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Good activities leading up to the event and infiltration. Sebastian and crew have been careful and detailed and realistic. They may have found the site for the new bad guys' efforts outside Europe. Sebastian is thorough enough to have three spots checked and not just going with one I like how they are using burner phones and keeping the exact plans and assumptions close and that the six are moving near the danger zone. Caleb mentioned having a few loosely affiliated wolf shifters in the area. These are possibly the ones who could be recruited by the bad guys as Sebastian worried about. The family, especially Elijah, going into the Idaho pack are at greatest risk. The lure of a pup for kidnapping should be too powerful to overcome any worries--besides the parents can be killed later. Now the people have to begin their roles and hope they get the breaks. They will have to be flexible and resilient when things go sideways--It will... I bet it will be fun and very interesting to read what happens next--lots of surprises . There’s also the famous and very true line: “no battle plan ever survives the first encounter with the enemy,” attributed to Field Marshal Helmuth Carl Bernard von Moltke who headed the German forces at the starts of WWI.

Love all the family interaction and how the daughter acts so charmingly and well-adjusted and very happy. Cj is mortal after all and does get hit. Doesn't Tiger Balm convey a strong odor since it has menthol and camphor ? I am surprised Northman didn't bring it up when CJ was back in his office. I agree with Owen that CJ should bring up the potential Oscar nomination seemingly inadvertently to the ambassador--he can find a good time to do it--and she is swift enough to say he has to go and it would be great publicity for the embassy. Let Northman fume with this end run. As for the performance review, Northman handled it all wrong . "Northman’s review focused on criticizing his attitude and dedication instead of factual issues." Anything subjective like attitude is a dead giveaway for a personality conflict. The higher up performance review comments probably noting how CJ has gone out of his way to build bridges and gotten good publicity for the embassy will sound like Northman is not clued in and not seeing the bigger picture. In the civilian world and probably government environment this type of subjective review without facts or measurable items would be subject to real problems and a lawsuit if career or promotion ending. You have to have facts to back up your evaluation. The one that Northman added was disputed by CJ and he took it out--Or did he? Any disagreement would allow CJ to add a written response that would hurt Northman. Northman will not give up and probably cite the issue when verbally talking with others --say in DC now or later. When looking to hire or promote someone, a person would call previous bosses and ask if there is anything not on the record--promising anonymity. Northman might hope to kill a good move for CJ at some point. He is not going to be a supporter and is a sad, small man. The phone situation confuses me a bit. Are CJ and Owen expect to spy or check their quarters out for bugs now? Are they expected to be targeted and surveilled? They will need more to protect their place. Spys can hear inside a room by using window vibrations or the microphone on a computer and can see through a computer cam without it being seen as turned on. They might not want to take their upgraded phones to the Russian Embassy and get single use burner phones. Guys going into hostile and potentially espionage situations act like I have read some of the people going into China now on business or the Olympics. They take burner phones with just a few phone numbers and throw them away when they leave ( any added spyware is also thrown away).

Loved the Forrest Gump-like reference to a box of chocolates and life. George is coming down from the euphoric high of being the forbidden lover of the Tsar of all the Russia's. He could have no higher ranked lover and won him after sometimes fearful periods. His was trusted and loved in the exciting times as the new ruler took command. Now, it was over and felt like a vacation romance or ship experience that could never be repeated. He painfully recognizes things are over. He had been there before with past ship lovers. Both George and the Tsar had to move on with the lives and responsibilities. I regret the Tsar did not give George a gift or award to remind George of their experiences and his contributions. George has only memories which he will analyze over and over and can only be placed back in perspective if George is placed in a new role that focuses his attention. If Mark was leading us to his next direction ( hopefully not throwing us a curve ball), then it will soon be Captain Viscount George Granger of the Calliope. George will be busy and can rebuild his focus on sea going naval matters until he has to face his home efforts, court life and a very upset Lord St Vincent who may hold a ship command away from him for months. Will he be thanked for his role inbuilding peace of will his connection be hidden? BTW--I leave the pacing of this story to Mark and his abilities.

I hope Essell moved the dime and got the meeting on track. The galatic bureaucrats were being small minded and rule bound as usual everywhere. I don't think, like Essell's mother, that the galatic bureaucrats are his betters and should be in control and obeyed. If Bouncer is sentient , then what does that really mean? If he is not what he seems , why didn't the being tell Essell who he really is? Is Bouncer expected to talk to Essell at some point?

A love ahead to be explored--what could go wrong in his room? He will find out what someone on the naughty list will do with him and will he like it? Those bad boys are worrisome.

What a gentle opening, Aric is in lust that might turn into love. Wanting to smell his sweats after his dream boy wore them was precious and heart tugging sweet. I hope they get intimate. Who will make the first move? What is Blake's real story ?

I would watch that vid as a subscriber and want to see how far they will progress in additional vids. They are getting hotter as they go. Blow jobs are awesome. I agree they are going to get more subscribers. They should keep reading what the viewers say and react, They liked the blond boy. What else will they like? Will they get kinky requests ? Will they do them or sell things to viewers?

I think Elsabeth is going to crack at some point. She needs to really grieve and cry and cry in order to move on. She is hiding her feelings and can't see what is happening to David. She won't call him on his destructive behavior.

Wow--married strangers. They did not know each other anymore and did not seem to love each other. Sex meant nothing. Each handled the baby's death differently--David withdrew and worked and felt guilty and drank and hurt himself. Is he a suicide risk now? Elisabeth ignored what happened and acted as if she had not been pregnant. She kept up her normal routine and helped partly to replace David's efforts at his firm. When will they realize they were targeted by the driver of the car? When will we know why this crash happened? Or will the reasons remain undisclosed? What will the reports from the police do to David and Elisabeth? If little progress is made finding the driver and car, will they seek to find out more and get in the way of the police?

BTW--loved the sex scene. What a great description of a wonderful surprise. They found a way to do more than kiss and can make love again in Luke's truck or any other vehicle. Desire can win over two horny guys unwillingness to risk public disclosure and act in an uncomfortable place. The compromises needed to make this love making work might drive them to make love in a bed soon. I have seen a vid on Xhamster when the two guys fuck in the backseat with the front seats forward and they laid along the back seat with the bottom raising his legs up and back over his head and holding them in place behind the knees as his ass raised up. The top guy arched over the bottom and thrusted into him. If Luke ever did this, he could pull out again and shoot sperm over Jackson's face or try to his partially into his mouth. Swallowing sperm seems a nice next step. They want to explore each other's sexuality in detail.

I bet he can survive with luck. He can shift into looking like one or more of the bad guys as needed when he is captured as a pup and needs to escape or help the others in his new family. Heck, he can turn into a small creature or bird. The Idaho pack will not expect a shapeshifter.

You said-----" Personally, I think Nic has the most issues to work through, which makes him both a joy and frustrating to write. Jake is slowly coming to terms about his sexuality, but recognizing that it's more than sex is probably where they'll both falter. " Well, I am looking forward to them having great, honest mind blowing sex over and over and even taking risks when they get so excited with each other. To get to this plateau, they will have to experiment, talk honestly and listen to each other. Maybe Jake will get a tattoo ! I can see Jake want to be a healer and his goodness ( not naivete) might surprise and comfort Nic ( I hope). Nic has too much pain. He might learn to trust Jake who doesn't have a cruel bone in his body. I hope they do not falter. As you said--they can complete each other--A faltering relationship will be so painful to read about.

It seems they got the minimum they needed from Germany. The intensive data mining and hacking is the US can now start in earnest. The two main High Council suspects were least forthcoming so lucky breaks will be needed to find out more or until they arrive in the US. I would still not rule out any other members. Their business connections could help in this pup stealing--like providing medical staffing or a possible hidden side illegal porno filming with underworld ties, etc. The plan for a fake family with pups is brilliant and risky, very risky. Sandi, as a diner cook, might even properly have a pup shifter that smells like food,-Italian food. Elijah is very courageous to agree to play the pup that can be kidnapped. The elements of the family option are coming into place nicely. Now the full plan is going to be decided. I was taken by your theme that the wolf-shifters needed to return home and regain their sense of place to be fully calm and pleased.. They are truly wedded to their land. Montana is so wide open with vistas that reach almost forever and few cities. I was also intrigued by the idea that Sebastian with consultation might offer a new home for the Maryland pack who seemed to be fitting in very well. I am looking forward to the plan that is developed. The bad guys won't give up easily and much more is still needed to be learned to be able to even think of taking them on and defeating them.

I assume the author has added the chapters. The story is also posted on AwesomeDude.com and is farther along.

Thank you for your background history. You are writing a fascinating story with a breathtaking , optimistic, maybe fastastical at points, view of science. JJ is a resilient unconquerable soul.

So terrible and poignant, well written and realistic. Elisabeth is grieving rightfully so. The path forward with be rocky and painful. She and David are on new ground. Their characters are going to be tested. The reminders from the baby nursery are jarring. What will they do and how will they now relate to each other?

I am expecting their sex drives to be soon off the charts as they get together after that picture and have a wonderful time. How they handle it will be challenge. Jackson might even surf the internet to find out what gay guys do to enjoy each other and get new ideas. Luke cannot look things up since Cindy has him restricted, If Cindy keeps them apart again, they might get reckless and arrange mutual bathroom breaks during class and exchange blow jobs in a restroom stall. The possibilities are endless for two very horny, willing guys.

Jackson showed real maturity taking more responsibility for the food fight. He is growing up even with his puppy like separation anxiety. What a great, affirming mother Jackson stated.....“Do you like Luke?” I asked and when she finished off her second piece of chicken and slid her plate away from herself, still looking at the half a chicken still left over. “I love Luke,” she answered smiling. “I didn’t see him in our lives like this, but I have always loved him.” You have created her showing a welcoming embrace of Jackson and his choice. I loved the ending. Luke proved he was asking to see him--with a ready cock. A word of caution, they are so new to this and might exchange hot pics and vids and other things knowing they will want jack off material and expecting Cindy to cock block them again for some time. Their explicit stuff might be seen by someone they don't want to see it later and cause a huge firestorm. Am I going to read the next chapter starting out with another of your hot, romantic, graphic sex scenes--maybe with Jackson bringing the lube ? I hope so. It's been three weeks plus since they have had wonderful, fulfilling sex. Both should be so horny and needing each other to satisfy their newly discovered and addicting desires. They have more to try--like 69's- than making love, too. Is Jackson going to put a duffle bag in his car trunk with blankets, pillows, lube and baby wipes in it? He can be ready for more fun in a car/truck or any place and when it is warm and have a sexual extravaganza in Luke's field BTW--I know you won't give away the plot--I just added a vote for one very compelling chapter start

What a fun time in school and the faculty-except witch Cindy-took things in stride. I can't wait to see the full second yearbook and the reaction. I am glad the boys made love again and no matter how confined the truck back seat was, they had a blast and took risks about discovery. Jackson taking his pants , underwear , socks and shoes off was so vulnerable. It did not matter! He wanted Luke inside him and wanted no impediment.. They needed their orgasms. Luke was ready again. I think they spent the night spending their time productively. Now, they have their sexual efforts down smoothly, I think they can continue making love over and over as long as they have free time and a place. Is it time for Jackson to top and Luke to feel the supreme joy of being a bottom and Jackson inside him full, warm and thrusting powerfully.

All that drama was worth it--they were able finally to say they loved each other and meant it--Beautiful !

A painful separation--George is gone from his mind and good riddance Karl will have good memories of the Hopkins that can support him in training and battle ahead. Unfortunately, Karl met the Danish unit bully right away and the tension will likely resume later. The pressures ahead will take most minds off disputes. A sore guy will probably not have allies to help him when he needs it. I wonder if the bully will last through training. Karl is such a good person that people should gravitate towards him and like him

God, I am glad I picked up this story recently. I would have been tormented by the delays. This is too good,

Jackson is living in the moment as he said. He can only move ahead and be himself now as the coach told him. I hope that is good enough and he can focus and live with multiple priorities. I bet he will be able best to really improve his swimming skills and results/ Cindy is a witch and won't change. I hope she eventually gets her just rewards. I see Jackson is good swimmer, but I am perplexed that he sees swimming as his way out of the small town. His parents should be able to support him in college. With more flexibility in college options he might be able to attend one with Luke. The next two months left in the school year should be eventful, intense and surprising and hopefully not soul destroying.

Awesome ending----It has all been building to this after so many blocks and too much angst---a great equal partner, sincere, considerate, loving intense sex scene that shows as Luke says he knows he now he is gay and Jackson said he is already was. No denying any gay orientation now. When others think of them as a couple in the deepest sense, it now is confirmed. I was surprised Luke was the aggressor but someone had to be to get their relationship onto another level. Like others, I expected Luke to be the bottom and jackson to be pushing him. They both treated each other with respect and listened. Luke was not ready to be fucked but he brought the lube so he wanted to fuck Jackson who readily agreed. I am glad to learn that roles will reverse later. They both need to explore their full sexual feelings. They have been too bottled up. Jackson now has a good reason to swim well in future practices

Perfect ending--when things get tough again, Jackson will know who he loves and who loves him.