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KayDeeMac

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    Chapter 13

    Off to University we go. This should be good! I just hope St. George is an accepting environment!
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    Chapter 10

    It's a lot to ask but somehow I think Scott will find a way to accomplish a means to both ends. I'm still not sure his Mom is totally on board with the gay relationship. I hope I'm wrong!
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    Chapter 8

    So so true and thanks goodness for the poets! I absolutely love this story!! Thank you CLJobe!
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    Chapter 6

    I will second the suggestion from CLJobe that Kev should publish his book. It just might help! I too had a BITTER divorce that eventually drove an insurmountable wedge between me and my son! I am still trying to bridge that gap! Never give up Kev!! I have recently had a phone conversation with my son!!!
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    Chapter 5

    If only ALL parents were so accepting it would be a far far better world!! Good story. I am enjoying their budding relationship. Thanks!
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    Chapter 8

    Things are looking up for everyone! I'm happy Hunter has a strong supportive network of friends - it can make a world of difference in cases like this. You dropped a slight hint that Mayson was not taking his meds so this could be some of the reason for his actions BUT he's still a POS in my book!! His parents and home life seems to suck as well!! Great chapter Frank - thanks!!
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    Chapter 7

    Another very enjoyable chapter and also great character development. While I have to agree that Mayson is a POS you are weaving numerous thoughts and assumptions that create great intrigue! It looks like the "cat is out of the bag" regarding Hunter's admiration of Dale and it seems he too shares the same feelings! Great stuff Frank! Thank you.
  8. Well we all agree "The Wing" it shall be! Another great chapter Carlos. Thank you!
  9. Well Well Well - the comments are almost as interesting, entertaining and enjoyable as the story!! I'm guessing we will have to wait for the next book to really learn the details of the experience in Mexico. But, one comment Carlos wrote sticks in my head, when Richie arrived in Florida and picked up Liebe, someone said - I'm not sure but I think in was Bret - who was surprised she allowed Richie (anyone) to pick her up!! As always Carlos, a great chapter. Thank you!
  10. Another great chapter. I thoroughly enjoy your occasional barbs at the messes the Trump administration created!!
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    Dissonance

    Yes "Listen to the Perfect" is very appropriate here. I also kind of hope Willy is the sucker Rita suckered!! It would be poetic justice to see both fail miserably personally and financially.
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    Contrapunto

    I believe the calm before the storm has expired and Hurricane Rita is becoming a category 5 disaster!! Seriously, between Heinrich, Magda and Zoltan's controlling personalities - our boys cannot get a break!! Lots of intrigue Parker! Thank you.
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    Apassionata

    A truly well written chapter! And I agree, you mastered writing dialogue that painted vivid pictures. Thanks Parker - GREAT stuff!!
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    Virtuoso

    A very powerful chapter that brought emotions to the front and made them real! We sometimes live in a bubble and refuse to believe -or at least do not wish to recognize- true agony elsewhere to our fellow human beings!! An awareness that more of us should take to heart. Thank you Parker!!
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    VII.

    So now everyone knows!! Let's hope there is no trouble in paradise!
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    V.

    Another great chapter. The electricity between Lauti and Valen is tangible and I feel their emotions. It will be interesting to see and hear what Momma has to say to Lauti!! Great stuff gor-mu - thank you!!
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    IV.

    Wonderful chapter!! Simply making a small statement to Nahu covering their budding relationship was taken the wrong way by Valentin. Perhaps he was making assumptions about what Lauti thought of his home environment. Valentin seemed embarrassed and unwilling to let Lauti see his home! I'm glad Laudi made the bold move to show his true feelings in public.
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    III.

    I have to agree with Talo and his accurate descriptions of your excellent writing! You "paint" a very visual and believable picture! Thank you so much.
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    II.

    Excellent chapter. That was an unexpected turn of events with Valentin wanting a kiss from Lauti. Hostility to cover ones attraction is not uncommon especially in same-sex scenarios. Thanks gor-mu.
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    I.

    Great beginning! I know I'm late in starting but I am excited to continue reading this story! It has really gotten my attention. An all-too-often occurrence in parents divorcing - they're not even considering what negative consequences this brings to the child (children) ! My heart goes out to both Lautaro and Noah! Please keep writing Gor mu !!
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    Chapter 6

    Yes, I too will agree with the assumption Mayson was in the car wreck! Pity!! Olivia, showing her true homophobic self, probably just lost all these friends and rightfully so! .....attracted to pans?? Classic! For your first story Frank - I must say you are doing remarkably well. You have truly captured my interest and I am looking forward to more-more-more. Thank you!
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    Chet

    I love this story! It's sooo close to my situation of so many years ago! A marriage that never should have happened, but a beautiful son who came from that union! Now 40 years later - still married to my beloved husband! Thank you for a great read r-eric! David
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    Have Faith in Me

    It's a "first time" read for me as well and I am really enjoying the ride. Jason can be a handful but it seems Jon is very determined and in this for the long haul! Great stuff Frank - thanks!!
  24. Interesting beginning to a budding friendship with benefits!!
  25. Wow! Very powerful and extremely heart-wrenching. Probably many of us have had to endure similar situations especially with parents. It's never easy and thankfully, Jaime had friends and loving relatives for a support network. My heart goes out to you fsell! This seems to be VERY personal! Thank you for sharing such a personal and moving experience. David
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