caused his rapid abduction? His new friend, Zander, could be joining him when he has his first shift. Sebastian et al did not know what happened to the parents when their child is kidnapped. We are going to find out the next morning. Will Wayne and Sandi be consoled and helped by the local alpha and police ? Will Elijah be called by locals a runaway? Is there any doubt they are who they say they are ? Will they be kicked out or killed and buried? I hope there are observers nearby acting as safety valves in case serious trouble arises.

How did Kyle and Jasper get this far and reach the heights of their careers with all this baggage? Kyle is a self-destructive basket case who just had unprotective sex with a stranger and filmed it while totally drunk. He is hurting and cannot help himself. He is going to fall soon if things do not change. Xavier is a smart, handsome self-made man with great people and business skills who is achieving now more than he has expected. He forgot and moved beyond his high school mess. Now, Xavier learns that the two guys who hurt him and has not considered are back in his life: one in a new business relationship and the other as a pained, crying out " brother." Both miss him. Kyle wants him back while he is still acting as a sex crazed man whore who gets in the news often. Jasper needs him to earn his big promotion and cannot mess anything up with Xavier. He could be friends with Xavier--like Cheryl is with him. Xavier is not in love with either man. Apparently, they each want a different type of relationship and they will approach it differently; I assume. It will be very interesting to find out how Xavier handles them both.

Good to learn your thoughts--I am very glad to hear you are having fun and gearing up to write more. I have very high expectations for your writing. I think you will continue to entertain, add lots of drama and sexual tension and hope things will turn out eventually for the better. You really are undertaking an impressive, lengthy story that is very worthwhile.

In the first chapter you said you had written so far 150K words. Now you have published about 1/4th of the way towards 150K. I guess the total is not known yet. I have enjoyed what you have written so far. Now after re-reading your chapters and finding out your output level, I am beginning to better comprehend you have lots, lots more in store for us--wow I am blown away by your diligence and accomplishment. This story must have many ups and downs and cliffhangers and surprises and romantic dates with Nic looking very feminine and dressed like it and wonderful sex and sometimes reckless sex in many positions and locations --a real mix up. I am looking forward to your future creative output.

Wow--things are mixed up. Pepin is on earth and a earth youth is in the kingdom. Kai's mother is suspicious of their disappearance and the French boy, Pepin --LOL. Kai and Tani are on shaky ground. Sebastian is getting worse and people are noticing. He has just be shocked to find an earth youth in front of him and now used a miraculous, wonderfully capable smart phone to reach Kai and Milo. I hope they or at least Milo can find a way to get to Sebastian and away from Sebastian's mother. Milo has to find a way to save Sebastian. What is going to happen to Pepin? What will the whole group of kids do since it looks like the way to the kingdom is going to be found? Will the parents accompany any kids to the kingdom, too.

Jake once turned lose with Nic could be a hungry sexual demon. He cannot get excited or turned on by Meg. Nic will thrill him by being a talented lover. It's what he does--lol. Both could be in heaven. I can see both healing each other. Nic can find a guy who will be genuine, considerate and not threatening. He will be the exact opposite of the person who traumatized him. I hope that is enough balm for NIc. Jake will have his sexuality redefined and happy for a while. Jake will need Nic's help if he is willing, when things go crazy and their sexual life is discovered. High school will be even more cruel.

Jake is boxed in with Meg and does not like it. He does not think he can keep the charade of their arrangement for 10 months. Meg is the only one who likes it. Jake is in dangerous territory. He is drawn to Nic. He likes his art. But Nic cannot see they have anything in common beyond an impulsive thank you blow job. He now knows Jake will not assault him and is interested in him. Nic offered to give him another blow job or even more. Jake did not accept the offer but stayed with him and was not repulsed. Nic laid the ground for more play when they found the right time or place and left lots for Jake to think about. Why did he offer to turn Jake's world upside down,,,," He was offering for the same reason he did anything: because he wanted to. Jake’s cock had felt good in his hand, his mouth, and in the past week he had occasionally wondered what else Jake could do with it. From what he’d heard, there were a slew of girls out there that had no complaints. “It’s what I do,” he said with a shrug. “Think about it.” If they do anything sexually more and the wrong people find out it will be explosive and destructive to his Jake's image. Meg probably will be very nasty. Luke will be dismayed. He knows Nic needs help and could hurt innocent jake who does not know the heavy baggage Nic carries. The fire is lit. Nic will probably once again have to take the initiative if he is willing. Jake could be putty in his hands.

Well--some progress is being made and Alec really extended himself. He apologized to Finn and was very courageous. I cannot believe Alec agreed to go to the party. The newly purpled haired, "alternative prince" as River calls him is growing up and stretching. River said they can always leave if things do not work out. I am worried that while Finn is a genuinely nice guy and really likes Alec, his friends are not as nice and not as accepting. If River has figured out that Alec has a bro-crush and more on Finn (who seems oblivious) then he could be attacked as a fag at the party and be so torn up to run away. It feels like Alec is mismatched and could be hurt. Will Finn help him heal if he is hurt and will they as a result grow closer ? I am hoping for my pessimism about a possible party blow-up is wrong and Alec and Finn can become friendlier over time. I know something breaks them apart in high school. Will it happen at the party or later?

Now we understand Jack's resolve. He truly wants to solve this case and help his partner become more effective and healthy. He thought of her as a daughter. This is the type of case that will burn them out and depress them even more. Jack really has a disaster of a marriage and has a broken son. His partner has no outside life and could be on the path to burn out. I wonder if the case is turning up any productive clues. I note the statement...."There was very little appreciation in their line of work. Case in point, David Andrews, who chose every opportunity he had to belittle their efforts and strategies. But Jack understood. He even admired it." It sounds like they haven't found any useful information on who on drove the car or why their car was hit. David is upset and unhappy. Will something turn up soon from their renewed efforts.? Will they get a lucky break?

Good for Karl. He is bombarded with new things and a difficult reading assignment. He won't give up and will continue his training. The asshat will not deter him. Karl has made a friend, possibly two, who will look out for him. I bet he will make others. He went through the universal leveling of recruits and new soldiers/airmen--a proper military haircut. Karl is becoming standardized. His Viking totem, Mirmir, is staying with him and reappeared after he saw what he looked liked with the new haircut. Will he eventually see Mirmir as a person to give him strength and courage or something less helpful? He is thinking and acting in the here and now. I note he is not looking back to the Hopkins or George--yet. The background data collection sounded normal. It might be needed if he is sent to Denmark as part of a RAF ground force. Not a bad start after a rough introduction by a cruel punk. Now he is going to be pushed hard. I assume a tough physical training regimen will begin soon.

Hope Neil finds ways to get many more blow jobs and more from Flower boy. He is partly de-flowered now and is addicted to Neil.