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Chapter 12 Confessions and Commandments
KayDeeMac commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 12 Confessions and Commandments
YES YES YES !! My boys are finally letting the walls down and opening up to one another. These truthful admissions will bring them closer. Boone is a thoughtful fella and understands some of the uncertainties Coy is questioning in himself in these unchartered waters. (no pun intended !) Boone will be very mindful of how to help Coy navigate them. Great chapter and very well written Gary - Thank you!! -
Chapter 2 - Patrol Leader
KayDeeMac commented on Lenny Bruce's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Patrol Leader
Wow! You have succeeded in allowing me to actually feel the emotional rollercoaster here! Excellent work! Thank you. -
Because You Can Feel Me
KayDeeMac commented on David R. Ryan's story chapter in Because You Can Feel Me
WOW!! Powerful emotions that seem all too true and real!! Thank you for sharing, David. -
Another very gripping chapter Laura. I believe I would have reacted just like Rhys - total disbelief! I don't think Toby can solve this dilemma but perhaps Billy can with him confirming knowledge of conversations between Toby and Mason!! Maybe showing him some of the video's he has of Mason conversing with Toby - BUT - I could be wrong!! Great stuff - thank you! David
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Well I stumbled upon this remarkable story a few days ago and have binge-read all 27 chapters! It has been a wonderful, all though sometimes frustrating, ride and I am soooo happy the boys finally got back together! Great stuff John - thank you!! David
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Chapter 11 River of Dreams
KayDeeMac commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 River of Dreams
One of my favorite lines..."and yet there were moments he saw something behind the man’s eyes he couldn’t get a fix on". Me thinks Coy is having a cathartic moment realizing his true inner feelings for Boone especially after their near-death experience. But I am a hopeless romantic so I'll just have to wait and see where Gary takes us!! Great story Gary and the dialogue is spot-on! Thank you. David -
Yes Hunter is doing the right thing and I believe his Mother actually appreciates his efforts. Now - Dad is a totally different story!! He will be a very lonely old man!!! As always, Great Writing Geoff. Thank you very much!!
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WOW! Great chapter Laura! I loved the line from Po to Levine ..... "it would be fatso" -- classic! I believe Billy just overheard Mason talking to Toby a few times and put 2and2 together and I concur, Billy is probably FBI or some other law enforcement agency! And now - "gloved hands" ??? Great suspense Laura, thank you!
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This is my second reading and it was just as good - if not better - than my first read. I wasn't doing much commenting back then but now I want to say this to you Parker, you have an amazing talent that can transport readers to believing they are an actual participant of the scenario! I actually felt the pain - the sorrow - the helplessness - the fearfulness - the hopefulness - and yes, the fulfillment! A to Z is easily one of my all time favorite stories. Bravo to you Parker and Thank You!!
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OK - Rita is very good at sidestepping her financial obligations! Red flags should be going up in Ricks mind! Also a lot of intrigue about the relationship of Helena and Gus! Great story Parker - thank you!
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Chapter 10 Praises for Blue
KayDeeMac commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Praises for Blue
Yep - a very good chapter with a few "telling" points for both our boys. I'm optimistically seeing a tighter bond developing from the near death experience they both felt! Those kinds of experiences have a way of making everyone take a step back and reconsider what really matters and what is important in life!! Great great writing Gary!! Thanks, David. -
My second reading and I believe I enjoyed it more this time than the first time! Thank you Ron!!
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A wonderfully powerful story that touched my heart and brought me to tears. I have witnessed over the years an increasing tolerance but bigotry and hate are still too prevalent. A great read Ronyx! Thank you!!! David
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A Little Mouse In A Too Big House
KayDeeMac commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Little Mouse In A Too Big House
I believe I know what Mason saw in the pendant - but I'm not going to be the spoiler here! Fantastic intrigue with numerous crumbs of clues! Cachondeo was very astute in picking up on the "stain" on the cue stick, I really am enjoying this story Laura - thank you so much!! David -
Definitely more like edging!!! Great stuff Laura - thank you! David
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As always - excellent Carlos! Thank you !
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Well I respectively have to disagree. For Sam to simply barge into Colt's space and pretend nothing was wrong was insensitive and egotistical on his part. He had devastated their long term friendship and was being self-serving to suppose things were OK!
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Chapter 9 Faith and Angels
KayDeeMac commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Faith and Angels
All great comments! Escape is the key word for me as well during these crazy crazy days. I am thankful for excellent writers like you Gary that transport my mind to other, less stressful, venues. Great chapter, the dialect is perfect and I am soooooo happy the boys are back together. -
Well what can I add to all these wonderful comments - you'll probably remember my rant about separating the boys in the first place but now I can say you brought me back to some sense of peace. The last two chapters were so well written that I found myself actually holding my breath and then sighing with relief! You have a wonderful ability to craft a visual so strong, so realistic and so believable that it becomes heart wrenching and then again heart warming. Great work Gary - thank you!! David
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Rita certainly does have a long reach! I believe she lives far beyond her means and has a drinking problem as well! Rick and Gus do seem to have some chemistry but Rick is a country boy with self worth issues - probably exacerbated by his overbearing father! But I am loving this story and excited to see the developing relationship between Gus and Rick! Great stuff Parker - thank you!!
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Definitely raising some red flags about Rita's exact intensions and her solvency! I absolutely loved the conversation with Isolde!!!
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I have to agree this was a beautifully written chapter allowing us to see more of Rick inner turmoil and insecurities. I too want to hug him!!
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In saying Rick cannot please his overbearing, nosy and demanding father is an understatement! You've done well Parker - I already dislike "good old Dad"!!
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What can I say - other than this has been one of the most enjoyable and entertaining stories I have ever read.. Thank you so very much! Your writing talent is incredible!
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I feel Owe is having closure to his old life but - with reconnecting to the people that mean the most to him, now surrounding him, - he is feeling a new beginning that is fulfilling and perfect! What a great story!
