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Cadet Third Class • VI
KayDeeMac commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • VI
Anytime you want to post a bonus chapter it's absolutely fine with me. Thanks Carlos!- 44 comments
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Cadet Third Class • IV
KayDeeMac commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Once again Carlos you have brightened my day - hell - brightened my week! The strong family ties depicted here are a rarity in todays fast-paced life styles, let alone adding homophobic behaviors. Even though this is fiction, I can still smile and truly find it refreshing! Thank you very much!! David Plus: Don't listen to Mann! I don't want anyone erased!! -
YES YES YES!!! Friends to the rescue. I can't believe what a "monster" Mayson has turn out to be!! I hope the boys do some damage on him before the authorities get involved!! This will get complicated because the school could be considered complicit!
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Well it truly is a difficult read but, reading your comments Frank, it seems this is very personal to you! I'll stick with you for awhile longer! Just hope Coach or Dale (or perhaps Vickie) breaks through to rescue Hunter soon!!
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Michael is a real Bast***! This is not going to be pretty!
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Yes it has captured my interest as well! He's has tracked down his man who now has saved his life twice - so where do we go from here??
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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
KayDeeMac commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
What a wonderful story and a great ending. Hopefully their will be future glances at their home and happiness! I want to quote a line you wrote that really got my attention in the previous chapter: "“I think you’re right that the Lord made some of us this way… I can feel that in my heart. I think he made people to love people, men or women, and he don’t pay no mind to which we choose.” -
This story has definitely got my attention. Jonathan is persistent and I'm going to give him the benefit of doubt for the time being. He does seem genuine in his concern for Jason's self-destructive behavior! His parents should be horse-whipped and who knows what went on in Scotland!
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A wonderful ending Wayne - thank you so much for a truly heart-wrenching but loving story! You are a master at writing great stories and I have the utmost respect for your talent! AGAIN - THANK YOU!! David
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WTF INDEED!!! I'm with Carlos in that some idiots don't like what color they see and create immeasurable harm and often terrible outcomes and consequences! I'll bring the ants Carlos !!
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Another great chapter. I concur, we have lost a great deal of family virtues because of corporate greed and the constant pressure to succeed in a materialistic environment. Somehow our priorities have been misguided! Wonderful story!!
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A beautiful chapter indeed! Yes - there could be repercussions but it was still a heartfelt sharing of feelings and an awareness of both Pietro and Sam as well as Ethan's appreciation of how well the entire delicate situation was handled! WE all need more openness to appreciate each other!! Great job drsawzall!!
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Chapter 1: New Orleans
KayDeeMac commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 1: New Orleans
Very good and HOT start! I'm also hooked!! Thank you Gabriel. -
Rape is rape regardless of the victim and Mayson should suffer to the fullest extent of the law! Maybe a "rusty" wire with that knife! Also I too caught the subtle hint about Olivia's discomfort! Interesting developments.
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Mayson is a real jerk - he talks a lot about sexual encounters when he himself is sitting in the dorm room alone! And I believe Vicky is just a friend or perhaps a relative of Dale. Enjoying the story Frank, thank you!
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I too enjoyed this chapter. Several ways the plot can go including the obnoxious roommate causing trouble! Great beginning for your first story here at Gay Authors. Welcome !!
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A baseball cliffy !?! I am sure Zoltan will not be happy with these turn of events and will probably attempt to curtail meetings between Gus and Rick! Plus I have the distinct feeling Rita and Heinrick are "on deck" waiting to pounce!
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Yes I thought about the cast but more importantly Gus not being a swimmer! This will be tricky for Rick but I have faith in him. After all "love conquers all"! Wonderful chapter and a very descriptive painting of their budding relationship. Thanks Parker!
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Yes I concur with everyone - I believe Rita reeled Heinrich in hook, line and pocketbook! Just how much remains to be seen. More than likely - she no longer has an unpaid balance on the books for plumbing services!! I'm so glad Rick and Gus have connected. I too believe Jerry would be supportive of their relationship! Great, great story Parker! Thank you!
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I also cheered "YES" !!! It was a wonderful journey to get to that kiss Parker. Great writing! Thank you!
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Yes I have to agree - the "apron" brought moisture to me as well! Very well written Wayne - thank you so much!
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Wow! Just WOW!! A turning point indeed for a lot of characters, especially Greg. Excellent writing Wayne - I think my BP went up several points reading this chapter.
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I have to agree with Tim - I'm glad you got your "words" back! Wordsmanship, I'll repeat again, is your forte Wayne! While I'm depressed with this turn of events - I'm confident you will steer us into a better outcome!! Absolutely love this story - thank you!!
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HI Wayne - I'm back in the saddle after a small hiatus! Great chapter with Lee becoming more trusting and Harlan being the ever present force that he presents to everyone! Love the story and your wordsmanship! ( I had to steal that comment from earlier - its perfect!!)
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This chapter had so many uplifting moments I could actually feel the chemistry building between not only Jared and Marta but with Gus an Rick also. Much was revealed by Gus concerning his life, career and present arrangements with the very overbearing and exploiting Takacs duo! I foresee and explosion happening soon - maybe two!! Gus with the Takacs' and Rick with Heinrich! Your excellent descriptions of the music and instruments at the music festival were educational and perfect! I was involved in music from grade school through high school but stopped once entering college. I appreciated your two links at the end of the chapter - especially the Two Part Invention No. 8 arranged for Nyckelharpa !! Thank you so much Parker for a wonderful read, David.
